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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Loved the update and the story too thanks for pm

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Hey Nita 🤗

What a packed chapter full of great development! I loved the beginning with especially Sanskaar's introspection about Swara 😃. They boy is surely falling in love although he tries to deal with things "logically" in order of different relations/ status Swara has in his life so suddenly! Really enjoyed the way all aspects are increasing his awareness. Then all the section of how he is so impatient for her to call him was really sweet and very telling.

So he goes to pick her up and reassures her beautifully about wearing what she likes (with the aside of admiring how she looks good in everything!) and of course she melts at that- what a perfect husband 👏👏. I love Sujata in this too- so loving and understanding.

I loved how they ended up and Adarsh and Pari's after the other conversations/ interactions such as the one about going to attend the function etc (and nice that Laxman is still playing Cupid 😆). The whole scene with baby and AdRi was so, well homely, really! And showed how they are so comfortable in the way that matters! The little bit about the way Sanskaar's parents died was poignant

But my overall fave from the whole thing- the bed is to be shared and no couch, only a useless type pillow wall 😈😆 Nicely done there Nita!!

I also liked the little dose of RagLak- the whole acknowledgment by Ragini that her feelings can spiral out so she wants to avoid and also the little of them spending time together.

All in all, again a very nice chapter Nita with things moving on so well. How many chapters have you planned, if you have planned a fixed number that is?

Lots of love,

Shruti x

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sarra0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Chapter 7 - Part 1

Sujjata was worried for saskaar and his possible heartbreak was nice to c...Aw that was so sweet of swara to not only realise wat sujata was worried about but to also give her some of mind by saying she wud inform her b4 leaving...

😆😆 always love bed coach negotiations...so much fun...and sanskaar did well..to negotiate coach for 5 days...lets c the solution he comes up for either being on the coach everyday or another solution...😆😆 sanskaar actually gave her 2more minutes on asking..

Swara has no problem admitting she snapped and apologise accordingly...just wat v expect from her..owning her mistakes...

I wud any day take a one line sincere compliment then pages and pages of cheesy or fluttry flatery compliment which may sound good but have no weight behind them...compliments like the charaters as well...laksh all flash no substance, and sanskaar all sincerity and substance...and swara complimented him?? 😲😳

🤣🤣 sujjata wants them out of the house for a while so she gets peace and can watch her serials..lets hope its not SR she is watching, it wud give her nightmares...

🤣🤣 ur piling the pressure on ragani left and right...she is being bombarded every which she turns by perfection...of course for some coming accross such perfection wud make sure they never achieved it 😉...u even used the words two perfect people for us 😆😆

Hai awkward silence due to compliments...can only imagine when they start having feelings wat they wud b like..

Huh shekhar does anything and it surprises 😆😆...and here he returned a hug from here..🤣 shekhar opted for news as a safe bet and silence as key...sanskaar has his head screwed on right then...

Iv commented enough on shomi 😆😆 wont bore u with it again

I love how swara is taking his comfort into account and how she got dessert changed without telling shomi y.., he eat Kheer made by Swara 2day, but he may not have been able to have it made from someone elses hand, especially if she is equivalent of mother..l

And he hers by suggesting bacholetter party..of course without explaining...as usual swara active imagination filled in the blanks 😆😆...one day that will cause her problems... liked how she didnt forget her newly made promise to sujjata...😆😆 of course sanskaars bachelor party was as unique as him...all alone...

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: Anusha62
Hey nita:)
Aww..!!
Superbbb update dear i liked each n every line of this part..
Swasan god y this two r sooo adorable nd lovely till now i have read lot swasan ff/os/ss.
But when ever i read stories on our swasan i love them more nd more uff:)
Oo swasan both understand eachother very well so sweet.
Sanky thoughts abut swara oh thats was damn perfect man.
Oops swara she's not at in love wid sanky but felt jealous when she saw photos of her hubby wid other girl.
Hahahah if she started loving him then for sure swara may kill girls who come near to sanky lol.
Swara hand on sanky chest bt sanskar woke up bt he didn't wanting to wake her up by his movements so cute nd sweet..!!
Wonderful update nita..!!

