~SwaSan Drabble Series by Shona and Anna~ Page 16 ~New Drabble Updated - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Shonali,

Sorry for the late comment - was travelling and returned to a truly hectic work schedule😭

Loved the drabble - the humour was well developed and SwaSan really are a golden couple - they agree that ''So it is not happening tonight' ''nope, maybe next time' ''without the cake and the lilies'🤣

The MMwasis should steer clear of their room in the near and distant future. Or maybe they should take Suju's advice and go on a hunmoon😉

Nyna


Hey Nyna,
Please dont say sorry. I completely understand it.

I am so glad you liked the drabble. I just wanted to have something hot and funny ever since I have heard people wanting hit and miss con😆. They are indeed a golden couple. The way they understand each other is just out of the world😃
Hopefully Sujju proves herself to be a dia hard SwaSan shippers by sending them to hunmoon😆

thank you once again for reading and commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

thank you so much for reading and commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .daffodils.

superb update ya

loved it


thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I am glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .IamShonali.


Hey Nita,
please dont say sorry dear. Atleast you read and take time to comment. I am toh not even able to do that. Feel bad.
I am so glad you liked the drabble. I understand the torture we have been enduring for SwaSan scenes is too much. Hopefully now we will get something meaningful and our patience with them pays off.
The next drabble is in process. Hopefully it is done soon.
Thanks again for reading and commenting love


Waiting for the next one 😉, and dont feel bad ,it really okay😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you so much Prachi for reading and commenting!! I am glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello my lovely SwaSanians,

I am back with yet another drabble for SwaSan. As I had promised few readers that this time I will write a full consummation scene (without any miss 😆) I am back with it. But for this one, I would certainly like to thank Leki (@DivineDarkness) who actually encouraged me to write this scene down which I had thought about a long time ago. And Anna, my drabble partner pushed to post it as a drabble as she thought it would definitely be a treat for everyone to read it.

Saaiyaan, by Kailash Kher is one of my favorite songs and it always makes me think about SwaSan romantic moments whenever I listen to it. So here you guys, one more drabble.

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Saiyaan

Heere moti main na chahoon
Main to chahoon, Sangam tera,
Mai to teri saiyaan, tu hai mera,
Saiyaan, saiyaanaaan

Swara enters the room only to find the room beautifully decorated by Sanskaar. She is looking around, amazed at the site of her room. Sanskaar is standing by the door facing her back, intensely looking towards her and waiting for her to turn back. He slowly starts walking towards her. Swara feels him approaching and slightly moves her face in the direction she feels he is coming and smiles lightly. As his footsteps are approaching her, her breathing is increasing heavily.

Tu jo choole pyaar se, araam se mar jaaun
Aaja chanda baahon mein tujhmein hi ghum ho jaaun mai,
Tere naam mein kho jaaun,
Saiyaan, saiyaaan.

Sanskaar puts his hand on her shoulders. She feels jitters and closes her eyes in bliss. He slowly turns her around, facing towards him. She feels shy to even open her eyes. He comes closer to her, intensely looking at her. He lifts her chin slowly and tries to kiss her. Swara feels even more shy tries to runs away.

Mere din khushi se jhoome gaaye raatein.
Pal pal mujhe doobayein jaatein jaatein,
Tujhe jeet jeet haaroon, yeh pran-pran waaru,
Haye aise main niharu, teri aarti utaaru.
Tere naam se jude hai saare naate,
Saiyaan, saiyannn..

The moment she tries to run away, he holds her hand and stops her. Rose petals starts falling on her. Sanskaar is still holding her hand and smirking. Swara again closes her eyes, and tries to lift her other hand and enjoys the shower of rose petals. Sanskaar slowly walks in front of her. He lifts his hand and starts caressing her cheeks as if he is trying memorize the features of her face.

Banke maala prem ki, tere tan pe jhar jhar jaaoon
Baithun naiyan preet ki sansaar se har jaoon main,
Tere pyaar se tar jaaoon
Saiyaan, Saiyannn

Swara opens her eyes and intensely starts gazing him, looking into his eyes. His passion filled eyes starts melting her. She slowly raises her one hand and starts sliding her hand down his face softly. Her hand stops at his lips and he kisses her hand. She closely her eyes in bliss again and lowers her head again. Sanskaar lowers his head too, to touch her head with his, with her hand still on his lips. Sanskaar slowly tries to hold her by her waist, which send shivers down her spine. She again runs away, this time successfully and stand by the window, hyperventilating.

Yeh naram-naram nasha hai badhta jaaye.
Koi pyaar se ghunghatiya deta uthaye,
Ab baawara hua mann,
Jag ho gaya hai roshan,
yeh nayi-nayi suhagan,
ho gayi hai teri jogan,
koi prem ki pujaran mandir sajaye.
Saiyaaan, Saiyaaan (2)

Sanskaar walks to her again. Her back is facing him. He stands very close to her and she is again left breathing heavily. He again holds her by her waist using his one hand. And he slowly moves her hair to one of the shoulder and bends down to kiss her on her neck. Swara shivers as he is continuously planting kisses from her neck to her shoulders. She feels as his she has just melted in his embrace. The torture gets too much for her to handle and she turns her and hugs him tightly as if her life depends on that. Sanskaar smiles and hugs her back. He moves her hair again and snuggles in her neck, kissing her and hugging her tightly. The slowly break the embrace, still lost in each other's eyes.

Heere moti mai na chahu mai to chahu sangam tera,
mai na jaanu, tu hi jaane mai to teri, tu hai mera...(2)
mai to teri...
tu hai meraaa..

Sanskaar picks her up in the bridal style and carries her to their bed. He slowly places her on the bed as if she is a very delicate gift of his life. He climbs over her, making sure she is comfortable, still continuously looking into her eyes with love. He snuggles in her neck again and holds her hand.


And the rest that happens can be your imagination

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I know its a really small drabble but I hope you guys liked it. Don't forget to leave your beautiful comments below.

Love,
Shonali And Anna
Edited by .IamShonali. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is a wonderful small OS Shona. Absolutely beautiful! 😳 When you sent me the OS, I absolutely enjoyed reading it because 'Saiyyan' is my most favorite song in the world. 😳 A consummation on this song would be perfect for SwaSan. I absolutely would love to see this happen in the show and I do pray it happens soon.
Shona, this is very well written. The scene played out in front of my eyes and that makes it even more beautiful! 😳

Also, I would like everyone to know, the idea of the drabble was mine but till today all the drabbles have been written only by Shona. I have just read them before you all. She is the one who does the hard work. 👏

Leks, that is coming soon - hopefully! 😆
Edited by --Anna-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
You know my take on this one 😳
Where is that drabble Anna madam was writing for past few months??! she is still writing that??! Now I'm really eager to read that!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Small but amazing drabble!
Don't know when we will get something like this on the show! They don't give us a proper kiss & some romantic moment let alone this!
Bt we get 2 kiss on cheek from Swara to Sanskaar & 1 more is coming our way! That's it we are getting (Not that I don't like, I loved it of course)
Bt don't know when we will get to see something like this!
Anyways lots of love for your sweet drabble :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Even thought it was short ... Don't worry it was beautiful... God what is this I am obsessed with your work. It is amazingly put together. Every single word flows beautifully with the lyrics. Haiii mar dala.
Thank you for updating. Funny story I was actually sort of came to India fourm to see if you updated and you did. And I am glad I checked.

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