SwaSan SS: Stone Heart 16+ { Ch3 updated }

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Interesting
Waiting for your update.

Thank you Sakkiyah 😊 will update in a day or two 😃

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Interesting & intriguing!! Plz do PM me!

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Thank you for the PM

Loving the new concept dear
Please do continue
Looking forward to the coming chapters

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Interesting please pm when updating...

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Very nice dear...update soon n pm me...

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hey Ya guys! I am Really sad At the response i am getting..if this concept bores you please mention and i'll discontinue...the ones who liked the prologue here's the chapter 1...enjoy!!

CHAPTER 1

As I Reached Mrs.Frost's villa..i rang the bell number of times.. Suzie Frost opened the door and smiled.."So Sanky boy you brought her here?how many times i've kept insisting on you to bring her here but you and your self ego and respect...come come! Lay her here in this cot i'll bring some broth..you want some?"

I nodded in decline,she smiled "i see you consumed alcohol today"! I sheepishly smiled...she giggled

Swara was fast asleep now..she held my finger tight..i was tearful ...i was ashamed for i was the reason of her suffering..

Mrs.Frost was a widow.. She had been our neighbour for the past 44 years and had been a lot helpful..when my mum died she took over me,but as i grew up,i worked and bought my own house,i married swara and settled..but i could never forget my second mum..

Mrs.Frost had seen us suffering a lot...and she kept insisting on a financial help..but me and my ego!...

She came with two big bowls of her spl veggie broth ..which would be my favorites in boyhood..she was humming a song which made me laugh uncontrollably.. She and her tuti-futi Hindi 😆

Thoda sa jo pee liya( Suzie's version)
* thodi si jo pee li hai ( Actual lyrics)
Chori to nai kiya
* chori toh nhi ki hai...

ACTUAL LYRICS FROM THE MOVIE NAMAK HALAAL*
thodi si jo pili hai, chori to nahi ki hai
thodi si jo pili hai, chori to nahi ki hai
o juli, o sheela, o rano, jamalo
koi to hamko roko koi to sambhalo, kahi ham gir na pade
thodi si jo pili hai, chori to nahi ki hai
o juli o sheela, o rano, jamalo
koi to hamko roko koi to sambhalo, kahi ham gir na pade
thodi si jo pili hai, chori to nahi ki hai (you guys can Assume suzie's version😛 )

I chuckled " Mommy what happened to you today?" Arey sanky boy you are drunk today so bus aise hi hehehe!! Giggled my pretty suzie mommy..

Ok"! Mommy i may take a leave ...take care of swara n yourself ...i bid adieu

No ! No sanky boy ...you stay here with your wife..she needs you! There's an extra chamber remember? Come child..

I nodded' ok !" I 'll bring some medicines then!

I left..

I walked towards a thin road near dilaram bazaar in Dehradun ...we stayed nearby..i bought medicines and went back..

Mommy had already taken Swara to the room..i went upstairs..

I got a call.

Hello"? Sanskaar listen ! I want swara tomorrow..a client is coming..make her wear the neck cut dress ok? Get on time ! Bye

I fainted..

Sorry guys i know it is a short update but i am in dillema as i am unsure about continuing...

~ Esha 😊

Edited by _Esha_ - 9 years ago

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

res for first comment for the 1st chapter

unres.

👏👏👏

i was looking forward to this thank you for the update yaar

love the lyric part 😳

and why are your disappointed with the response your idea is amazing

your a much better writter than me NO JOKE

please dont dis continue

😳

THANK YOU FOR PM

Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nice update.

The character of sanskar is really strange.

But who called sanskar?

Waiting for your next update

Please continue the story.

Thanks for the pm

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan
res for first comment for the 1st chapter

unres.

👏👏👏
i was looking forward to this thank you for the update yaar
love the lyric part😳

and why are your disappointed with the response your idea is amazing
your a much better writter than me NO JOKE
please dont dis continue

😳

THANK YOU FOR PM

Thank you zainu 🤗 thank you so much
Dear i am unsure as i didn't get the response i expected well my other works got a lot than this so i thought about discontinuing well for you I'll update soon...thank you again dear 😃