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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you friend's 😃 ..thought to wind up this story soon...

CHAPTER 6

Sanskar with his family reached mumbai(they live in mumbai)...its been one day they reached...sun raises ...pleasant morning...crow started its sounds or noise standing near window..(I hope conveying some msg...)...actually crow sounds irritate morning sleep for some ppl...but for many ppl especially elders they consider crow sound has blessings from their elders who lives after death...

Laksh:bhai pls close ur room curtains..its disturbing my sleep...

Sanskar:(sleepy)haaa laksh...

Laksh:( too sleepy) pls do it soon bhai..(searching blanket to cover his face)

Sanskar:(slept) no response...

Someone entering sanskar room...went inside washroom bring two mug of water..who gave angry look to both idiot brothers...that person started to Murmur .."spoiled my sleep..enjoyed the trip without me...and finally not even informed about ur arrival...laksh u im not going to leave and sanskar my bestie...now my enemy..who accompany his brother...u also gone"...standing near laksh both hand had two mug respectively...same time poured the water on brothers..both jerk at same time..

Laksh n sanskar:Ragini !!!tum...pagal hogiya kya??? Why u poured water???

Sanskar:hey mental case???if u r angry on laksh..show to him not me 😡 oh ragu ...u spoiled my dream..kya romance ...tu karaab kardhiya... 😭 I do no when I will meet her..losing my patience...

Laksh:arrey Ragini really u mental case only...bhai was right..even u spoiled my dream with ...laksh(thinks)...oh shit what I'm telling her ...what she will think about me???...

Ragini:(angry n possessive)..wait sanskar I will deal with u later...and u laksh maheswari complete it what u were saying ...spoiled ur dream with????...hmmm tel...shanaya right...

Laksh:(thinks)oh god ...shanaya what the hell ...why I will dream about her...my foot...how I will tel this buddhu...my dream was with u...oh no she may take me wrong...till now im not sure about my feelings towards her...but now anyhow want to cover this dream topic..come on laksh u can!!!
"woh Ragu...dont be stupid...from where this shanaya came idiot...ok will tel u ..my dream was with sunny Leon..kya structure kal woh video "...stops n (thinks)..oh laksh kya bol reheye yeh...im dead now...

Sanskar:(afraid n tensed) laksh stop it..why blabbering nonsense..

Ragini:(suspicious) tu chup sanskar...ok u dreamt about sunny leon...then kal kya video...baathoa muje...just tel me the truth ...what u both were doing yesterday ???..wait video mathlab...sanskar tumara laptop kaha yeh???

Sanskar:ragu woh neeth mei bakwas kar rahei...chodana late hoge...

Laksh:haaa ragu ...leave na in sleepy I'm blabbering..(thinks) oh god to escape from dream topic but I fall into my own pit..

Ragini:no no u both were lieing...i will I check laptop ...in browser history will see..wait..
She took lap n on it...

Sanskar n laksh both r shock..do no how to stop her...sanskar(thinks)..oh god if she sees what she will think about me...nooo I should not let it happen...laksh in open mouth...(thinks)..for sure yeh ladki wont leave this easily...

Sanskar:(tensed) nooo Ragini...you cant touch my personal things...I have Some personal folder so pls don't open it...

Ragini :(clever) don't worry sanskr..im not going to open any drive...just browser samjhi..(she opened the browser)

Laksh:(relax n lil tense)laughed bhai yeh pagal will not leave this so easily...we cannot escape bhai..so be ready to face her..giggled...

Sanskar:nooo...i have shame lucky...

Ragini:(shocked n digust)...chiii..u both r digusting...sanskar when u started to watch this kind type of chiii...coz of this lucky only ...hey u laksh ...if u want to spoil urself..go head..but don't dare to spoil my friend...got it..

Laksh:hey drama queen stop it...before ur friend..he is my brother u mind it ...we see whatever we want..u don't need to poke ur nose in this...ok babe...no small kid...

Ragini:(irritated)...u calling me kid n baby...u idiot,stupid..and...

