SwaSan SS:'The curse of that night'(FINAL PART:page30)-compl - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi friend's!!! Sorry for late update guys!!! Thank you so much for like and comment's...Im so happy ..and sorry for errors and grammatical mistakes !!!


Here we go

PART 4


A usual day in his life,but lot of changes in last two years,many changes occurred in his life,Reason behind all his changes was due to her small diary,but written words inside pages of diary,affected him lot.Each words define love ,care to him.Though painful words are described but still he can't able to read hate word against him.Its all about her love ,respect and care to him.All things whatever she felt for him he cannot able to taste it in real just he was numb reading it daily especially while reading specific page which she her life completely or lost her life but her words says she was happy but he cursed himself for that day.she thought he given her life to live by his love gift.He was somewhere happy atleast someone is there to shower love and care to him with his flaws, however he was!!!

LOVE-Change's One's Life.

Yes,her love changed him lot.Love is powerful,it brings two people no matter how different they are ,just their lives become intertwined.

Her love is seed ,which thrown inside his soul roots has started to spread all over his heart a very strong roots.Slow growth take place from stem ,feelings started to grow,now number of leaf ,fruits and flowers are grown by blood circulation which full of her thoughts..Flowers and fruits are his love for her which is waiting to pluck it .He waiting for her to tell what he felt for her completely a changed person.

In this two years,he started to love her ,which made him miss her badly he realized his feelings to her but some thought of sin he did ,spoiled one innocent girl dignity he tried lot to forgive himself but no use but he had faith once swara forgive him he can be get some peace so to get her he make himself determined to find her and seek forgiveness but he have fear or scared to face her. His thought"Will apology or sorry is enough ?" He going through lot of question in his mind to mix more tension heart pounding"What if she moved on,whether she still loves you?...then what about your child "..which distracting him lot.


But when nandu were around him,some strange emotional feelings he found in his heart. He thought "his son also will be in his age." He recognized he missing his own son.Now his fear was double thinking about nandu fear of losing or separation from him.Because from few days he started to miss his mom not exactly his parents he never mentioned parents words.nandu words only ring around "Mei mumma ko miss kar raho,Mei kalthi kiya,Mei usko hurt kiya kaka" he was continuously telling this lines to kaka but when sanskar asked him about his personal he will abruptly avoided him.All this made sanskar fear increased whatever if nandu wants his parent he have send him back and fear of facing swara,"she will forgive or not"..he thought he will lose all his beloved ones.Now he working to find both swara and nandu parents.


"You know when you love someone when the mere thought of losing them brings you to fears"

PRESENT

He took out his diary,hoping today he can get some clue to find his love swara.Read out his words for her.

"I didn't mean to fall for her but I did and now fearing of losing her."

His thoughts was disturbed by nandu,

"uncle come soon will play cricket"

"Morning itself wah nandu ,nahi nahi you go and have your breakfast"he said,just all his tension and fear feeling are gone hearing nandu voice he has some magic,he thought

"Areeey budduhu uncle time dekha kya 11 clock tum late se uthkar mujhe lecture sunthe kya"he scolded

Kaka burst out laughter seeing nandu actions to sanskar..sanskar closed his eyes hold his ears

"sorry baba maf kardo just give me 10min I will back soon" sanskar pleaded

"teeke uncle but ek condition before play you have your breakfast ok otherwise nandu won't talk to you"he said with cute action in his index finger

Sanskar was lost in his action..Thud

"ouch nandu why you throw ball on me that too..."he asked

"Then where you lost uncle im talking to you..cha uncle just miss naah you saved..ok come soon"nandu winked at sanskar and went out with kaka.

Oh god this boy becoming naughty day by day but my days are going smoothly still I missing her lot,he thought

After some time ,

"nandu I will play only once later did you remember yesterday you promised me you will say about your parent today"he remembered nandu

Silence occupied nandu for more than 10 min.sanskar lifted in his arm and took him to his balcony

"Nandu its been two years..you never talked your parents.you don't miss them"he asked sincerely

Again no reply still sanskar maintain his patience's planned to talk past moments

"ok nandu did you remember how i got you ...you know its the turn over day for me nandu because of you I got the truth of my life more than that love of my life"he said looking at swara's home

"you got it naah uncle happy naah"nandu said staring at sanskar

"No nandu still no...just I know the truth but finding the person who showed me love and life...you also important in my life"sanskar said still looking at swara place,"I asked you something nandu ,you remember how I got u that day" he asked

"yeah uncle I remember I was crying continuously many ppl surrounded that house(pointing swara house)then you came out from your house and took me here with kaka naahh.. Even you steal that diary which i took it from that house naah..you know what uncle at first I was afraid seeing you but later ...wait you also know naah what happened then why asking me...kya uncle mujhe trap karne koshsis karehe yeh naahh"he said with smirk

Sanskar was shock and numb he never thought nandu itna smart and he will use bade bade words.He was just six years old but the way he talk and all his antics are beyond the limits.

