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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: azira07

Yup Super Excited Yaar And Raglak separation going to be Interesting right ??
lol

Yyps u know Na pyar mein judai wala twist toh banta h na
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Awesome update!!!
The realization of RagLak was superb.
Plzz update soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Part 7 is so sweet.
Lovely moments between RagLak.😳
Teaser is vry interesting. Plzz update soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Humnava

Part 7 is so sweet.

Lovely moments between RagLak.😳
Teaser is vry interesting. Plzz update soon.😊

Thanks and sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Nice update... loved the RagLak moments...uff!! Laksh kabse itna responsible ho gya...

N teaser is interesting n full of suspense...
I think the gift is...DIVORCE PAPERS!?!?!?!????

Please please please... ho sake toh update now...ha ha...
pr don't separate RagLak for long...
Show mein toh mushkil se RagLak scenes milte hain...tumhare ff ka hi sahara hai..😆

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Nice update... loved the RagLak moments...uff!! Laksh kabse itna responsible ho gya...

N teaser is interesting n full of suspense...
I think the gift is...DIVORCE PAPERS!?!?!?!????

Please please please... ho sake toh update now...ha ha...
pr don't separate RagLak for long...
Show mein toh mushkil se RagLak scenes milte hain...tumhare ff ka hi sahara hai..😆

Update soon

Thanks .. Aur jab tak lux Ji ko akal nahi ayegi tab tak ragu ji kese sudhregi

Also u r smart with the guesses

I won't separate ragya but u know story have to be continued so that lux realize his love and confess it but I have much more drama waiting for u all accept this so get ready for it 😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Part-8

After the breakfast laksh helped ragini reach her their room ,

In RagLak room-

L- So, ragu Darling, This is ur charger , Mobile, head phone, books news paper and magazines. So no chance of getting bored.

R(smiles)- Thank u, Laksh ji.

L- ragini ek baat puchun

R- Hmm!!

L- Ragini mene tumhare saath bahut galt kiya h, I know mujhe koi haq nahi banta h par phir bhi kya hum pls phirse dost ban sakte h kya? Gussa thook kar aage badh sakte h kya? I know iss rishte mein ab koi umeed nahi h par...

R- ssh.. I understand laksh !! ( taking her hand forward) Friends.

L(smiles)- friends

R- ab office jayeye, late ho raha h

L- Bye TC

Laksh leaves, Ragini see him going out

R(monologue)- Laksh humne aapko jo dard diya h na shayad usko kabhi na door kar payein, I am sorry.Par ab wada karte h aapko aapki kushi deinge, hum aapko jaldi hi iss unchahe riste se aazad kardienge..aapko humare jesi sari suit wali biwi nahi chahiye thi!! Aapko ek modern kapdon wali aapke jesi koi chahiye thi.. aur hum, humne aapki zindagi kharab kardi, par hum wada karte h ki iss bemail shaidi se, iss dhoke se jude rishte se aapko azad kardeinge.. Dur chale jayeinge aapse taki aapko aapke jeewan ki har khushi milsake..9saying this ragini gets teary eyed but soon wipes her tears and pics her phone up)

PHONE- CONVO-

R- hello Mr. bakshi, Mrs. Ragini Laksh maheshwari here

Mr. B - ji Gm ma'am

R- kuch din pehle I have asked u prepare some property papers and paers of DPM- karma and sons

Mr.B.- ji

R- I request u to remake those nd also Pls prepare divorce paers of mine and mr. Laksh maheshwari

Mr. B- hmm okay ma'am ur paers will be ready in a week

r- sure Thank u

After a week Ragini got well now she could walk slowly but still felt some pain while walking.. laksh took complete care of hers..

In the mrng after Laksh have left for the office ragini is in her room when she recives a call

PHONE-CONVO-

Mr.B.- hello! Mrs. Maheshwari

R- ji GM Mr. Bakshi

Mr.B- Gm I wanted to inform u that ur papers are ready u can take them whenever U want

R( faint smile + moist eyes)- Thank you very much Mr. Bakshi. I'll come and collect the papers asap

Ragini gets ready and starts going out when swara speaks up in MM hall-

Sw- ragini ! Kahin ja rahi ho

R( moist eyes)- Haan kyun

Sw- nahi who main challun tumhare saath u know tumhara pair theek nahi h na .

