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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Hey dear...

Amazing n superb update👏👏... Love u dear for such a long update...🤗

Aww Swara just to enquire Abt sanky called n Msgd him tht many times.. So swt...

N tht sending those photos..😳😳 n lak teasing Sanskar 😆

Sanskar is always getting tempted towards his tamarin...

I think Sanskar is always pulling Swara towards him as usual.. N they r ending up cuddling together...😆😳

I loved Sanskar wen he spoke to Swara Abt her avoiding him... The way he gave her time n not forcing himself on her is amazing..

Swarag n Sanlak conversation is awesome n funny too...

Laksh is very mischievous always irritating Ragini n Sanskar ( always spying on him😆)

Swara trusts Sanskar...😳 But tht Sunny is irritating😡 both Swasan said tht she is like a serpent...😆 I find her behaviour very weird...like she has some motive...

Antakshari part is really awesome...👍🏼 Songs r very nice n suited all the couples... N especially for Swasan... Those lines tht sanky sang for Swara are superb... Loved it...😳

Finally the truth n dare game is amazing... Ragini was really funny🤣

Swara's truth was nice... N tht laksh always teasing Sanskar... Hw can he give tht dare to tht Sunny bunny😡.. I liked it wen Sanskar tried to go away from them... But she kissed swara's cheek🤣 whispered her to pass tht kiss to Sanskar..

The best was Sanskar's part...😳

Tht proposal is superb... Loved it completely... Those words are just amazing dear...🤗😳

I thought tht Swara would tell Abt her feelings there... But as usual tht Sunny irritating n Cmng in the middle😡 the rply Swara gave her is awesome... I hope she gives tht Sunny same type of replies in future...

Swara washed her cheeks with dettol😆

Even I like it wen Sanskar gives order...

Sanskar gng to Delhi n Swara like always in her own mood tht she is gng to her parents house..

I felt bad for Sanskar wen she treated him like tht... May be she missed her parents but she must have spoken to him properly...n as usual Sanskar didn't disturb her even though he is missing her...he is very understanding,,, N she strtd to miss him... I loved it wen she was worried for him n felt lonely inspite of being around her family... N askd her dad to drop her at mm in the late night...

Tht phone call... N her happiness wen he came n wen their gazes Met... Their feelings... Tht entire thing was amazing...😳😳

I hated it wen tht Sunny came n hugged Sanskar... 😡

N finallyyy... Swara confessed her feelings🥳 I loved it...

U wrote it very well dear... Simple n sweet...

The way she hugged him suddenly😳 asking him not to leave her n confessing her feelings is amazing...😳 I hope Sanskar comes to know everything like wen she strtd loving him... Wat stopped her from expressing her feelings... Tht rotten eggs rule... Evrythng...

Awesome dear... As usual u nailed it...

Love u dear for such a wonderful update...🤗🤗

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cutegurlx

@cutegurlx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

It was amazing di
Antakshari nd truth dare part was awsome
Swara ws missing him
I lyk the way u expressed every detail
the confession part was awesome
update soon

Edited by cutegurlx - 9 years ago

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Pygmalion63

@Pygmalion63

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Mindblowing update.
U just rocked it..
Loved it so so much.

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san45

@san45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Oh my god I love you continue soon plzzz cant wait

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riaalex

@riaalex

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#785

hi,iam commenting for the first time.i was a silent reader following the story from start.it is awesome.i love it

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divya2913

@divya2913

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Posted: 9 years ago

#786

My dear Kamila, i have no words to describe how amazing this whole update is, its such a pleasant and heart wrenching update, superb dear. Actually you know the happiest thing is that a long time awaited superb proposal given by swara to sanskar and in my real life also the same thing happened in a reverse way that my hubby proposed me yesterday whole heartedly for the first time im sooo happy.

OMG dear i don't know really how to comment i loved each and every scene, the Whatsapp conversation, pallu romance, Antakshari, Maternal visit, the phone convo, the longingness for each other, and finally the proposal everything is superb.

The part which i liked the most are when sanskar pulled her and pinned her against the wall, the song which he dedicated to her, the quotes which he used for the proposal and the payback which swara gave to that sunny when she asked swara to forward the kiss to sanskar(that is the best payback), the goodbye kiss is so cute.

Really sanskar is an understanding person, he simply asked her to stay in her maternal home for her comfort its nice, little bit worried for sanskar when she again and again disconnected sanskar's call( i too do the same when i visit my mom's home but still worried for sanskar), but the real treat came after he stopped calling her not in anger but to give her own space to enjoy her three day trip It's really needed for swara to confess her feeling to sanskar and that happened too.

Loved each and every dialogue of swara when she proposed him that is the best dear, both are made for each other, the part which irk's me is that sunny why she always flirting him even after knowing that he is already married the worst part is when she said that if you like the guy then it is okay for me its really irritating yaar, throw her out of the house please.

Song selections are simply superb dear, its perfect for every situation when they played antakshari, when they departed from their respective place to see each other after those three day long long trip.

Finally loved each and every scene, every songs every words you used. AWESOME update.

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Anusha

@Anusha62

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
@Anusha... I'm soo sorry Anusha... I forgot extremely sorry yaar... I yet to read her update.. Was busy with this... No we didn't plan it.. It happened simultaneously... Ha.. Ha..

I yet to read your ff too.. Bear with me yaar... I do it asap... Love you for this lovely comment...

Hope your exams went well...

Hey kammila its okay dear some times it happens no problm,hahahah iam just kidding at one sec i thought aftr reading nita's ff lol..nd take ur own time for tlnd.dear i forgot to say about swa_sunny kiss oops damn funny kiss.nd ya my exam over on 3rd:)

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whity.007

@whity.007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

First time res... Ah haa. Kalakure my bond... 😉

I am the one who reserve the first place as I thought 😭
But you have so many fans in this forms
Any way better luck next time for me 😆
Actually I unres page 110 dear

Edited by whity.007 - 9 years ago

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Hey kamila dear🤗

It was treat to read such long post. Thank you so much.

Update was awesome. Finally swara confessed her feelings. That sunny kissing swara part. I was laughing like hell. Felt bad when swara said to sanskr not to disturb her. But wheb she recognised his value in her life it felt relief. The way swara missed him, poor girl plus confused too. Now the dark cloud are clear in her mind.

Sanskar is such a sweetheart. I so wish to get a same for me.

Thank you for the pm.

Lots of hugs .

Love

Kiara

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Part unres - Pablo Neruda's poems are so sensuous - raw and earthy unlike Rumi's which are mystical and awe inspiring in their simplicity. The poem you selected is one of my favourites and suits Sanskaar so well

Will revert for a detailed unres

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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