THE REKINDLING FIRE - RAGSAN & SWASAN FF PART 4 PAGE 15 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome update

The love story of sangini was nice.
Sanskar apne zid keliye poori Rath hostel ke bahar khada raha, vo apne Pyar keliye kuch bhi Kar sakta Hai.
Waiting for your next update

Sakkiyah...
I'm very Happy that u liked Sangini / ragsan story...
Yupp Sanskaar was so stubborn then ...
I'll update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hasu Swara ki entry ho gayi
Next chapter keliye waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u guys for all your likes & comments...thanks for the support...I know many r disappointed with my pairing of RagSan , but i can't tolerate even imaging Kavitha with sanskaar in my FF .

PART 4

NEXT DAY

Both the girls sitting at a open restaurant

"swara thum ne last festival ko ghar kyun nahi ayi...?" asked ragini

"ragz..kya bathavoon ...MBBS...kyun liya maine yeh? jab bhi lab & dissection..arey ladkon ko line maarne ki time bhi nahi mil raha hai ..tho ghar kaise avoon? "answered swara

"kithni besharam ho thum aur Lucky kyun nahi aya thumhare saath " said ragini laughingly

"Ragz ..us bathameez ki naam bhi math lo..MBBS se jyadhaa wo Dance pe bahuth interested hai yaar aur tho aur har roz ek ladki ke saath.date pe jatha hai ..thu ye sab chod thera batha..koi acha kasaa ladka mila kya yahaa ?"teased swara

"wo...hai...ek ladka " reveled Ragini with shy

"ahaaa...achaaa koun haiii bathaa " teased swara

Ragini explained everything to swara ,listening to all swara said

"agar thume bhi pasan hai tho dheri kis baath ki?"

"par thume tho patha hai na papa ji ke baare mein " ragini said

"thu ...badepapa ka chintha math kar ...main sab sambhaloongi " assured swara

"par ...swara ..hume uske baare mein jyadhaa nahi pathaa...tho "ragini said with confusion

"arey ...thu use dhikha mujhe...main test karoongi "said swara & turned her head other direction ,then she saw sanskaar talkig to a guys.He wore blue jeans , white shirt & balck blazer,looking him swara lost & mesmerized.Not shifting her gaze swara called for ragini

"ragz...dekho dekho...wahaa...ragz" said swara & turned to see ragini hiding her face with the menu card.

"Ragz kya hua? "asked swara

"wahi hai wo ladka jiske baare mein maine bathaya tha "said Ragini

"koun ?" asked swara for confirmation

"arey wo ...black blazer blue jeans " confirmed ragini

"shit..."swara sighed & asked ragini "Naam kya hai uska?"

"Sanskaar ...Sanskaar maheswari .Kyun?" asked Ragini

"just wait ...i'll be back "saying this swara left from there. Ragini was tensed seeing swara going near him.

Swara went straight to Sanskaar "Hiii "she greeted him

Sanskaar tried hard to remember her , Seeing him confused she said " don't u remember...yesterday...Train..bouquet "she hinted him

"wo...hai...i'm so sorry ...main ek bouquet bhaki tha na aapko " he smiled

"actually mujhe aapse kuch jharoori bath karni hai "said swara

"acha...chaliye baitke bath karthe hai " sanskaar said & moved to a table near by

"Ab bathayiye kya bath karni hai ?" he asked her seeing the menu card

"wo..wo " stammered swara

"dekhiye...aap kyun tension le rahi hai? main bahuth cool insaan hoon..jo bhi kehana hai keh dhijiye... "assured sanskaar

"I LOVE YOU " blurted swara

"What..." shocked Sanskaar

"Sorry ...maine apni naam nahi bathayaa...I'm swara , MBBS second year ...yaha apni cousin ko dekhne ayi hoon ..." explained swara & then again

"I LOVE YOU " said once again swara

"yeh aap kya keh rahe ?" questioned confised sanskaar

"love at first sight ...jab se aap ko dekhi hoon ..thab se sirf aap hi nazaar a rahe mujhe...teek se soya bhi nahi raath bar " said swara with a shy smile.

