~SwaSan~ FF Tu Hi Re Index on Page 1 (part 4 updated on pg 17) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
aww thats cho chweet ray...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At last I got time to read 😆
Soumi


It is wonderful story dear.. 😳


Sanskar has already fallen for Swara😳

Swara will run after Lakshya.😡
But this Lakshya is giving me weird vibes..


Sanskar will be heartbroken🥺
But our hero will do something heroic for sure😎
tution classes , I like it😉
sath me "fuchka Race"😆😆😆
Sanskar's lines are cute, He was missing her so badly, so just wanna hear her blabbering.. awww 😳😳


update soon..

And the last lines are so beautiful.. This is for you Meow..



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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Purbishona

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">At last I got time to read😆</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">It is wonderful story dear..😳</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sanskar has already fallen for Swara😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Swara will run after Lakshya.😡</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But this Lakshya is giving me weird vibes..</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sanskar will be heartbroken🥺</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But our hero will do something heroic for sure😎</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">tution classes , I like it😉</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">sath me "fuchka Race"😆😆😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sanskar's lines are cute, He was missing her so badly, so just wanna hear her blabbering.. awww😳😳</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">update soon..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And the last lines are so beautiful.. This is for you Meow..</font>
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Lakshya is made to give ngtv wives dear...
well thnx for the cutest feedback...will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Nice update Continue soon.
Edited by gayu6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys...It takes me a long time to update this FF of Swasan but trust me i got busy for real so i cant update in this time but now i will update it finally...but firstly Sorry and thank you to all of you😳 Srry for keeping u all on hold for long long time and thank you for nt throwing rotten eggs and sandals on me after that🤣. U guys hv showed lots of patience seriously 😆 I appreciate u all...Anywys bohot hua bhasan and pravachan😆😛 ab sidha kaam pe lag jaate he okkk.Enjoy reading and dont forget to share ur views as i am craving for your feedbacks like always :-

PART-3
Present Day, Mumbai, Swara's Flat

Swara who was lost in her deep thoughts feels a blow of cool air on her wet shoulders and face and turns her face from window.Lights are back in her flat and she didn't even realize that untill and unless her trance is broken by her phone.

It is ringing continuously so she picked it up...to her utmost disappointed it is none other than the customer care...who actually care to distract you from your activities.Well sometimes the distraction needed for sure.She keeps her old mobile back in drawer and goes to washroom.
She washes her face with water and comes in front of mirror and combs her hair and makes a ponytail and proceeds towards kitchen.

She is in her kitchen and thinking to make a coffee to refresh herself...she hears a doorbell in her flat...She shockingly looks at the clock its almost 7 pm and this is not a time for her doorbell to show its existence. It only gives her company at the morning time when newspaper comes or sometime for a change its her watchman to give her the keys of her car after parking it in backwards of her complex compound.

But...sometimes she receives a guest, a friend, a well-wisher of her whenever the lights went off abruptly like today...So maybe it is the person who comes up again to gives her company.Smiling to herself she goes towards the door happily and opens the door...

"You are taking so much time to open the door today...why????are you preparing yourself to woo me"the visitor says in a teasing tone and winks at her and enters holding two mugs of coffee in both hands...

Smelling the aroma of coffee she says while beating him in shoulder. " Stop it!!!!! there is nothing like that understand?????and well i'm expecting you somewhere...and see u came"

"U are crying again Swara????how many times i told you not to cry for whatever happened in your past.It was never ever your fault.So stop punishing yourself" he says while weeping off the remaining tears in her eyes...
She looks at him with all amusement and thinks how can you understand my tears every time without even me telling you about it????

"Don't think much i know in power cuts the lost devdas in you suddenly wakes up and in such cases the male chandramukhi has to make an appearance you know...and I am here" he says all in a single breath looking into her eyes and again winks at her. Swara giggles listening to him explanation and pats him on shoulder again...He smiles seeing her smile and asks her to have coffee so she will feel better.

"Thank you...I need this actually...by d way are u an astrologer or you have some kind of third eye so u will come to know every time what i actually want ...how ??????? She asks him with a cute face and looks like the answer will make her the Prime Minister of India at that moment...