Thanks Anusha dear😊. Sorry for the late reply . Happy to know you liked this chapter . SwaSan are always bound to be adorable and i agree i love them more due to the FF/OS/SS i read in the forum too.

You are the second person who is pretty sure Swara might actually kill a girl when she fell in love with Sanskar due to jealousy 😆. Yeah it can happen or not 😉. But it will be fun to see Swara reactions once she fell in love with her husband 😆. Sanskar is a gentle man and the perfect husband .Too bad he is a fictional character or else i might have followed Kavitha footsteps to marry him 😈

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Nita... Hugs.. Yaar for such an awesome story... Just enjoyed each and every word... Swasan convo... Laksh plan.. Swara jealous.. Ragini pendulum mind... Everything.. Babes sorry for small comment...

Love you...

Hi Kamilla dear🤗

How are you dear. Hope you hand is okay now. Take plenty of rest . Dont overwork it till it heals completely 😊. And you forgot the Sanskar rule 😡. Happy to know you liked it dear.And plenty of hugs 🤗 🤗 🤗 for taking time to give me the feedback .Love you too dear

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy
amazing story!! plzz update soon

Thanks dear.. Will try to update soon but wont be possible during the weekend

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sarra0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Na u dont fight swara u just hit her over the head 😉

Ah anarkali 😆😆 u know its all about equal opportunities...thou i hear they r celebrating Holi...

Kasam se dont underestimate Haq 🤣

I aim higher then the show 😆

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie
Wow! That was one of the nicest storylines I've read till date..😊

Sanskar is such a sweet heart..He do empathise with the feelings of Swara.. How he took care of swara's smallest things. Ahh!! That was really commendable👏 The way he introduced Swara to his parents is really good..😃

Swara is so cute, innocent and at the same time so sensible.She understood the fears of Sujatha and Sanskar.👏

Sujatha being cool MIL and not being over dramatic is the thing I love the most.

Laksh playing cupid for his bhai and bhabhi..Not bad..😊 But this is effecting his relationship with Ragini in one way or other..😕

Whenever Swara gets priority, Ragini's jealousy kicks in.. This is a direct impact of her pent up emotions all these years.. Freedom is all she wanted.. I agree it will be difficult to control her jealousy which is packed up for years.. But she should also see the things in light or else the long lecture and soothing words of Laksh will leave no mark at all. And at the end of the day every person has different persona. Ragini should understand this instead of raging jealousy over swara.

I'm excited how you'll turn the events and make everything fine..😊

Thanks,
Geetha.

Hi Geetha.

I think this your first comment here.😳 So happy to know you liked this SS. And your compliment sure made my day😳.

I love to read all your takes on each character and there were spot on. Sanskar is really an sweet heart . Swara is one lucky person to get married to a guy like him😉. Swara is innocent and sensible. It fits her character perfectly 😊. Well i wanted every one to like the Saas and i am happy that you do like Sujatha Character .

Ragya has there own trouble in paradise inspite of them being an love marriage. Lakshya is ignoring his wife since he is busy playing Cupid and Ragini is having an hard time moving on from her jealousy since she is still living with Swara . I hope i can do justice to both of them and not fail your expectations.

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: sarra0

Na u dont fight swara u just hit her over the head 😉

Ah anarkali 😆😆 u know its all about equal opportunities...thou i hear they r celebrating Holi...

Kasam se dont underestimate Haq 🤣

I aim higher then the show 😆

Kavitha tried it out already, it didnt work 😭. She went as far as electirc shock 😉. Really they are celebrating holi 😲. Nah i dont trust the Cvs .They will add plenty drama to it 😆 .

Got it i wont underestimate Haq . But it has been just two days. Hope no global crisis because of that . I really dont want to be the reason for that😭 . We all aim higher than the show 😡

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Yup - a chapter so interesting - did not even notice the lenght despite the warning😊

Will unres for a detailed comment.

Nyna

Take your time Nyna dear. It can wait . Happy to know it was not too long