SWASAN SS- PHIR SE UPDATED PART-4 PG-56 - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

485

Views

32.4k

Users

78

Likes

761

Frequent Posters

Princess_Mansi thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Awesome update
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Kanwal4salman thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Awesome start
Update next part soon...
Sujayricky thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#83

This edit is made by me i hope you will like it.

PHIR SE
PART-1

4 years ago
A boy of early twenties was studying in a class lonely for the preparation of the final year of college.His study time was disturbed by his bestest friend

Boy-Sanskar yaar how much will you study itna bhi mat padh le Einstein bhi tere samane sharma jaye.
Sanskar- Lakshya please yaar don't disturb me please let me do my studies it is final year and i should concentrate on my studies. You should also go and study varna uncle tera band bajaa denge.
Lakshya- Don't take tension of my studies i will manage. But i want you to show something.
Sanskar- What???
Lakshya-Race
Sanskar- Race... I don't have any interest in watching so go and let me do study.
Lakshy-Agar mai bolu uss race mai vo insan hai jiske liye tu kuch bhi karne ko tayar ho jaye tabhi you will said no.
Sanskar- Acha... Whose that person can you tell me(sarcastically).
Lakshya- Swara... Swara gadodia.
Sanskar who was annoyed by lakshya disturbness till now but after listening swara's name his face give the brightest smile.Lakshya noticed it
Sanskar(immediately)- So let's go.
Lakshya(innocently)-kyu bhai tu padh na just now you were telling that i am disturbing you so ab no more disturbance you concentrate on your study.
Sanskar gets angry while Lakshya smirked
Sanskar- tum chalte ho ya du ek
(Showing his punch to Lakshya)
Lakshya-ok chill bro chal chalte hai
Sanskar became happy because he was going to see swara.
So here is Swara Gadodia college ki jaan shaan. Every college boy has a crush on her but no one has guts to go and proposed to her because if anyone goes to swara then Swara uska band bajaa baraat nikal degi usse ladke ka. Swara loves her family a lot and loves sanskar.Only her close friends riya, kirti,abhay and aditya knows that she loves sanskar.
Swara was enjoying her win against priyanka on cycle race sge was brightly smiling all the time but when sanskar sees her smile he was totally mesmerised by her smile He was looking only swara like no one was there but his sweet dream broken by a voice non other then Lakshya.

Lakshya- Oye sanskari aadmi muh band kar le warna machar ghus jayega
Then Sanskar realize that his mouth was open then he give angry looks to lakshya and then he goes to his class room with a smile in his face

Lakshya(monologue)- Bhagwan ji kis Fool ko mera dost bana diya hai jo ek number ka fattu hai pyaar karta hai swara se lekin bolta nahi hai
Lakshya shook his head goes to college canteen

Sanskar was going to the classroom then he saw swara was standing alone in the corridor so he goes to swara thinking something in his mind
Sanskar(monologue)- Sanskar just tell her that you love her so much. No...no if she tells no then my heart will break into piesces. No i can't take risk. Darr ke aage jeet hai.
Swara- Hi sanskar anything important you want to tell me.
Sanskar- ha mai tumhe mai tumhe congrats bolne aaya tha congrats swara.
Swara- Thank you so much sanskar.
(Monologue- Swara how can you forget yeh sanskar ek number ka fattu hai)
Swara- Anything else you want to talk about.
Sanskar- No...yes... nahi...ha ha. Ya i want to tell something
Swara- ha bolo na kya baat hai
Sanskar- ha mai bolna chhata tha ki mai mai mai
Swara- yeh bakri ki tarah mai mai kyu kar rahe ho
(Both chuckled)
Sanskar- I just want to tell you that ki mai not mai... I ... I ... i
Swara- I kya
(Monologue- Bhagwan ji agar isne i love you bol diya na mujhe duniya se utha lena)
Sanskar-I...I...I
Swara- I ke aage bolo (angrily)
Sanskar- I... I will miss you after the college
Swara- you will just missed me.
(Monologue - go to hell mr. Sanskar maheshwari.)
Sanskar- i will miss you only aur kya karunga mai
Swara-ok bye
Sanskar-yup bye ok bye
Swara -ya bye
Swara monologue- shyad sab galat bolte hai that sanskar loves me i think he just take me like as one of his friends.
Sanskar monologue- oye sanskar what have you done in the place of i love you tell i will miss you..What! Sanskar you are seriously a duffer.
Sanskar goes to his house and swara goes to her college canteen.
College canteen
Swara goes to canteen with a mixed feeling of sad or angry on sanskar.
Her friends noticed that
Kirti- swara what happen itna mood sad kyu hai
Swara- Vo sanskar ne.
Riya-oh my god sanskar ne proposed kar diya.
Aditya- sacchi swara it means sanskar proposed you.
Swara- Just shut up you guys sanskar nai aisa kuch nahi kiya hai.
Then she told the conversation between her and sanskar.
Then all became sad after hearing this
Kirti- koyi baat nahi swara ek din vo bol hi dega I love you.
Swara- kab bolega jab mai 80 yrs ki ho jaungi tab.
Riya-oh ho swara everybody knows that sanskar loves you.
Abhay- Yup swara riya is correct.
Aditya-aur vaise bhi meri maa bolti hai jab pyaar saccha hota toh vo pyaar pura hokar hi hota hai.
Swara- let's hope for the best
Riya- Swara why don't you proposed sanskar.
Swara- Why me. I am a girl aur vaise bhi boys proposed karte hai na ki girls so no way.
Abhay- What is this swara proposed proposed hi rehta hai if either boys do it or a girl.
Swara- I known but...
Kirti- Now i will not listen anything you will go and prosed sanskar ok.
All together- Please na swara
Swara- Ok ok i will go and proposed that fattu ok.
All gave group hug to eachother.
They were happy that finally these fools are going to proposed each other.

