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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Sanskaar back nd he is safe.
I had a feeling that in rush to come back, there wld be an accident. Thnk gd no such thing happened.
Bubble this was a very short update. Plz give longer one na with Swasan


Too short na? Sorry - next one is longer 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Esha_

This was it !!!! Supah nice!!! Awesome update bubble you made my day!! Can we get another update on SwaSan ? Thanks for the pm 🤗


Glad you liked it 😃 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
S finally our sanskar is back.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww..
That was really very cute !!
Lovely update !!
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hey Bubble,
Fabulous number of updates! Congratulations on completing 50 updates. I just wanna say that each and every one of them has made me look forward to the next one. Not once was I disappointed with any.

#Mother-daughter bond reinstated: This part was as the essence of this fanfic goes maturely and beautifully done. Swara being a bit apprehensive sending Ragini instead going herself. Shomi herself was confused that Ragini came not Swara. The gradual acceptance of Ragini back into Shomi's 'mamta' folds. Every bit of redemption by Ragini was marvellously portrayed. The whole Lakshya coming for lunch scenario and ensuing conversations were quite fun filled and light. Beautiful moments between RagYa and Shomi-Shekhar.! RagYa took more than an hour to say goodbye. <3 Sweet!
Finally coming to that amazing and perceptive advice given by Shomi to her daughter - it was brilliant! Something to be retained in real life too, no?

#SwaSan: I feel like dancing with joy at the amazingness of their love you show. The way they have moved ahead. Fabulous! I am really enjoying the snippets of SwaSan you provide. Its fun, sweet, romantic, filled with naughtiness and tons of lighthearted moments.! Cuteness personified! <3

#RagYa: Lakshya's realisation of the depth of Ragini's love. Humbling indeed! This was needed. This whole RagYa take has me wanting for so much from the show. *sigh*

#Swara's fever: This was truly ingenious. Depth of Swara's love for Sanskaar! Wow! And I so desperately wanted Ragini to realise the pain that Swara went through when she was pushed of the bridge. And thank you for pointing out Ragini has truly not said sorry to Swara for anything she did. I loved it when Swara was in the fever induced restless sleep and Ragini saw how much everything had affected Swara. It was the most brilliant thing ever.

#SwaRagini: I wish this was the nature of redemption on the show. The show is showing Ragini's redemption pretty pathetically. This is how I would want Swara and Ragini to clear everything out and start anew.

#Sanskaar is back: Fantastic and blush worthy reunion! Damn adorable! <3

Loving this fanfic to the core. Please let there be 50 more chapters cause I really am not ready for it to end. Awaiting more updates! :)
You are amazing writer! <3 Keep up your awesomeness!

Happy Valentine's Day to you too.!

-V
P.S.: Really sorry for such inconsistent comments.
P.P.S.: I am really looking forward to more of RagYa. :)


Thank you, V, for your lovely consolidated comment!! 🤗
Please - no pressure at all - read when you can, comment when you like... but always lovely to hear your thoughts, of course!

Thanks so much for tolerating this long winded story - and for saying you wouldn't mind more... I show no signs of stopping!! 🤔

More of RagYa happening soon!
Hugs,
Bubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

Nice update..

Swasan love each other a lot...

Can't wait to see such moments of ragya..


They do, they do!!
More of Ragya soon!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rashidhingra

Yay!

Sanksaar is back!
Love the way he is rushing to meet the love of his life..
This guy ❤️
I guess it was comparatively a short update but the hug at the end made it so *I don't have words to describe it* ☺️❤️


Hai, na? Beqaraari sar chad kar bol rahi hai!! 😳😆
Short but glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Unres - Chapter 52 on page 39 and Chapter 53 on Page 40.😊
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Bubble dear...🤗

I un-res'd my comment for chapters 50 to 52 on Page 37. Do read when time permits.

This comment is for the cute, romantic SwaSan reunion upon Sanskaar's return from Japan, in Chapter 53. 😳

I loved Sanskaar's homecoming, restless with his concern for Swara, worry about her ill health. He is barely able to restrain his impatience as he talks to the family downstairs, about the business discussions, about the leads he obtained, the contract in the bag, and the one which would be signed...while all the time, desperate to see Swara!!!

And the way Sujata informs him about how his wife fell so ill at the wrenching pain of being separated from him...Sanskaar would have felt upset for sure, but on hearing that she's fine now, and the fact that it was a brief, psychosomatic fever as a reaction to their brief separation, perhaps, just perhaps, there was a wee bit of him that felt all warm and fuzzy that she loved him so very much? 😳 ☺️

Their warm reunion in the landing upstairs, where she runs and literally throws herself into his waiting arms, was completely seeti-worthy! 👏

Lovely, Bubble. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Waiting for the next chappie.

Love,

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for 53😊

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Dear Bubble,

That was a true valentine day's gift😊

The family banter and teasing was so nice - and Sujata declaring that she would be unable to look after Swara if she fell sick each time Sanskaar travelled to work😉

Loved the way Swara literally throws herself into Sanskaar's arms. The family is right - the marriage is very much on - rocking on😆

Nyna
PS Love your updates - small but extremely potent ones😊



Thanks very much Nyna - happy you liked 😃

I know these are just bite sized updates sometimes... but I tend to write scenes, so it happens that way sometimes.


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