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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kritika. Sweetheart very. Nice story... Flimy... I loved it... Each part... But first part.. I can't find it dear .. Very entertaining... Keep on posting...

All the best for your exams...

Love you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys!! kritika here...if any1 wants PM of updates, kindly buddy me...

i forgot to tell that anagha's husband was police commissioner n he only arrested his own son n then died..

So anagha has the files now..

Swa- come with me to granny ji's house...for those files...

San starts laughs..swara frowns n gives him angry looks...

San- wo actually who is this granny ji?

Swar- anagha...lets go 2n8...

@anagha's house..

Swasan enters through window..they go to avinash's room..after searching a lot , swara gets the correct file...without wasting time they get ready to leave..but they hear anagha's house...

Sanskar drags swara behind the stairs...they sense her coming towards them...

Swasan go to the kitchen..they hide beside fridge..

Anagha to herself- arey! No one is here! May be its my hallucination...

There, swasan are very close to each other...

There is a file b/w them...

Sanskar notices her beauty, her innocence, then her rosy lips which she is biting lightly due to fear...

Sanskar is just about to kiss her forgetting everything, but seeing fear in her eyes, he stops...

They sense anagha going...

Sanskar lipses a SORRY to swara..

Swara signs a ITS-OK..

Sanskar helps swara to get out through the window...

In car

Sanskar- swara what are u waiting for? Open that file...

Swara- no sanskar I am a bit drunk..i need to be pure for opening this file...after all its about my di...

Sanskar- swara..being in Europe also u r very well mannered..

Swara smiles n says- all thanks to my mom n dad...

Next day

@shoot...

Director- so swara..sanskar,...ready fr the dance?

Swasan- yeah!

(they had to dance in a social function)

The applause of the audience died down as swara tried to ignore the stares we received. At last, they took their places and waited for the soft flow of music to begin. Once it started they took a step forward and bowed. they circled each other, their gaze remained locked. sanskar placed his hand on her back, her hand on his shoulder, and their free hands finally met. Together, they danced to the music, their feet in perfect sync to the beating of their heart. As the song progressed she felt relaxed, and allowed a small smile to form on her lips. He was perfect. sanskar wore a white and black suit, which matched swara's dress. His eyes, brown as chocolate, were deep and irresistible. One thing was for sure...they were made for each other...n everyone on the set were damn sure...that audience would love their match,...

Their gaze was still locked...it got unlocked hearing the applauses...

SHOT ENDS...

Sanskar- u dance soo beautifully!

Swara- tq n u too...sanskar...may I ask u a favour?

Sanskar- swara..of course u consider me as friend na! then ask me with ur right..

Swara- tq! Actually its about my sister...I have brought that file...can u come to my vanity?

Sanskar- yah sure!

In vanity

Swasan are sitting on bed...

Swara takes a deep breathe n opens it...

Swara- There are total 10 names...

1. ragini shrivastav

2. shravani gadodia

(as she has searched her sister's name i.e shravani , then why will she she read rest 8 names? Soo...only 1st two)

Sanskar- kk open shrvani's page..

They find her bio data n all..

They also confirm that she is sheshtha's daughter n lived in thane, Mumbai...

The last point was- after avinash's arrest shravani's parents couldn't be found , so along with other 11 kids she was send to XYZ NGO(OTHER 11 kids'd parents were also nowhere to be found)

Sanskar- so our next plan is to go to XYZ NGO..

Swara- correct!

Sanskar- let's go.

He gets up n even walks 2 steps ahead but swara stops him by her both hands n says-

Swara- oh hello! Mr.over excited...shoot is not finished yet yr...keep some patience..god will give us reward of our patience..

Sanskar- oh yah!

Sanskar gets embarrassed while swara laughs...

Precap- swasan almost finding truth about shravani...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Rithika.. Sweetheart lovely update... Swasan growing closeness... Swara detective giri.. All are superb... Just loved it...

I read your pm.. Got it... It's my lack.. Dear... Yep send PMS... Of future parts...

Sorry for late comment...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 7

hello guys!im sorry for late update..i had some personal isssues...moreover, i am very sorry for my behaviour last time in that post where i asked if varun misbehaved..i was just very frustated..thats it...and yes, just because of some people i wont leave india-forums..and specially kamila!! ur words incated guilt in u dear!! sorry whole - heartedly!!

note- already updated on telly updates..

After sh after the shoot...

They go to XYZ NGO...

They meet the receptionist,..

Receptionist-I am so sry..actually I joined this NGO 3 years ago...and u are here with a case of nearly 24 years ago...well our oldest staff member is here from 25-26 years..may be she can help you..

Swara- ok..so can we meet her now?

receptionist- ya sure mam...I will call her now..oh! there she is mrs. Varma..

receptinist(to mrs.varma)-anjali mam...

anjali- yes!

the receptionist tells her everything,..

anjali- ok! So u both are here with shravani gadodia's case..ahh come with me..ravi..(calling someone) <to ravi> go and bring file A3 and A4..

scene shifts To a cabin...where anjali is sitting at the back of the table n swasan are sitting opposite to her in the front of the table..

(after thinking enough)anjali- I still remember her..she was soo sweet..

Swara smiles..

Anjali- I remember after she came here along with other kids, she used to mingle very quickly with others,,..but after 2 years..(her facial changed to worry as she paused making tensed)

Swara- but...what happened after 2 years??

Anjali continued - after 2 years she and a girl along with her..was diagnosed with some disease...

Sanskar- which disease?

Anjali - shravani with partial blindness which was becoming severe day by day and one more kid..aa..(she checked the same file and said RAGINI SHRIVASTAV as she found her name) ragini shrivastav with cancer..then avinash(the kidnapper), his mother took both of them for proper treatment...I guess after some days an accident took place, then one of the kids died..

Swara with teary eyes- I hope its not shravani di!

Sanskar to pacify her- me too...well tq mrs. Varma..we will always be grateful to you..here, these toys and chocolates , we bought for donating..and here is my card..if you need anything contact me..

Swara- and here's mine...(she said giving her card to anjali)

They come out and sit in the car..

Then swara starts pacifying herself by saying- swara..dont worry..your di can't die...she must be alive...u know...

Sanskar consoles her- swara...yes! It will be your di only!

Don't worry dear...

Sanskar also gets teary eyed...

Sanskar- in fact without wasting time let's go to anagha's house..

Swara wipes her tears..

Swara- yes lets go!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kritika... Fantastic update deaar... Is sharavani gadodia is Ragini srivastava.. I loved it...

I mean it dear.. I hurted. You soo I should apologise to you... Love you for forgiving me...


Love you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum..read all the parts..its awsum..o actually got to knw abt ur ff frm My SwaSan FF Page..I read da Concept in inbox n came to knw ki its da ff wich i used to pms..so.after reading.da intro of ur ff on my page i immediately opend yr ff n strtd reading..its amzing..Don Continue n pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Goldie93

Awsum..read all the parts..its awsum..o actually got to knw abt ur ff frm My SwaSan FF Page..I read da Concept in inbox n came to knw ki its da ff wich i used to pms..so.after reading.da intro of ur ff on my page i immediately opend yr ff n strtd reading..its amzing..Don Continue n pm me..

T
q soo much goldie...im a very big fan of urTMH...im more than happy that u read my f.u r one of my favourite admins...love uh!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read it all ..very interesting concept ...
Update soon..

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