Ragya/Raglak- Pehli Nazar Mein Pyaar

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Hi Everyone,
I wrote something on Ragya/Raglak since it's Valentines sorry was going to post it earlier but was busy. Hope you guys like😃, I wrote it at different times so not sure if it will make sense


Pehli Nazar Mein Pyaar



It has been a year since they got married, things have
changed. Their story is different to what a typical arranged marriages. He was
a nave, irresponsible, carefree, outgoing, impulsive person. She was kind,
caring, thoughtful, understanding and obedient. He always trouble his family,
never listened to them, didn't want to join the family business, he wanted to
enjoy life. He thought he was young and you only leave once, enjoy it while you
can. She was always thinking about her family, doing everything to make them
happy and thinking of the respect in society. Her family meant everything to
her she would never do anything to hurt them or dis-respect them.


He was told to marry her because his family thought she was
the right person for him and she can turn this young boy into a young man who
needs to learn ways of life. She works as teacher, she loves kids and wants to
help them in any way she can. She loves singing, dancing and making people
happy. He was always wanted to go out
and fun with his friends never wanting to stay home or help anyone. His dad
told him many times that he needs to act responsible or he will be punished but
he wouldn't listen to him. He always thought his dad loves him and will never
punish him.


She was a true Indian beauty with a face of an angel, her
smile lights up the room and makes everyone smile around her. Everyone loves
her personality, she is helpful, honest and always there to help anyone who
needs help. He was handsome had a mischief naughty smile, which makes people forgive
him when he is in trouble. He has a personality of a spoilt brat who never had
to nor wanted to do anything in life.


She has a loving family who love and care for her, always
know when she is happy or sad. Hr dada and dadi treated her like a princess,
her parents made her feel she was the best thing in the world. Both her parents
worked and made her aware that in life you have to do something to earn respect
in society, doing something yourself will give you satisfaction. His parents
love him, but his dad is always strict with him, his mum was more caring
towards him. He never needed to fight for anything he asked he got it, he has
two older brother who would do anything to make him happy.


The first time they both meet fell in love with each other,
he couldn't stop staring at her she was beautiful she looked like an angel. She
was slim, tall, had most beautiful eyes, sexy / cute smile, angelic face, look
luscious silky hair. He was tall handsome, soft smile, caring eyes and tidy
appearance. When she spoke he fell in love with her melodic voice, he wondered
what it would sound like if she sang he knew she would be amazing. When he
spoke she liked his tone the soft subtle yet manly voice.


Her smile could melt anyone's heart, his smile could kill
anyone. Her respect towards his family and the way she was nice to everyone
made him respect him instantly, he knew his family made the right decision. Him
talking to her dada, dadi, mum and dad made her realise her parents made the
right decision by choosing him for her.


The first time he touched her hand to put the ring on her
finger made him feel blissful and content. From the moment he touched her he
knew she was the one for him and always will be. When he touched her for the
first time to put the ring on her hand she felt alive and happy. She knew he
was the one for her and always will be. Both promised themselves in their minds
that they will love each other always, care for each other, be there for each
other, understand each other and always each other's support.


He never wants to see her unhappy or regret her decision to
marry him. She never wants to cause him any problems and make him think he did
wrong by marrying her. He wants to make sure that she will be happy with him
always and he will ensure that she never misses her family he knows he must be
hard for her to leave her family and now they were his family. She wants to
make sure his family is hers now and she will always will love and respect them
like she loves her family.


He went home after the engagement he couldn't stop thinking
about her, she looked so innocent and caring. He knew she was a great person
both inside and outside. Her inner beauty can be seen by looking at her eyes.
He dared to look at her eyes once he lost himself in her eyes, he couldn't not
wait to meet her again and could not wait to make her his soon. He was staring
at her picture which his brother took of them both during the engagement.


All she could think about was him she was in bed but she
couldn't sleep she was restless happy and didn't understand the feeling. She
knew that she will leave her family, house, friends but she was happy she would
be with him and his family.


They met few times after their engagement talked to each
other, got to learn things about each other, understand each other. They got
married after two months, the two months were really long for them both, and
they couldn't wait to be with each their all the time and not having to wait
for each other or have to leave after their meeting.


They both were happy in their married life, he has changed
and his family were happy, they knew the positive change was due to her. She
was the best thing that has happened to him and the family, she was the person
who kept the family together. She made the effort to talk to everyone, help
them, talk to them and be there for them.


She knew who needed what and when, it was like she could
read their minds, she figured everyone's likes and dislikes. She knew their
personalities, she never had to be told twice about anything. She made time for
her families, work and him. She never wanted to stop working not yet maybe in
the future and she was happy that her new family let her work, she worked part
time so she could manage her time well. She met her parents every few weeks.
She gave him time when he was at home she never wanted to make him feel
neglected.


He was happy being married, he had changed and it was for
good, she has made him realise his responsibilities towards his family, job and
as an individual. He wanted to make his family and her proud of him, she wanted
to see the smile on her face when he succeeded and be proud of him.


