Raglak- shattered - Page 3

Wow 👏👏 Ragini should be a independent Girl Now 😉

Originally posted by: Berlin

Thanks to you all for reading my story. I know I make mistakes in English and hindi but still I am very happy that you all like my story.

I didn't know I would have many replay in short time. Thank you thank you! Sorry if I sound a little childish

Can anybody tell me what's is PM?

Once again Thank You all Of You

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

PM means Private Message dear😊

OMG this was AWESOME, i loved how Ragini left with her head held high, finally she told them some truths and left them, i like how DP went to her and asked why she was quiet, i think AP and DP were of parent to Ragini then Shekar and Shomi. them slapping Ragini before knowing the truth that is typical, people never want to know the truth just jump the gun.

Originally posted by: rbb1

OMG this was AWESOME, i loved how Ragini left with her head held high, finally she told them some truths and left them, i like how DP went to her and asked why she was quiet, i think AP and DP were of parent to Ragini then Shekar and Shomi. them slapping Ragini before knowing the truth that is typical, people never want to know the truth just jump the gun.

Please please post the next part soon

OMG damn good part !! Ragini was awesome, and she's going to get awesomer !!

Nice one..

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Chapter 3:

Ragini was not in her sense, she remembered how she meet Laksh, her engagements with him, then she learned her sister's love for Laksh. This time no one was there for her, she have her dadi whom she love. But her dadi use her for her revenge towards Swara and her mom. She can't call her mom; when her Dadi told her that it's was her fault that today she don't have her mom beside her, she break down. She entered Gadodia's house, and then pick her mom picture, while crying

Mama, why you left me alone. You don't love me? Why don't you take me with you? I don't want to live? Mudje tumhare zaroorat hai. She take all her mom pictures and put them in her suitcase. She remember her childhood in this house, but this house is no more her. She let a letter for her family and goes away her family. She has tears in her eyes, and her heart was bleeding, but she don't want to suffer anymore.

Gagodia's family entered the house, and they were shocked because all pictures of Jhanki with Sheckar and Ragini were missing. Dadi who came was equally shocked

Chor! Humare bahu aur Ladoo ki tasveer gayab Hain?

Sumi find the letter first, then she read in a loud voice

Papa, dadi I'm going, because mudje koi haq to live here. My mom passed away long time ago. When I need a father, you wasn't here, you was happy that you find your first love and your child, that you forgot me. Mama maut ki bad bi aapne ek pita ki fardh nehi ki. But yet I don't blame you, because you was happy. I cannot live here because, I don't want my past overpower me. Dadi you know I love you so much, but because of your hate, today I lost my husband. Because of your hate toward Swara and her mom, you never let me live my dreams. You decide to get me married with Laksh, and then instigate me to humiliate my mother-in-law. I love you so much that I don't argument with you, even today I cannot be angry with you. When papa was busy with her another family, you was with me all the time, you was my mom and dad, my guru. I'am sorry I have to go far away from you, but remember your Ladoo will always love you. Mudje appko koi chikayat nahi ho, I will be happy whenever I go. Just take care of you. Papa, please forgive me, because of me and my mom you was apart from your first love. Today you will not have to worry about me, I grew up long time ago, and I will live my life like I always do, far away from you, Swara ki mom, dadi, dada, and dida. I thinks this is the best thing, I have take all the pictures of my mother and me, because I will keep her alive with me. I don't want my memories disturb you. Bye all of you, tell Swara's mom to take care of my family, and Dadi don't accused them for my departure, it's my wish to go. Take care

Ragini

Dadi broke down with tears, and scream

My Ladoo, nahi you cannot leave your Dadi. I promise you I will never let my hate ruined your life again, please bagwan mudje aisi bara saza mat dogi. Kaisi jeete hain hum, Ladoo you are my reason to live, main tumhara souna kaise jeete ? Please come back to me, I promise you, you will not have to complaint again. Ladooo She cry her heart out, she knew she was the one who transform her Ladoo into a devil.