"Par...I'm sorry ... " answered sanskaar

"Kyun?? mein aap ko acha nahi laagi ? kuch kaami hai kya ? " asked swara

"aisi koi bath nahi...actually I'm already committed " confirmed Sanskaar

"Koun hai wo ladki ? " asked swara

"hai koi yaar ...70's ki heroine ki tarah sifr dekhthi rehathi hai..par kuch bolthi hi nahi ? " replied sanskaar

"tho mere baare mein sochiye naa ... " said swara teasingly

"arey kahaa na..i'm committed ...plz apna time waste math kijiye ...yeh possible nahi hai " Said Sanskaar

"kisi bhi tarah ki possibility nahi hai kya ?" asked swara

"Nahi hai " said sanskaar

"Pakka ?" asked swara

"Ha...Damn Pakka " sanskaar answered hitting the table

"Atleast ...as ..a second Family " she whispered to sanskaar bending over the table..

"What ?? " shouted sanskaar in shock

"Mathlab...koi second thought bhi nahi hai kya ?" swara composed herself

"arey kahaa na yaar ...possible nahi hai..agar chahe tho ek kaam kar next life mein aise bhi khoobsurathi ke saath padiha ho thab try karenge ..ab tho nahi hoga...Nahi " answered sanskaar

"pakka ? " she asked once again

"haa..pakka..." he answered in irritation

"Sure ? " she irritated him once again

"arey kithni baar bolu yaar thujhe " sanskaar shouted in disgust

"ragzz...come here...he is okay for me ' swara shouted sanding & calling ragini

Sanskaar was confused to see her calling & Ragini hiding her face with menu card

"hey...Ragini...aur thum...? " asked sanskaar confused

"Wo Ragini...main...Cousins " confirmed swara laughing

"Shit swara ..yeh kya kiya thune ' whispered ragini to herself & was about to escape .
But sanskaar came running to her & blocked her way

"Yeh kya Ragini...agar thume kuch bhi jaan na hai tho mujhse pooch sakthi thi naa.." said sasnkaar

But Ragini Didn't reply , again sanskaar spoke

"dekho thum aise bhi silent rahogi tho mera kya hoga...kuch dhin ke baadh mujhe koi nahi milegaa " said sanskaar teasingly

Ragini looked at him in confusion & concern

"Teek hai...akhiri baar kehrahaa hoon sunlo " warned sanskaar

Looking in all directions suddenly he joined his hands & asked her "Please Ragini...please Love me "

"awww...how sweet...agar Ragz thumhari jagah main hothi na tho yes keh dhethi hoon...bolonaaa yaar ..." Swara Pushed Ragini

Ragini lifted her eyes to meet sanskaar , he & swara were waiting anxiuosly for her response ,but she didn't speak just gave a smile to him & ran away ...

Understanding this both Sanskaar & swara gave Hi-5 to each other.

The days went good for new love birds , they talked , roamed & enjoyed accompanied by swara always with them.sanskaar always pulls swara's leg whenever they meet.

The other day Ragini received phone from her house to immediately come over there as they had fixed her alliance. Ragini was hell tensed.They immediately packed their bags & ragini asked swara to call sanskaar to station.

"wo abhi thak ayi kyun nahi swara ?" asked tensed Ragini

"chill Ragz..abhi abhi meri bath hui sanskaar se...yehi pass mein hai wo " said swara

After few minutes Sansakaar reached & went near Ragini & Swara .Seeing Ragini sad & tensed

"Arey kya hua...is se hamari faidha hi hai...dekho thum ghar javoge , ladke ko dhekoge , pasan nahi hai kahoge ..thumahre ghar waale reason poochenge tho thum araam se hamari baare mein bathavogi..bass...kyun swara? teek kaha naa " asked sanskaar