Today was their 1st anniversary and the family decided to
give them a surprise by giving them a party. The family knew that both deserved
it, they both have been there for them families the whole last year and this is
the least they could do. Both were surprised but happy at the same time. He
brought her gifts packed it and put it on the bed, but there was another
surprise he would give to her after the party. She wanted to get him something
but she knew there is nothing she could him but she knew there was one thing
that would make him happy.



She came to the room to freshen up and get ready for the
party, she looked at the bed there was a package with a note.


"Ragini gorgeous please wear this today for the party, my
gift for you, I know you will look fabulous like you always do, hope you like
it, your Laksh xxx"


She smiled reading the note, she knew she will love it her
Laksh picked it out for her, she went to the bathroom with the package to have
a shower, she came out wearing the beautiful
red saree, with thin black border,
with black full 3 quarter length netted blouse, with collar and
backless. She was towel drying her hair walking to the dressing table. He came
in the room saw her sitting in front of the mirror and he lost himself looking
at her, she looked ravishing,


He walked over to her put his hands on hers, helped her dry
her hair, the helped her put her earrings, bangles, her maang tkka, he wanted
to put the necklace on her, she nodded a no, she only wanted to wear her
mangle-sutra and nothing else. She wanted to wear the most important pieces of
jewellery to her. He smiled made her stand up look at him, he almost hugged her
and put the mangle-sutra on her. He took the sindur from the dressing table and
put it on her, she closed her eyes, he took is phone out and took a picture she
looked gorgeous.


She opened her eyes
and saw he took a picture of her and smiled to him, he looked at the
dressing table and saw that she still needs to wear her waster chain, he picked
it up and brought her closer both facing each other and put the chain on her.
Both looked at each other and got lost seeing the loves they had for watch
other. She hugged him to say thank you, he hugged her back. She looked at him
he looked hot, in his black suit, red shirt but his tie was missing, she went
to the wardrobe got the tie put it on him. He touched her face and she saw he
wasn't wearing his cufflinks and his watch. She went to the draw hot his watch
and cufflinks she got him as a present and made him wear them. He kissed both
her hands for helping him.


Laksh: thank you darling for coming into my life and
completing me.


Ragini: thank you for having me in your life and loving me


Laksh: love the watch and cuff links, great choice Mrs Laksh
Maheswari


Ragini: I know I have great taste that's why I married you
she smiled


Laksh: I love you forever


Ragini: I will always love you


Laksh: do we have to go downstairs, can't we just stay here
and be with each other, made a sad face


Ragini: come on they all went through all the trouble we
have to go downstairs


Laksh: I know but I want to spend time with you just you and
no one else


Ragini: don't worry it won't be long maybe couple of hours
okay


Laksh: okay I believe you, Ragini smiled


They walked hand down the stairs holding each other, the
family were more than happy to see them
happy both set of parents had tears in their eyes, they were proud of
their kids.


Sujata: Jiji don't cry it's time to be happy


AP: I know I am so happy and proud of them


Sujata: I know me too they are a great pair and they make
each other happy


AP: may they always be happy


Sumi: Shekar I am so happy our daughter has made me so happy
and proud today


Shekhar: I know I am so happy today I cannot express myself


DP: Shehkarji thank you for giving us Ragini she has changed
all our lives and made my son a man I m proud of today


DP and Shekar hugged each other, while Sumi and AP hugged
each other.


Everyone was congratulating Ragini and Laksh, everyone had
fun they all danced, ate, drunk and talked. The party finished everyone went to
their rooms.


Ragini came in looked was looking out of the window, the
stars were shining she smiled and thanked hr lucky stars for giving her the
best husband and an amazing family who loved her and made her family. Laksh
came in saw Ragini standing next to the window went near her hugged her from
the back and put his chin on her left shoulder, she held his hands which were
under her saree near her waist and smile.


Laksh: what are you thinking about darling?


Ragini: I am thanking my lucky stars for giving me a great
husband and a loving damily


Laksh: we she thank my lucky stars as well for giving me
you, Ragini smiled


Ragini: Laksh this year it went so fast right?


Laksh: yes it did, thank you for being here with me, making
me who I am and helping me to make my parents proud.


Ragini: you don't need to think me I am yours and will always
be there when you need me


Laksh: I know that's why I love you and fell in love with
you first time I saw you, he turned her around, and looked into her eyes and
held her really close to his body


Laksh: the first time I saw you I knew you were the one for
me, the one look in your eyes and I know you were the best person for me,
Ragini had tears in her eyes.


Ragini: Laksh you are amazing you know that, you love me,
your family, you care for everyone and I love you for that


Laksh: this is all possible because of you


Ragini: you made the effort and I know Ma, Baba and everyone
is proud of you and that makes me the happiest person alive, Laksh smile


Laksh: I have a surprise for you


Ragini: another surprise?