Sheckar mere Lado dundo, kyonki she is my reason to live. She is here whenever I need her, I am her mom, and a mom cannot be separate with her child. Please Sheckar Sumi was consoling her, but Dadi tell

This is your fault, my bahu died because you two. She does'nt want to be the cause if your separation, she died. And the story replay again, Ragini quit us for your and your beti's happiness. Birbi meri Ladoo tell me to not hate you, because of my Ladoo I will accept you as my bahu, but I will never forgive you to ruin my daughter's life

Ma why are you saying this ? Ragini is my daughter too

Beti ? Kaunsi beti ? Kya tum unki manpassan jana hai ? Nahi ! Do you know what afraid your daughter ? When she was sick konsa dawaian ? Nahi and you call you father ? Let me tell you, chalo main ap dono ki nafrat nahi karenge, meri Ladoo ki liye, sirf aur sirf unke liye With that she disapear in her room, tears flowing.

Sheckar hum apko sapki gunegar houn. Because of me today your daughter chali gayi. Maine use ek ma la pyaar nahi diya hai. Maybe if I have give her my love, today Ragini would be happy in her sasural

Sheckar doesn't reply because he is also at fault, all people have gone to their room.

Maheswari's mansion

Anapurna come to her room, and see the letter of Ragini. She hesitate, but after she read

To ma and dad

Mom-dad, I know I made a lot of mistake, but still you forgave me. Ye us galti be mudje maaf kardo, because if you read this letter, it would mean mere pyaar har gaya, and Laksh ki nafrat jeet gayi. Mom-dad I just want to tell you that I'm happy that I have got you as mom and dad. Thank you for giving me the right and the love of a daughter. Papa forgive me, Laksh ki khushi I have to broke your promise, today you lost a daughter and your bahu. However, I know you are happy because I take the right decision, and I became the old Ragini that's you all love. Take care of yourself mom, and please forgive me.

Your daughter

I have tell Laksh ki Ragini has changed, unke zid vaja se we lost our daughter She cry and DurgaPrasad was consoling her

Shshsh... don't cry ragini has take the right decision. She can move on, we cannot blame her, because we are at fault too. We showed her many dreams with Laksh

Laksh play with her emotion thrice. Tomorrow I will go to badi and I will search my daughter. Mano ya na mono Ragini was my daughter

Ok but this time stop crying, I cannot see you in pain

They go to sleep, but they cannot sleep, Ragini despite her deed was a wonderful girl.

Sanskar-Swara ki room

They entered, and they find Ragini's letter on the bed. It's Sanskar who read the letter

I will not make a novel. I want to tell you two, never let sadness come in your couple. Swara don't be angry on Sanskar uselessly, you have the chance to have a husband beside you, so don't make mistake. You know Swara, I always be jealous of you, because you have your dad and mom. Then when I know I will marry Laksh I was happy. But you fall in love with him, knowing the fact that I love him. Yes I was hurt, very hurt, then you have gone missing. Laksh has decided to marry me, I was verry happy, but yet again you come. I was happy that you came, because you was my sister ? Laksh told me that he still love you. Then the old Ragini gone, she begin to hate you to core of her soul, I think because of you Laksh were apart of me. But yet I'm sorry for giving you so much pain. Sanskar don't trouble my sister, you have to promise me to keep her very happy. No more tears in her eyes, I try to hate you two, but I cannot.

Take care of yoursel

Aapki Ragu

Sanskar, Ragini have to bear so much injustice, and me I was worried about my love for Laksh and about my family. I didn't think of Ragini, I remember Ragini's last real smile. It's was on her engagement with Laksh. She was very happy, and I came. I revealed Laksh truth and Ragini was sad, she was crying. I'm not a good sister

Yes and I'm not a good friend too, because it's me who begin the game. But lately, I came to know that I love you, and decide to stop, but I have too much poisonned Ragini's mind, that she didn't stop. But yet she tell us to be happy, and no more tears

We are also coupable, because of us she changed

Don't worry my duppate wali dost will be happy wherever she is. I'm sure and will pray that she got a husband who will love her more than himself

They hug each other and dose off.

