Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16 - Page 97

Originally posted by: Anusha62

Aww brilliant update!!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good going..

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I have the same feeling regarding Suvanna, fear and pity. She still has some light left in her although not in a large quantity.

As for Ragini/Janki, yes, she is the eventual villain. She is not hate-able right? Just a little repulsively weak🤢

That close up smile comment cracked me up sis, 🤣 we and our true love for Lakshya!😈 You can imagine him smiling and using the dazzling light of his smile instead of a flash light😆

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Saku my dear...🤗 🤗

First of all, I feel really awful for having res'd for the past 4 chapters, and not being able to un res within the time I'd thought I could. I don't know...the minute I sit down to type out my comments, something or the other keeps coming up. I'm so sorry my dear kid sis. 😕

I feel really guilty even telling you an extended time frame for my un res's now, since I've not been able to stick to my earlier committed timelines. 😔 😭 But I will un res the soonest I'm able to do so my dear, that's a promise.

In the meantime, I just wanted to say that I have been reading all the recent chapters again, to soak up the feel of the saga before commenting. And I was blown away, all over again, by the sheer vividness and scope of your imagination.

It takes a lot courage and vision to break so completely from serial canon, to structure a tale that has nothing to do with the serial plotline whatsoever. Apart from the essential traits of the characters we love so well (and of some others we are quite ambivalent about 😛 😆), your vision is a magnificent creation all of your own.

I was reminded of the words from an ad (for Etihad Airways 😊). The brand being advertised of course has no similarity to the tale of Vajra, but the words seemed so apt for the breathtaking innovativeness and creativity you've shown here.

""Occasionally people come along who are not content with merely moving things along. They want to take things further. Tear up the plans and start again. They insist that the dream is possible, and take a running jump into the uncharted. They aim not for reinvention of the superficial kind, because they want more. Their goal is not to merely improve upon what has been done before...but totally reimagine it". 😉 😃

Kudos for having the vision to reimagine SwaSan, Ragini/ Janki, Lakshya, Annapurna, Sharmishta, Shekar, Dida, Adarsh and all the others, in this fabulous Elven setting. Not to mention a bevy of other supporting characters all of your own imagination. Bravo. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Yeah I can imagine that...rather a flashy bloke, is our skipping, prancing dude. 😉 😛