SWASAN OS- LIFE PARTNER

sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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**DT NOTE: This OS has been removed as its content has been plagiarised/copied from another writer's work. Copying and citing other people's work as your own is NOT allowed on IF. Please refer to forum rules for further guidance.**

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 9 years ago

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KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

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RES

UNRES...

Sujoy...This is too gud Man , the main thing i like in your OS is about framing Kavitha...minimal Importance to her...😆😆

Well..coming to OS..Sanskaar's surprise to swara was awesome ,dreamy...he cares for her..& swara giving black&blue to Kavitha was worthy one...She deserves it...

Their son AAyu & their love ...superbbb

U write very well dear...waiting for another OS from you 😊

Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res . Will read soon

Unres...

Awesome OS dear, i loved it , this time Swara has to wait for Sanskar nice reversal . Loved Swara and Kavitha conversation. Swasan Paris Date was so amazing .

Edited by NitaMikealson - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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A very sweet, simple and lovely piece, Sujay. Was so refreshing to read about Swara's deep love for her best friend, and how Sanskaar grows to love her, her selfless and unconditional adoration for him winning him over; making him forget that infatuation for Kavita which was never true love in the first place.

Lovely. A very mature take on their marriage, which has elements of both love and arranged marriage. After all, friendship and trust are often the basis on which an enduring, pure love is built.

SwaSan's son Aayu was very cute. Waiting to get a li'l sis haan? 😉 😳 Well his parents are certainly more than willing to do what it takes, to gift him one. ☺️ 😉

Cheers

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome piece of work, loved it to bits.

Jay thanks for the PM

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Krishna Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice os love it surprise was awsom...waiting for more os from u

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Anusha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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beautiful os suju..simply superb thnx for pm!!!!!

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Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awww...awsum...sooo cute yaar. ...loved it...

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Brooo... First of all a big thank you for writing in English...

Amazing.. Fantabulous.. Man awesome update.. Loved it soo much..

It's all been a pleasure to read your work.. Simple.. Elegantly written...

That surprise for Swara was awesome..

Swaras love for Sanskaar..
Cavity dumping Sanskaar..

Sanskaar hearing their convo.. Was upto the mark...

Simply loved it to the core...

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