Laksh room

He was in his bed, and think

When she was here, I want her to go, and when she already go, I want her back he smile at his thought, then he read the letter

Laksh maine aapse pyaar bohot kiya, I love you more than myself, this was my mistake. Tell me where is my fault ? In return of my love, I just wanted you and your love. Maine aapse bohot intezar, I have wait for the day, you will tell me that you love me. Maine kaha na aapse don't play with my emotions, but you have not listen to me ; You break my heart once again. I cannot hate you neither forgive you, lekin I will surely forget you. I give you what you want, and you gave me only pain ; atleast you could have let me virgin. You used me and I cannot forgive you for that. I don't try to kill my sister nor snatch her first love. I was in love with you, you was also my first love, and I was shattered when you told me that you don't love me. After that, Sanskar was mad, and you told my parent that you marry me, so I can help your bhai to recover. You used me then and today too. So tell me between us, which one is the fauter ? Main ya aap ? You can move on in your life, marry again, be happy again. I hope you will not use your would-be-wife, and love, because I don't want she become like I was. You have hurt me and my feeling so much. I don't know how to face the society because of you. You ruin my life Laksh ; I have divorce you, but I will never forget my past. If you have asked me once, I will have sign on theses paper. I don't know if I would agree to sign on divorce paper, but ya property paper I would agree.

Thanks for ruining my life Mr Laksh Maheswari

Ragini

Ragini is right, I have fall very low in the process to revenge my family. She love me more than herself, and I used her. When we consummate I didn't love her, but use her body, to gain her signature. I have hurt her very much.

He sleep with Ragini's letter.

In the morning, everybody was ready to go to Badi. Laksh was going down and no one talk to him.

Mom-dad, where were you going ?

Ji, tell you son that we have to rectify his mistake, so we are going to Badi

Laksh was hurt, but he know he was at fault, so he keep quite.

Main be, I mean me too want to go and talk to Ragini

Sanskar tell your bhai that we don't want his help, because he have made a lot of mistake, in the name of family

Swara I'm sorry

Sanskar tell your bhai to not talk to me, and keep his sorry for Ragini

So chale ? he said. They nod and go to Badi.

They arrive there, but they were disapoint when Sheckar tell them what Ragini said

I'm sorry, but Ragini is not there. She have take her belongings and I don't know where she is. I have searche her all the night but in vain

Dadi who was comming, was fumming to see Laksh here

Tum iss ghar aane me himmat kese hui Laksh ? If Ragini is not here, it's your fault. She loved you, and you, you throw her out of your house. Because of you today, I have not my Ladoo beside me. Main tumse iss ghar me aane dobara nahi dungi. Get out of this house, because of you this house is apart. You separed two behans, a dad-mom with their daughter, and a Dadi with her pote. Maine manti houn ki main Swara passan nehi hai, lekin mere Ladoo keliye, I can keep my hate apart, because she was my soul. So get out, varna main police ki call karouga. I don't want your explaination or your motivation to throw my daughter out. Anapurna ji, you have our Swara with you, isiliye main aapko nahi badtamizi, keep her haapy, because my Ladoo want that. Lekin ahenda Laksh mere samne mat hana, kyon ki main bool gayi, ki mere Ladoo was his patni.

Laksh get out of the house, Maheshwari's family was shoked, and Swara was happy. She hup her Dadi and said

You really like me now ?

I like you long time ago, but not your mom, because she was the cause of my bahu's suicide, and Ragini's sadness. Tum to bacche hai, I don't hate you, bit I was scared that you snatch Ragini's happiness to make your happiness, like your mom did.

Lekin if you doesn't accept my mom then...

Ha I have accept your mom, but just because of Ragini. When you have a scar in you heart it's difficult to erase this. With time, maybe I would accept you mom heartily

Ok Dadi, but Ragini ?

I'm sad that Ragini has go away, but yet I'm happy, because I'm sure she will find her jeevan saathi. Don't worry for her, when she will forget her past, she would come to us. I know my Laddo, she would definitely come to us She has tears in her eyes, then dadi tell

Sanskar come here He come, the dadi add

aap dono mere paon chuhe with confused look Swara ans Sanskar touch Dadi's feet

Maine aap dono achirvad nahi deti, issiliye, khush rako and always be understanding with each other

They hug Dadi, and they bid bye to Gadodia's family, with a sad smile, because Ragini was not returning to Maheswari's house.

So How was the chapter 3

Yay 3rd part thank you so much for posting it

Really nice update I loved how she left letters for everyone

I liked how much DP and AP love Ragini and care for her hope that happens in the show

I like how Ragini said Swara's mum that shows how much she needed a mum but she never got one, it's good he good all her mums memories ad photos with her

I like how dadi will willing to accept things because of Ragini, thank god she told Laksh to get lost

Thank you for the update can't wait to read what happens next I am sure Ragini will be stronger and better then she eve was can't wait