Sanskar: You both stop it...ragini leave this...im sorry my friend...pls change topic...

Laksh and Ragini:(pout face) ok bhai n sanskar (respectively)..

Ragini:yeah. Sanskar now tel about ur dream (excited)...who is she???show her photo..

Laksh:hey buddhu wait ...he will tel he won't ran way...

Ragini:shut up ..i know..now u don't poke ur nose between friends ...

Sanskar: U both again started...ragu I wont tel u if u fighting with laksh means...

Ragini:ok ok I will shut my mouth ...and laksh also..(sign laksh to kept quite)
Laksh mesmerized by her cute action...just nodded his head..

Sanskar understand laksh lost in Ragini...without disturbing his brother..narrated whatever happened in trip except laksh n Priya convo...sanskar told he somehow got her friend number for further purposes...he don't want to create pblm for laksh...especially because of me...he told his feelings towards swara ...to Ragini...

Ragini(happy n excited...hugged): I'm so happy for u sanskar.. I cant believe u fall for girl...till now lucky told as if in college all girls r behind u...but u behind one girl...really I want to see her...i hope even she joined our college...if it so then full masti only...

Sanskar:even IM hoping the same ragu..lets see what god decided...aur tum bathoa kaisa thaa tumara interview...

Ragini(remembers something n angry):woh shanaya irritated so much sanskar...she continuously talking about l...(thinks) what u r trying to tel...noo sanskar will doubt ..."kuch nahi sanskar leave na..and yeah today I have to submit my school TC n some certificate in college for verification at 2 pls come with me"..

Sanskar:(understand..shanaya was talking about laksh so only ragu was angry): Oh ok good u selected but tel me which branch u choosed...and (thinks)will send laksh with ragu they can spend some time...

Ragini:woh actually sanskar they told me to take electrical coz some 4 or 5 girls only applied for EE..so they making girls strength lil more...but I asked computer science ..u know me na I cannot stand with core subject of electrical..even I heared in one semester itself they writing 9 or 8 papers oh god I cannot sanskar...but still my branch not yet confirm..today only have to ask in administration office...

Sanskar(happy hearing EE): Hey ragu pls take EE..swara might be join our college also..but sure she will choose EE..U don't worry ...if she joins u can only help me pls...but I will help u studies pls pls pls...

Ragini: But sanskar...if she not joint our college means..i will alone na...and how u will help..u r mechanical branch???

Sanskar(thinks):Ragini is right...i cant take risk by sending Ragini in EE...coz more boys strength...but how I will ...suddenly thinks ...don't worry Ragini u don't take EE...prefer CSE itself...later if swara joined ...there is option in our college after first unit test we can change our branch...(its my college option) according to our interest...but ragu i wont compel you for my selfishness ok..if u comfortable with computer science u carry on..dont need to think about me ok...

Ragini:ok sanskar no problem...today anyways i will know which branch i got...so chill...

Sanskar and Ragini both smiled..sanskar thought laksh staring Ragini...he turned and shocked by the view ...oh god lucky boy sitting and sleeping..ragini staring in angry..

Ragini:see him..he wont grow up sanskar...sleeping baby..(concern)ok sanskar make him lie on bed ..im leaving..mom will be waiting for me..ok come at 2 and pick up me...bye ..tel this baby also bye after wake up...

Sanskar:ok madam ...thanks for concern towards laksh (smiles naughtly)..and will be the by 2..take care..bye
She left MM by taking blessing from elders...sanskar made laksh comfortable in bed...went to washroom..



Precap:Ragini and kushi fight..swasan lost in each other..
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Finally finished convo type..
Tel me its good or bad...or shall I continue in POV...
SORRY if anybody wasted ur time...

Pls feeback(good n bad also)...

Thank you.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome leku 👏 👏
Ragini too good 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Nice update love RagLak & sanky friendship btw Sanskar or Lakshya ki age kya h
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
well written👏
w8ing for ur next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice update.
Thanks for the pm.
Waiting for your next update

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