"u r right sanskaar " patted swara his shoulders

Still ragini was tensed , then sanskaar turned her towards him & hold her hand

"Dekho Ragini ..jab thume pehali baar dekha thab thumhari naam bhi nahi patha mujhe , abhi bhi thumhare baare mein jyadhaa nahi patha..thumhare parivaar ke baare mein bhi nahi patha...par ithna patha hai ki main thumse bahuth pyaar kartha hoon aur thumhare bhina jeena mushkil hai ...ye sab kyun ? kaise? kab hua ...mujhe bhi nahi patha...agar thumhare ghar waale poochenge tho bhi mere pass jawab nahi hai...ek baath yaadh rako...hamari shaadi tho jharoor hogi par wo sab ke ashirwad se ya phir sab ke maarzi ke khilaaf ye thumhari parivaar ki haathon mein hai aur kahaa thak mere baare mein...maa , papa nahi hai..sirf bahiyya ,bhabhi ..aur dekhne mein tho handsome hi hoon...acha job hai tho reject karne ki unhe koi reason hi nahi hai ...hai na swara '" explained sanskaar

"very well said Sanskaar " said swara

"haa...agar thum wapas nahi ayi mere pass tho meri chintha math karna...ye swara hai naa...main is se shaadi karloonga ...ready na swara ? asked sanskaar teasinglyy

"wo..main tho kab se ready hoon " winked swara to sanskaar

"swara..."shouted Ragini & hit her

Swara & Sanskaar bursted into laughter..., then sanskaar gave ragini a gift packet

"yahaa nahi...ghar jaane ke baadh kholo " said sanskaar

Seeing this swara too extended her hand with smiling face...

"kya?? "asked sanskaar

"Gift...meri liye nahi layaa " pouted swara

"wo...swara ..layaa tha naa...bahuth badaa wala gift ...par raasthe mein chori ho gayiii " teased sanskaar

"ahaa...kithne jhoote aur kanjhoos ho thum " said swara

"Arey wo dekho...train start ho rahaa...chalo chalo..."hurried sanskaar

Ragini & swara stepped up the train , train started...

Ragini sitting ,swara stood at the door way & waved bye to sanskaar.Then sanskaar ran to swara to give his orange color sweater to her, she immeditealy took it from him

"Arey gift poocha tha...jab thak gift na dhoon thab thak ye rakhle... " smiled sanskaar & stopped running .

NEXT DAY
MAHESWARI MANSION

Everyone assembled in hall , Ragini revelaed Sanskaar's Matter to the family ,swara sat beside her...

"Ragini ...kya hum yehi parvarish dhiya thujhe...hum ne thumhari rishthe ke liye unhe vadhaa kiya...hum apni bath se peeche nahi hat sakthe...thumhari rishtha hamari maarzi se hogi ..." Durga prasad vented out his anger

"Par...bhaisa ek baar uski bhi tho sunlo " said shekar

"bas...ab wo bhi thumhari raasthe pe chalegiii kya " stopped durga prasad

"lekin bade papa..."swara started to speak

"Swara...kithni baar kaha hai thujhe jab baade bath kar rahe hai thab beech mein nahi bolthe "shouted durga prasad

swara too kept mum ,tears rolling from ragini's eyes...

"kal ladke waale a rahee..annapurna ji uski thayyari khijiye..." saying this he left

one by one everyone left ,Ragini ran into her room & locked herself.swara stood helpless

NIGHT 10 PM

swara went to ragini's room .Ragini sitting in a corner & crying folding her legs

"Ragz...aise rone se kuch nahi hone walaa hai " spoke swara

Ragini lifted her head to see swara , swara went near ragini's back & took out the gift packet of sanskaar

"kholke tho dekho ..." said swara

but ragini didn't take the packet , then swara started opening it.Swara took out the thing in the packet & showed it it Ragini

"dekho tho kya dhiya usne " said swara

Ragini wiped her tears & took that in her hand.Its a Mangalsutra

"jaanthe ho is ka meaning Ragz..."asked swara

Ragini touched Mnagalsutra & cried

"Ragz...meri baath maano...sanskaar ko miss math karo...uske jaisa ladka thujhe kabhi nahi milegaa...us mein wo saari qualities hai wo ek ladki chahthi hai...chale jao uske paas " said swara

"par swara...papa ji "ragini spoke

"i know ragz ..bade papa nahi maanenge...khudh hi soch lo agar thum ghar chod kar chale gayii tho ek saal ,dho saal dhukh honge yahaa par agar thum bhina maarzi shaadi karoge tho zindagi bhaar dhukh ke lavaa kuch nahi milegaa thujhe...i know ab hamare pass bade papa ko convince karne ka tym nahi hai ..." explained swara

Ragini wiped her tears & stood .

