Raglak DARK FF ::'YOU ARE MINE' last chap up!december 142016 - Page 53

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

chapter 10





Ragini and sanskar looked at Laksh and freed themselves from the hug, "lucky...why are you so late ?".sanskar asked with a smile.. " It's my home and my life,so back off and get out from my room..". Laksh replied in a cold tone, Ragini flinched at his tone when sanskar's eyes flashed with hurt ,giving a reassuring smile to ragini and glancing at Laksh sadly Sanskar walked out of the room silently.


Ragini glanced at Laksh with sadness, she felt bad for sanskar..she saw the hurt in his eyes...her chain of thoughts were broken when Laksh slammed the door shut...he pinned her to the wall and said "Wow!must say,you are amazing Ragini!". Laksh said with venom dripping from his each and every word. " at what...?",Ragini looked at Laksh with confusion . "oh!you don't know..how sad!how about I tell you Ragini?". Laksh asked in a cold tone,Ragini slowly nodded her head,she knew to only expect the worst but what Laksh next said completely shattered her world. " so then hear this straight, You are god damn amazing at 'two timing 'Ragini!!!how perfectly you were in my arms yesterday night and tonight you are in my brother's arms crying and smiling...like he is your long lost love , or may be he is your love! you guys had your own sweet time in past as friends,right? well I think I wasn't enough for you,wait a second..is it just him or there is more?".


" La..k.sh..". Ragini couldn't even complete the word..she felt like someone stabbed her heart...once...twice...thrice...the pain wasn't going away,she blinked back her tears...she just couldn't believe that Laksh...her Laksh could think something like that...how dare he? How can he? Anger ,hurt,shock...everything was there...but in that moment she just wanted Laksh to take back what he said...he just can't say it...he know that she loves him...only him...everyone knows that it's just Laksh for ragini...whole world knows that ragini loves Laksh.. She had only one boy in her life..it was Laksh..it is Laksh and it will be Laksh ...he was the first boy she fell in love with...he was the first boy she let to hold her hands...he was the first boy she let to hug her..kiss her...touch her and he was the first and only person she gave herself to ...he was her first in everything and he will be the last...because her world starts and ends with him...he is her first..last and true love...


Ragini wanted to slap him..hit him..yell at him for saying something like that...how can he just say something like that...? After everything that happened between them..couldn't he see her love ..? He considers her as a characterless girl ..?Ragini felt like someone was sucking her life out of her...she can tolerate anything...she can sacrifice everything in the name of her love for Laksh..but she can't bear the question raised on her character...that question is raised on her love...on her love for Laksh..and that question is raised by Laksh..


" Ragini...Ragini...". Laksh shook Ragini out of her thoughts...from the moment he said those words...ragini remained there like that without responding ..staring to the wall and she was getting paler with the seconds passed. Ragini looked at Laksh with eyes filled with pain...and the intensity of it made Laksh stop breathing for a second. Closing his eyes tight and clenching his fists he whispered " Now..you know the taste of your own medicine...now you know what I felt when you made the whole family believe that swara and I was having a relation when I was just consoling her as a friend...everyone apologised to swara when they got to know the truth..but no one came to me ,I bet still you don't think I deserve an apology...whatever happened it happened in my life too...but no ...for everyone wrong happened to Swara...wrong happened to Sanskar..wrong happened to ragini...and me? Well I am just an immature irresponsible boy...whatever happened is because of my stupid impulsive decisions..now I hate that logic Ragini and I hate that people who have that logic".

Ragini was overwhelmed... She didn't know what to say...still she tried to speak " so you didn't mean what you said..right..?", Laksh looked at Ragini and smirked ." No...sanskar loves swara and Ragini loves Laksh these are universal truths ". He laughed at his line and continued "And most important thing is Ragini can and will only love Laksh..for Ragini it's just Laksh...I am your first ,last and true love ".




My dear friends..here goes chapter 10...do hit like and comment..with lots...of love...
JiyaJiya
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nrmegha thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
jiya ur update is awesome,👏
waiting for your next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhi03

Brilliant update jiya🤗

Very well written

You have penned laksh and ragini's thoughts beautifully

Thank God laksh is still sane he didn't doubt ragini😆😆



Thanks a lot dear 😳

Well ,Laksh is sane or insane..I don't know 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice update...

The way you portrayed the thoughts of laksh and ragini...it was beautiful.



Thanks a lot dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Jiya awesome chapter..

I was egarly waiting for it.
Was really interesting
Pls update the next chapter asap.. waiting for it too
Thanks for the pm



Thanks a lot dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

Omg!!! Great update Jiyu.. 🤗


Those words by Laksh "No one came to me" - heat breaking😭


And those last lines 😳



Thanks a lot dear 😳

I know poor Laksh! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

My Jiya babu🤗 🤗

It was really painful to see Laksh behaving like this with Ragini. Ragini was hurt. How dare he? 😡

Then the smirk on knowing the truth. Ragini can never love someone else.

I love it..Update soon na 😃



Senoritaaa...Senoritaaa 😳

Thanks a lot dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RamyaSK

Jiyaaa! Oh God! It was too much rockinggg!! The way you portrayed Ragini's feeling! Her pain, her emotions! Chanceless! And at the end what Laksh said...Yipeee it was tooo much good!! So cute! Amazing Jiya! So just keep rocking girl!



Thanks a lot dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Annabelle96

woww!! such a nice update.. Loved it❤️



Thanks dear 😳

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