R(moist eyes)- Nahi ( she wanted to add more but her throat chocks)

Sw- RU oK

R( unable 2 controll her tears)- Hmm ( and walks away fast even with her hurt leg)

Ap- isse kya hua

Sw- pata nahi

Ap- chalo uske ane par bat kareinge..

Ragini takes the paper and keeps them in the car, she asks the driver to take it to a park. She sat there crying.

Meanwhile Laksh is also not able to work in his office his mind wandered around Ragini and his guilt. Thus, he got up and went to DP's cabin

L- Papa

Dp- haan beta bolo

L- Papa who kya mein ghar ja sakta hoon

Dp- par abhi

L- pls papa

Dp- Hmm par sanskaar se milte jana

L- ji ! thank u

In Sanskaar's cabin-

Laksh eners

L- bhai who papa ne kkaha ki

Sa- haan bhai who ek tender k bare mein baat karni h

Laksh was heavy hearted, he could not speak or work still he composed himself

L- Bhai pls aaj nahi kal aur tu h na tujhse better kon kam karega, afterall u r thre best

Sa- par hua kya h lucky

L- bhai lego bas aaj nahi bhale hi sham ko

Sa- k tc

L- Bye

Laksh too reaches a place near the river at a distance of few minutes from ragini..

He too sat their crying..

Raglak cried for hours due to their guilt ...

In the evening - ragya got up and decided to go home when the heard some prayers from a near by mosque-

Khwajajiii, Khwaja
Khwajajiii, Khwaja, Khwaja Ji

They heard it and felt relived .. They felt close to the omnipresent power..

Ya Gharib Nawaz
Ya Gharib Nawaz
Ya Gharib Nawaz
Ya Moinuddin, Ya Khwaja Ji
Ya Khwaja Ji
Ya Khwaja Ji

ragLak started moving in the direction of the sound in a hope to find some peace

(Khwaja Mere Khwaja
Dil Mein Sama Ja
Shaho Ka Shah Tu
Ali Ka Dulara) - 2

they slowly walked there and entered, slowly moving inside teary eyed they sat near 2 pillars ...

Khwaja Mere Khwaja Dil Mein Sama Ja
Khwaja Mere Khwaja Dil Mein Sama Ja
Beqaso Ki Taqdeer, Tune Hai Sawari
Beqaso Ki Taqdeer, Tune Hai Sawari
Khwaja Mere Khwaja

they realized that they were on a place near to creator

Tere Darbar Mein Khwaja
Door Toh Hai Dekha

Tere Darbar Mein Khwaja
Sar Jhuka Te Hai Auliya
Tu Hai Unalwali Khwaja
Rutba Hai Pyara
Chahne Se Tujhko Khwaja Ji Mustafa Ko Paya

ragLak felt some peace in their minds.. they felt as if no one else then the all mighty can forgive them for their deeds..

Khwaja Mere Khwaja
Dil Mein Sama Ja
Shaho Ka Shah Tu
Ali Ka Dulara

Mere Peer Ka Sadka
Mere Peer Ka Sadka
Hai Mere Peer Ka Sadka
Tera Daaman Hai Thama

they prayed and begged for forgiveness, they asked him to give theem strength to correct all the wrongs done by them..and were broken as if all mighty was forgiving them for their sins as if he was saying they corrected themselves it is never too late...

Khawajaji
Tali Har Bala Humari
Chaya Hai Khumar Tera
Jitna Bhi Rashk Kare Beshak
Toh Kam Hai Ae Mere Khwaja
Tere Kadmo Ko Mere Rehnuma Nahi Chodna Gawara


Raglak cried at this, feeling his huge heart they felt small, petite and disgusted at themselves they cried their heart out without saying a word.. They knew he knows everything and will help them...

(Khwaja Mere Khwaja
Dil Mein Sama Ja
Shaho Ka Shah Tu

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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
I feel sorry for both Ragini and Laksh, they messed up their life so much and now they are not in peace
I think they need to sit and talk to get everything out of their chest that will make them feel better

Really nice update, aww both of they are thinking 2 different things, hope they work things out

Can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Really pain full part dear they need to talk with each other and sort out their but ragini decision to take divorce :( OK thanks for Good update can't wait for next part :))
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

I feel sorry for both Ragini and Laksh, they messed up their life so much and now they are not in peace

I think they need to sit and talk to get everything out of their chest that will make them feel better

Really nice update, aww both of they are thinking 2 different things, hope they work things out

Can't wait for the next part

Thanks for reading and u r r8 they should

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