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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

eee...!god...!anu...i cant express my feelings...!update was superb...!pyaar recognize karnay may late nahi karni hai...warna this will happen...!iam excited...!will he say abt his feelings to her before she leaves...?devuuudaaa...! chepali chepali chepali...sanskar chepali atani feelings...😊upadate soon dear next part.


tapu dear nxt part kosam wait chey telustadi v'l he express r nt!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART::6

@MM...

Everybody r presented in hall..except sanskar..

Swara nd shekar had packed there luggage!!

Sujata- (teary eyes) shekar ji plz aap math jaye na.. I can't stay with out shona :(

Ram-ha shekar yei bi aapka ghar jaisa hi toh hai na plz shekar ruko.. aur swara ko hum aapna beti samja shekar..

Shekar-(sorry) nahi ram nd sujata ji hame jana hoga aur kitni din rukegi hum yaha, mein naya ghar liya..

Sujata- (went to swara) shona i'l miss u so much.. beta take care of yourself..(crying)

Swara- maa plz dnt cry na i'l cal u daily maa.. i'l miss u so much maa.. nd hugges her tightly (wid teary eyes).. maa thanks alot for loving me like ur own daughter..

Chintu-shona how can i stay widout u in my room alone shona.. aur kiske saath chocolates share karungi..(cries)

Swara-hugges him iam sorry bt i shuld go chintu..

Aftr few min whn swara nd shekar are above to leave..

Sanskar came home nd shockd to see them leaving..

Swara- (went to him) sanskar v r leaving.. i wont distrube u anymore.. u'l b happy frm now..goodbye!! (without any emotion)

Sanskar-bt swara i need to say somethng very imp to u
(lovely look)..

~
Shhh swara u have to listen i love u damnit because of my ego i didn't realised i love u swara love u so much (hugging her tightly) she too resopned i love u too sanskar..
~

Swara- (she didn't let him speak) papa lets go.. both shekar, swara hugged sujata, ram nd chintu for the last time..nd took a leave!!!

Now sanku realised he is dreaming as if he confessed..

******

Sujata, ram nd chintu r upset..they r looking at sanskar as if they wanna kill him.

Sujata- (went to sanskar) sanskar because of ur rude behaviour swara nd shekar ji lft da house (disgusting look)..

Sanskar-immediately went to his room (don't leave me swara).. (Swara's words were echoing round his brain)

~
BGM

Door talak hai soona falak
Ab dhoonde tujhko kahaan
Tu hai kidhar na aaye nazar
Aa sun le ye iltejaa..

Mat ja re mat ja, mat ja re mat ja
Mat ja re mat ja, mat ja re mat ja..

Teri kami hai saansein thami hai
Tanha hai dil mera...

Ye kaun sa rishta hai
Meri aankhon se rissta hai
Ye kaun sa rishta hai..

Teri aankhon se rissta hai
Do dil ke paaton mein ye battaa hai pista hai
Do dil ke paaton mein ye batta hai pista hai
Zidd pe bas dil ko apne tu aise na jhutla..

Mat ja re mat ja, mat ja re mat ja
Mat ja re mat ja,mat ja re mat ja.
~

Maa ne sahi kaha because of me u lft da house.. swara because of my ego this was happening.. I can't leave widout u shona plz come back to me.. i can't imagin my life widout u.. wht if u don't love me now?? (tensed) no if u say 1000times that u don't love me now also i won't believe it.. u may lie to me bt ur eyes clearly says till ua last breath u love me only.. i'l wait for u swara!!

*Flashback*

Before two years, when he above to enter cls he heared a cute voice laughing.. Playing with two girls wearing mini dress till her tights enjyng her heart out..

Girls- swara chalo na now stp playing dear lets go to cls (yea its our swara)

Swara- hm okay baba chalo hahahah..

Sanskar- he was lost aftr seeing her pretty angelic face (ofho sanky stp staring her u shuld concentrate on studies not on that girl this is not age of love)

*Flashback ends*

(sanskar monologue swara u don't knw i startd liking u since last two yrs.. I though i was just attraction.. But i was wrong now i'm suffering like hell)

~
@Car

Swara-(broken) i knw sanskar now u might b very happy.. u never understand me.. u never care for me.. bt till my last breath i love.. u never consider me because iam week at studies nd u feel insult abt me to introduce to ur frnds.. wait nd watch sanskar i'l show u wht iam..(completely broken inside)

~
BGM

Pal bhar thaher jao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karu
Meri taraf aata
Har gham phisal jaaye
Ankhon mein tumko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karoon..

Agar tum saath ho
Agar tum saath ho
Behti rehti..
Nehar nadiya si
Teri duniya mein meri duniya hai
Teri chahaton mein main dhal jaati hun
Teri aadaton mein
Agar tum saath ho...
~

*Flashback*

Swara- tring tring hello who is this?

Caller- mam we r frm xxx hospital. Ur father met with accident u pls cum fast

Swara-(numb) okay i'm coming..

Aftr 30min

she reached hosptial nd saw her jaan (dad) lying on icu bed, to her superise she saw a white peaceful flowers (writen sanskar maheswari on card)..

She askd nurse who is sanskar maheswari? He saved ur dad madam nd brought this flowers.. (swara was impressed)

*Flashback ends*

(Swara monologue sanskar frm that day i startd liking u frm bottom of my heart widout seeing ur face.. Whn i saw ur name in notice board i was out of this world. nd startd enquiring abt u. I knw ur not bad frm heart sanskar i love u so much..but now i lost u ever).

******

Precap-5yrs leap

Edited by Anusha62 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
awesome
well wriiten
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
poor swasan...feeling bad for them...but i hope so everything will be okay.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
One more emotional uptate. Felt bad for swasan. Hope swara ll becum studious ha 5yrs leap. She may b working somewhere? Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Awesome update 👏
5 years leap 😲
Felt bad for swasan
Happy wala update kab milega 😆




P.s- when we will get next update 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Ohoo...both r sad...poor swasa..yaar Anu ...please unite them soon... Very well written dear...update soon 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: simsen23

poor swasan...feeling bad for them...but i hope so everything will be okay.


ofcourse 1day everythng shuld b fine!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: gayu6

One more emotional uptate. Felt bad for swasan. Hope swara ll becum studious ha 5yrs leap. She may b working somewhere? Continue soon


yeah gayu swara v'l work!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome update 👏
5 years leap 😲
Felt bad for swasan
Happy wala update kab milega 😆




P.s- when we will get next update 😆


milega suju wait dear..nxt v'l b on frday!!!!
Edited by Anusha62 - 9 years ago

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