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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: soapbubble

😛 😛 😛

You're being such a tease !! 😆😆

And I'm sitting here like a druggie waiting for her next hit !!

Bubble !! 😆😆

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#842

The Best of Things

(Ragya, Swasan) Fan Fiction Series +16

By Bubble

Chapter 69

Lakshya Maheshwari had stopped running.

It was about 2am. He stood in the hotel room, strangely intent, looking down at the woman sleeping in his bed. Ragini lay there in exhausted slumber, a little to her side... her hand was resting on the bed, over a dip in the mattress that he had occupied minutes ago. Her hair was loosely strewn over the pillow, her slender body swathed in satin sheet, her sindoor a trifle smudged, her mangalsutra a little askew, sheen on her face and shoulders... and a small serene smile about her lips.

She looked well-f__ked certainly, and she had been. But there was a look of wonder of his face as he accepted another fact: she looked well-loved.

He had woken up for a glass of water... and as he came back to bed, he stopped at the sight of his wife in the pale light. He had hardly let her rest a few hours and he wanted her again... he was so tempted to nuzzle her on to her back, and slide once again into her lush body... he was insatiable this night! What is wrong with me? he thought, mujhe jaise Ragini ki lath lag gayi hai!

Then, all of a sudden, the truth had blinded him. He wasn't just addicted to her... he was in love with her! He couldn't bear to be apart from her, he needed her... in every way there was. He wanted to grasp her, merge with her, consume her. He wanted make absolutely sure that she was his. And he understood now... at last... that he was hers.

He turned away.

Pulling the robe on, he walked out to the balcony and leaned against the balustrade, wishing he had a smoke. The sharp lick of fear that came on the heels of the very idea that she might leave him... his compulsive need to possess her, to brand her... to leave her in no doubt that she belonged to him, at his side, all their lives... he added it all up.

It was done now. He was done for, now.

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#843

Yaay me first😊

Awesome awesome update Bubble

Finally laksh maheswari realized that he is in love with ragini. He just can't bear the thought of loosing her. They both belong to each other and ragini is his everything now. I hope he confesses what he feels for her.

Waiting for the next

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#844

Hey Bubble,
Sorry for being silent reader most of the time. But be assured I adore each chapter. Just wanted to say I loved the parallel this one drew with the very first update on Best of Things. Striking!
Love,
Sakura

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#845

Aaah! He realised it...!

I am so happy that I am unable to write anything...

It's like I am in a hangover!!!

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#846

Lovely update!! Loved the connection to the first chapter.. So similar yet so different!! He thought in peace for one min and he got the answer...😛 The shock of realisation😆 Now waiting for Rag's shock of realisation😉😆

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: sudhi03
Yaay me first😊
Awesome awesome update Bubble

Finally laksh maheswari realized that he is in love with ragini. He just can't bear the thought of loosing her. They both belong to each other and ragini is his everything now. I hope he confesses what he feels for her.

Waiting for the next

Sudhi was first! 😆😆

Yes, he realised - like lightning had struck him 😆😳

Thanks

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice update.. 👍🏼

Thanks Sneha!

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Nice

Thank you Kritz!

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-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#850

Well, I'm back! It's been ages.

So, I will start reviewing regularly from this chapter.

To say that truth, Bubble, the first part of this chapter was exactly like your first chapter. Then it changed. Lakshya is in live with Ragini. He can only be hers. He is afraid of letting her go, of losing her. Ah... your RagLak are so amazing. <33 And SwaSan, too. I am waiting for a SwaSan update now. :P

Thanks for the PMs and I'm waiting for the next update which you told will be up by today too. :D

Love,

Effulgent.