These all discussion are heared by non other then by lakshya. He became very happy that swara loves sanskar. He happily goes to sanskar to tell him the important news of his whole life

Maheshwari's house
Lakshya enters the house and see ap arranging items in drawing hall
Lakshya- namaste aunty where is sanskar?
Ap- Sanskar apne room mai hai he is getting ready.
Lakshya- ready?
Ap- beta ghar mai kuch important guest aa rahe hai isliye
Lakshya goes to sanskar room he saw sanskar was fully prepared to welcomed the guest
Lakshya- Bro i have a news jisse suun ke tu pagal hojayega.
Sanskar- Are you going to mental asylum very good chala ja
Lakshya- chup tuje ek good news batana hai
Sanskar- Hawww tu maa bane wala hai lekin maine toh sunna hai sirf ladies sab maa banti hai tum kya special case ho.
Lakshya(dramtically)- I have come here to tell you a good news but i think you don't want to listen.
Sanskar- oye drama queen bol kya baat hai
Lakshya(happily)-Mr. Sanskar maheshwar i have found my bhabhi.
Sanskar(shocked)- Tum kya bakwaas bol rahe ho.
Lakshya- I am telling right bro swara gadodia is my bhabhi because swara loves you.
Sanskar(happily)- sacchi
Lakshya-mucchi
Sanskar- But tujhe kaise pata chala.
Then Lakshya told the conversation between swara and her friends.
Sanskar(emotionally)- i can't believe this she loves me. i am so..so happy
Lakshya- ja bhai bol de usse apne dil ki baat
Sanskar- tu sahi bol raha hai abhi jaake bol deta hu that i love her
Sanskar happily hugs lakshya
Sanskar- thank you lakshya you don't known how much happy i am right now.
Lakshya- thank you sab baad mai bolna abhi jaake dil ki baat bol ke aa bhabhi ko mai bhi ab ghar jaata hu chal bye
Sanskar- bye bro.
Sanskar's monologue- Swara i love you so so much aur aaj mai bolke rahuga hi that i love you.
Precap- Sanskar asked to do marriage with ragini


End of part-1.
Please do like and comment.
Sorry for errors.
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
Sujayricky thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

Awesome start
Update next part soon...


Thank you 😃
Sujayricky thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Sruthi007

Nice prologue

Continue soon


Thank you 😃
Sujayricky thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update

Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm


Thank you mansi 😃
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Part 1 was so Good, i loved it. So they both love each other and Now Sanskar knows Swara loves him too. But the precap will throw a huge hurdle in there life i think. Either way cant wait to read the next one. let me know when you update.
Sujayricky thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Part 1 was so Good, i loved it. So they both love each other and Now Sanskar knows Swara loves him too. But the precap will throw a huge hurdle in there life i think. Either way cant wait to read the next one. let me know when you update.


Thank you so much 😃
Will update next week 😆
lekahravi thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#89
enjoyed ur part-1...
sanskar and laksh ka convo amazing(laughing)
..😃...
Edited by leku - 9 years ago
robiayousaf thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Sanskar as Fattu😆Swara and Lucky both call him Fattu😆Swara ke samne to Sanskar ki bolti hi band ho jati hai😆
S:Mai Mai I.I.hi karta raha and end pe I'll miss u keh diya😆Poor baby.but love this update.So Sanskar will get marriedd to Ragini.Let wait how story get unfold and how SwaSan get together
waiting for the next part.thnx for PM

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".