SwaSan OS - Love: across time and beyond space - Page 2

Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife

Thousand lives, one love...

Such an amazing love story! I could imagine each and every scene! Truly a beautiful piece! 👏

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Fascinating piece Nyna!! Super amazing! Unfulfilled love in all the lives finally fulfilled in this one👏👏 You gave a whole new depth to SwaSan... I loved how you seamlessly joined all the stories in a flow, start to end... Different ages, different locations, names, faces, different stories even... Super awesome!! Eager for more from you😃

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

oh my goodness

how can this be your first os

it is beautify written you really came up with a new consent that is absolutely fabulaous

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

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So many wonderful stories packed into one. I already read it three times, to decide whom i like the most😆. But each story had it own uniqueness and Spark that i like all of them . But after much contemplation i decided my favourite was Aakrand-Archini and Kiyoshi and Sayuri . I cant Believe this is your first OS. It was really beautiful do write more . 👏 .

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Fascinating read, Nyna. Will want to re read to greedily soak in the layered characters & portrayals you've put in. 🤗

Will un-res tomo from my lappie, hate typing from android (almost as much as I hate the resurrected Kavita track, so you can imagine!) 😆

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So moving, so powerful, Nyna my dear. The concept of a love spanning time, even space---the concept of 2 souls somehow linked together for all eternity, is such a lovely one. Your piece was so evocative, so poetic almost, it reminded me of several gems I am very fond of:

Rabindranath Tagore's absolute gem of a poem "Unending Love";

Rumi's quote ""When you seek love with all your heart, you shall find it's echoes across the universe"" ;

Paulo Coelho's quote from the Alchemist: "" And, when you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.""

The opening title of the film Prince of Persia 😉 "" It is said some lives are linked across time. Connected by an ancient calling that echoes through the ages. Destiny.""

😊 I really loved this, I re read it 3 times, to soak in the different tales, the different characters. And indeed, as Sanskaar said, it was wonderful to imagine that the two of them had journeyed across the ages, through different worlds, to be able to finally belong to each other. Twists of fate had ensured that their love remained unrequited in their previous lives; or even if requited, had remained unfulfilled, impermanent. Truly, it was such a benediction that these two long suffering souls, yearning for each other, had found togetherness at last...

My favorite out of the characters, were Aakrand and Archini; and Tarrin and Sidra. The tale of Tarrin & Sidra reminded me, though tangentially in terms of the theme---enchantment with space---of the film, Gattaca. Have you seen it?

There is a lovely line there, which goes: ""Of course, they say every atom in our bodies was once part of a star. Maybe I'm not leaving... maybe I'm going home.""

😊 As you can see, I have magpie like tendencies in terms of remembering and filing away quotes and dialogues, which really touch me in some way. Thanks for this very profound piece of work, which made me recall so many cherished memories.

Loved it, my dear. Please do write more, I loved the way your imagination literally spanned so many worlds, time frames and characters.