Laksh: yes but this is only for me to see


Ragini: okay


Laksh: you looked ravishing in the saree, I wanted to rip it
of you but couldn't since we had to go to the party


Ragini: Laksh she slapped him playfully


Laksh: come with me her dragged her with her the cupboard,
got a package out and gave it to her, wear it and come out


Ragini: what is it?


Laksh: you will see now go and hurry, I cannot wait to see
you in it


Ragini: okay


Five minutes later Ragini came out wearing a nice elegant,
white silk nightie with a robe tied at her waste, Laksh kept staring at her she
looks sexy and innocent.


Laksh: you look breath taking I don't know what to say, you
look beautiful, stunning, he moved closer to her his forehead and on hers,
holding her at her waist, Ragini you are the most beautiful woman, I don't know
what else to say


Ragini: Laksh stop it


Laksh: I am saying the truth Ragini you have no idea what
you are doing to me


Ragini tried to get away from him she was feeling shy, but
he doesn't let her go he holds onto her tighter


Laksh: you are not going anywhere, Mrs Laksh Maheswari I am
not letting you go, not now, not ever, you are mine in this life and all other
lives, you belong to me always and forever, Ragini has tears in her eyes, she
knew he loved her but she didnt know he loved her this much


Ragini: Laksh I love you and you have given me so much, I
cannot ask for you anything in life, I have nothing to give you


Laskh: you have no idea what you have given me Ragini


Ragini: I have a surprise for you Laskh looked at her
confused


Laksh: you gave me the beautiful watch and cufflinks I don't
need anything else


Ragini: I know but this is for us both and the family


Laksh: what? Ragini felt shy and didn't know what to say,
she took his hand and put it on the stomach, Laksh looked at her confused


Ragini: Laksh you are going to be a dad


Laksh has tears in his eyes, he was happy, ecstatic, over
the moon, he didn't know what to say or do, she has given him the best gift
ever, Ragini wiped his tears.


Ragini: Laksh say something please?


He kissed her forehead, he was thrilled with the news.


Laksk: thank you thank you thank you, I love you, you have
given me everything, and now all I know is a healthy baby and nothing else


Ragini: I am happy that you are happy, I was scared I didn't
know how you would react


Laksh: you have no idea how happy I am, you have given
everything, I mean EVERYTHING, and he hugs her and says I love you very much has
happy tears in his eyes


Ragini: Laksh you gave me so much happiness I love you too, I
cannot leave without you, Laksh you are my everything


Laksh: Ragini you are my world, my universe


Laksh looks at Ragini with lust in his eyes, and he unties
her gown, takes the robe off from the shoulders, the robe falls on the floor. He
picks her up and put her on the bed.


Laksh: you are beautiful, amazing, strong, lovely, caring
and a awesome individual. He looks at her, she looks back with love in her
eyes. He pulls the string of her night gown down and started kissing her
shoulders, and then her forehead, eyes, then goes to her neck his favourite
spot. She is holding his shirt tight, she is feeling deliriously happy. She could
not have hoped or wished for a better husband, partner and a friend. The night
become special for them and they will always remember this night, them becoming
parent they knew both would be there to take care of the child, who is the
symbol of their love.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG Ray this is fantastic !! 🤗🤗
So so so so sweet and romantic !!

Just perfect for Valentine's day !!

I can't stop reading it !!

Thank you so much for this !! 🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarshineHues

OMG Ray this is fantastic !! 🤗🤗

So so so so sweet and romantic !!

Just perfect for Valentine's day !!

I can't stop reading it !!

Thank you so much for this !! 🤗🤗

phew thank god you liked it
i didn't know if it was going to make sense i wrote it at different times, i was going to make it longer but wanted to posted it before you guys go to sleep

Thank you for liking it and reading love

😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg ray its brilliant 👏👏
means WOW
loved every bit of it..😳😳
ray u r great 👏👏
perfect valentine os 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

phew thank god you liked it

i didn't know if it was going to make sense i wrote it at different times, i was going to make it longer but wanted to posted it before you guys go to sleep

Thank you for liking it and reading love

😃😃


It makes perfect sense !! THIS is the RagYa that I hope we get one day !!

Thank you so much for posting it today !!

Love you !! 🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: StarshineHues



It makes perfect sense !! THIS is the RagYa that I hope we get one day !!

Thank you so much for posting it today !!

Love you !!🤗🤗

thank you for the liking it and I hope we get to see this Ragya one day, your welcome
Love you too 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansinarang95

omg ray its brilliant👏👏

means WOW
loved every bit of it..😳😳
ray u r great👏👏
perfect valentine os😳😳

aww thank you Hun for reading it and liking it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh...lovely os...

I was unable to come to the forum early ,but I am glad that I got my gift from u...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG Ray this is super romantic
Beautifully written🤗
What an amazing valentine gift for RagYa fans
Thank you so much🤗
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Originally posted by: dewcute

Oh...lovely os...

I was unable to come to the forum early ,but I am glad that I got my gift from u...


aww your welcome glad you liked it

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