Swara & Ragini managed to come out of the house & swara arranged Taxi for ragini to reach railway station.Ragini hugged swara & left.

NEXT DAY MORNING 7AM

Shomi brought the letter of ragini to Durga prasad which explained that she is leaving the house. Durga prasad was shattered & passed order to all that no one should be in contact with ragini.

DARJEELING

Ragini went to sanskaar's hotel ,seeing her sanskaar understood everything .Then they got married in a temple.After 1 week of marriage Ragini called her father , who didn't speak with her.But she didn't stop , everyday she called them.

After 3 months of their marriage ,Ragini & sanskaar left for London.sanskaar was a ideal husband , he always made sure that ragini was happy always.Soon their happiness was doubled with the arrival of their son Aaryan , ragini terribly missed her family.Everything was going fine , one day ragini asked sanskaar to take to her shopping.sanskaar promised her that he will be back early from office & take her with him.But due to his extended meeting he didn't make early.So ragini said him that she will come to his office.

Ragini saying to pari bahabhi to look after aaryan she drove to sanskaar's office. While taking turn her car collided with a truck which made car reverse & scratched the road a meter away.

Sanskaar still in office received a call from hospital , he was shattered ,tears rolled from his eyes,He rushed to hospital like a mad man.

HOSPITAL

sasnkaar enquired from reception & ran to ICU.He met the doctor who was treating her .He was continously crying all the way.

"doctor...how is she ? " asked sanskaar

"You...?"questioned sanskaar

"she is my wife...how is she?" asked again sanskaar

"oh..i'm so sorry ...due to the accident the blood was clotted in her head , now we can't do anything..go & meet her " left doctor saying this.

he walked to her with trembling steps , wiping his face.She saw him & raised her hand

"i'm going na..."stammered ragini

"shhh...thum kahi nahi ja rahi ho..."said sanskaar holding her hand

"thank you sanskaar...for making my life beautiful,i love u so much...u never made feel regret for leaving my family " saying this she kissed his hand

" No ...No Don't do this to me " he whispered in her ears with tears rolling from his eyes.

"I...I'm going ...Please Promise me ,...ki thum hamare bete ko meri parivaar se milavoge...jo pyaar maine ko dhiya ...wo mere beta ko milnaa chahiye...please unhe bathav ki mujhe maaf kare...karoge na..." broken words came from her.

"Aisa kuch nahi hogaaa...hum chalenge India ko wapis...bas...thu mujhe chod ke math jaa...do u hear that?"He shouted at her...

"Promise Me...pllee..pleasee " She trembled with her words.

"Yeah...haa..promise...teek hai "he pacified her making promise to her holding hand , which was dropped at the very moment without life.

"RAGINIII..." he shouted his heart out .

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He completed saying the whole story to his son , tears rolled from his eyes,he wiped his tears .He started saying the story to his son but now Annapurna,sujata,ramprasad,shekar,shomi,kavitha,adarsh & pari were all present.allw ere teary eyed.Unkown to them another man was also in tears listening to this,Durga prasad wiped his tears & left to his room...