"kya uncle am I right "nandu shakes sanskar...who lost in his words

"no nandu its not like that...and what you told I steal it ..Its belong to me nandu ..i was telling you about your aunty naah its hers ok leave all that..will you tell me about your parents"he pleaded

"uncle please stop telling parents parents parents...i never had it my life ..its just my mumma this is reason I hate her and came away from my mumma...nooo I love her lot but hurted her much naahh uncle I stayed so many days here left her alone...I'm bad son uncle ...you know what she always used to say she lives for my happiness ,even I was happy only uncle but when all asking my father name my answer was always my mother name uncle..I asked her to tell but she will cover up ...After making me sleep she used to cry whole night uncle..she used to write diary uncle..so only that day I took diary from that house to remember my mumma..now i want to go to her uncle ..i miss her ...i miss my strong lady mumma..."he was sobbing and giggles at last

One more shock to sanskar..after hearing nandu..just one thing strike his mind.."what if nandu is his son"..somewhat he composed himself thought to clear his doubts.

"nandu strong lady mumma??"he said

"yes uncle mumma is strong lady..i love her lot..but you're my super hero uncle..i never had fathers love..but I was happy with my uncle..i don't know why I did this to her..now she will be crying thinking me I hurted her uncle..please send me to her soon uncle..but whatever you love me naah..even I love you uncle..you're my special hero uncle"nandu said happily

Confusion taking place him lot.

"yeah sure nandu .You did big mistake...and hurted your mumma naah...did she will forgive you?" Sanskar asked

"areey buddhu uncle..all mumma 's can't be angry with their kids ok..I know my,mumma..she loves me lot"nandu said

Sanskar decided to shoot out main question

"ok nandu how you reached this place ..did you know that house(pointing swara place)..and what's is your mumma name" he asked very curiously

"woh uncle I know that place ,once while going this way mumma said that she used to..."nandu was cut by watch man

"sir one lady came to meet nandu"watch man said

"who's is that..For what purpose"he asked

"I don't know sir..She told she is nandu mom"watch man said

"what my mumma reached me ahhh"he shouted and ran out

Sanskar started to fear lot..what if she is swara..no no it cant be..he thought..he took baby steps to reach living hall.he cant able to reach her face has nandu in her arms but before he see her face his doubt cleared but kaka happiness expression..

" Beti ,tum???Swara " kaka spoke out in shock

"kaka ap kaise yeh??"swara words are out

Her words reached his ears which made hit his heart and lift his face to her.Tears started to peck his eyes.Now its her turn to look him but she was prepared herself to face him.

"Mei teek ..."kaka stopped when he witnessed sanskar entry at living room

Swara eyes travelled along with kaka and numb...Tears started to welled up blured her vision has sanskar.


Six long lonely years she thought she moved on from him ,but she have to admit that she still holding on.Though she prepared to face him its just her body prepared for it not her emotions,love to him.

TEARS are the words when mouth struggles to let the words out 😭



Precap: Fianl part 😆


Updated!!!Sorry for late update guys..hope you will like it..

Pls do like and comment!!!


Love

Leku
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Edited by leku - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
My friend,
The update was awesome.
It was heart touching.
Swara's love changed him,
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice..
finally they will meet..

eagerly waiting for the final part..

continue soon..
thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
leku superb..
so finally swasan r going to meet aftr very long 6yrs..
loved sanskar nandu bonding..
so sweet tha update..
oh no nxt part is last y??
hm bt it shuld b bang update..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update leku 👏
Finally swasan will meet again 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Simply superb.. .. Waiting eagerly for swasan meeting... Update soon yar... Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayy they meet finally
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum.loved it...finally SwaSan Met...awsum..hope everything is sorted out b/w n dey unite soon..continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update leku...
Sanskar n Nandu bonding is nice...
Finally they met after 6 yrs...
Eagerly waiting for final part..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res..

Unres...

Lekha.. 🤗 ... Awesome update sissy... Soo finally they met after a long six years... Very emotional part to... Nandu is smart boy... 😛

Thanks for not killing Swara here... Otherwise I will bang your door.. PM..JJ...

Sanskaar loving her for two years but swara loving him from her childhood... The pain is superly executed... I enjoyed thoroughly... Sorry for late reply...

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago

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