NEXT DAY
MORNING 9AM

Annapurna , Sujata & shomi went to Sanskaar's room

"hume maaf kardho beta..kal wo ghusse mein ' said annapurna

"maa plz...main samajh saktha hoon aap plzz maaf math maangiye " answered sanskaar

"aur swara kahaa hai...jab se ayi hoon thab se nahi dhikhi " asked sanskaar

"beta...wo ab children speacialist hai..pass ki hospital mein hi kam kar rahi hai...par hamare saath nahi reh rahi...jab se Ragini ki mouth ki kabar mili thab se wo hum sabse ghussa hai...wo ghar chod kar chali gayii...shaadi ke ayegiii" said shomi with tears in her eyes

"Aunty ..ap mujhe uski number dhijiye " asked sanskaar

AFTER HALF AN HOUR
HOSPITAL, CHILD CARE UNIT

A girl wearing pink chudidhar in her mid twenties examining a child.Her mobile rang ,unknown number falshed on mobile.She didn't pick up.Again it rang, then she attened the call

"Hello " she said

"Hello...swara "he asked

"haa..koun?"she asked

"I LOVE YOU " he said with a smile

"what ?" she shouted

"Love at first sight...jab se aapko dhekha thab se aap ke baare mein soch raha hoon..raath bhi teek se soyaa nahi " he chuckled

"see...mujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai...plzz don't waste your time "she replied

"mathlab kisi bhi ratah ki possibility nahi hai kya?" he asked

"nahi..." she replied

"pakka..."he asked once again

"haa..pak.." she didn't complete her sentence "Sanskaar "she said

"hahaa...not bad swara...main Ragini ke ghar mein hoon...ye kya thum mujhe milne nahi ayiii? " asked sanskaar

"abhi a rahi hoon " saying this she ran to her car

AFTER 10 minutes

Swara reached maheswari mansion, seeing her all were happy but she went near shomi

"maa sanskaar kaha hai?" asked swara

"wo upar kaamre mein hai " answered shomi

swara ran into his room , sanskaar lifted his head from mobile & felt happy to see her,but she stood there with tears in her eyes.seeing this sanskaar came towards & asked

"swara...kaise ho? kya hua? ye tears kya hai?" asked sanskaar

she didn't speak , she just hugged him & cried.He understood that she was missing ragini ,he kept his hand on her hand in a consoling way.

To be continued...

Thanks for Reading

Suhasini
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb hasini 🤗
imagining nag as sanskar,sherya as swara..iam happy ki here is da end of ragini character..waiting for nxt part i knw ki frm nxt part i'l njy da story it v'l b ful of swasan!!!!!!
Edited by anushapinky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... Nice update dear... Keep it up... Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
phew!!!!!!! kaffi long update tha SR! BUT😆
REALLY NIC1!😳
LOVED IT! BUT NOT MORE THAN U!🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

phew!!!!!!! kaffi long update tha SR! BUT😆

REALLY NIC1!😳
LOVED IT! BUT NOT MORE THAN U!🤗❤️


SM...thank you.. 😳kal se main busy ho javoongi..uske baadh short update hi milega...isliye aaj ithnaa lambaa update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Resed now... My phone... Unresed...

Shuhasini... 🤗 love you yaar for this fantabulous update...

Finally.. Finally... San... Gini.. Story over... Phewww... I find some brotherlyhood in between San gini.. That's y it is awkward for me... 😆

Man nice love story.. Man that was.. Nicely written.. Love it..

Swara love vanished in a second.. But she didn't show that.. I'm proud of her...

That convo in between swasan at coffee show was awesome..

So lucky entry in next update.. I'm okay with Swa lak...

So dp changing for good...

Swara home so we can get more Swasan.. Moments..

I'm waiting... 😛

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
suhasini 😊
haha u are right we cant tolerate sanskar with any other girl except swara..
but the story demands ..so its ok..
so swara was an important part of sanskar's life
she was bubbly and cute
so they mate finally
waiting for the next update
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
The bonding between swaragini was nice.
And the way swara tested sanskar was nice. She proposed him, and tried all the possible ways to accept her love. She was really cute.
The friendship bond between swara and sanskar is also nice. Swara always supported her sister. And she had a great role in the love story of ragini and sanskar.
The love story of Ragsan was nice
But destiny had other plans.
The love story of Ragsan was heart touching.
And the phone conversation between swasan was nice.
Their first meeting was recreated in the phone conversation.
Really loved the whole update
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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