Seeing her expression he stands up and pinch her cheeks...He loves to pull her chubby cheeks all the time and goes close to her.She feels his gaze on her and looks down in awkwardness.While he senses her hesitation and slightly takes off the fallen eyelash from her cheeks and keeps it on the upper side of her fist and asks her to close her eyes and makes a wish...she silently obeys his direction as its nt possible for her to resist him or his words...she closes her eyes and makes a wish in mind while he is watching her face with ultimate bliss.after repeating the wish thrice she blows the eyelash and opens her eyes...

He is still looking at her with a single blink...so she jerks him and asks ," Oh hello...what are u thinking Mr.????

"Nothing" he uttered and comes to his senses and takes a sip of coffee and splits it out making an awe expression. Swara is shocked with his reaction and asks him what happened raising her eyebrows...He gives her a disgust look while pointing at the cup of coffee "Its turned into a cold coffee swara...bt not the tasty one" he uttered with a pout face...Swara bursts into laughter looking at the cuteness of him and takes his mug along with her and proceeds towards kitchen to make it hotter again.
He lays down in sofa to make himself comfortable more when suddenly the bags full of groceries attracts his vision.It was kept on table unpacked like someone just brought it from market...he looks down and smiles in his mind and goes towards the shelf and takes out some empty jars to fill it with groceries.He is doing his work that he didn't notice swara coming from kitchen.She too is shocked to see him doing such works...she smiles at his caring nature.In this long long years he is there with her in every thick and thin...no matter how much he was hurt by her actions and stupidity he never ever leaves her side even when she doubted and rejected him for her delusional thinking...She still curses that day when she wasted a golden chance to get the ultimate happiness in life in her chase to live in her fairyland.
She runs to him and hugs him from back tightly that he couldn't react at all...It's not the first time that she is holding him like this but he is not ready to gone into those dark paths of agony from where he draws himself back after that day...yes he is Swara's friend and will be like this throughout his life but still he is not able to forgive her for those days and incidents he bears for her only.She was so busy that time that she never pays attention to his pains.But he cant do so cause he loves her so much from the very beginning.

He loves her from that day when he saw her first time in their tution batch when he was a student of class 8, her break-less smile, her frank nature, lively attitude and friendly nature attracts him then and there.he was too young then to feel the feeling called "love" but he only knew that he feels terribly bad if she gets more friendly with the other guys in that batch...they became friends, best friends, they got detached from each other but destiny made him meet her again in his college.He still smiles at himself thinking about that day when he spotted her in his biology batch...ya he pretended like calm and quite in-front of her and others but inside his mind he was the happiest and richest person on earth to get back his first and only love Swara.
After return to his home he jumps in his room 5-6 times in excitements..They were again in talking terms, everything was going so correctly and good.He started sharing all of his happiness and sadness with her so as she...Even in the college freshers's party when they danced together she told him ,"I love to be in ur arms Sanskar...i feel so protective and safe...promise me u will never leave me and i will also be with you always" somewhere her words made him think that he will be the luckiest person on earth and he decided to propose her but only after final confirmation from her...But that afternoon, that meeting that canteen hangout destroyed his dreams, his life everything he had.

***************Flashback*******************

Scottish Church college, Calcutta

Swara, Sanskar, Madhumita and Aditya are having their meals like every usual day.its became their usual routine to meet with each other at canteen and have their lunch together...this awesome foursome is so happy with each other's company when a new person made entry in their group and friendship too.

Ad: "Swara yaar what a boring lecture it was...I'm totally exhausted yaar...I feel like sleeping in the very first class today. Thanx to my headphone and Madhu that I was awake throughout the class "winks at Madhumita

Sw: "I agree yaar you know Sunny ...turns towards Sanskar....our Hod is such a waste of time and energy...she is horrible man...my god...thanx to abhishek sir that i can spend my hours drooling at him" she says in a dreamy voice resting her chin on table making a cute face

Sa:"Stop it Swara...he is our sir...stop being kiddish...I am not liking it..."

Swara looks at him with a pot and angry face and moves her face in opposite direction for disturbing her thoughts about Abhishek Sir...oops Abhi for her...Just then Laksh enters the scene and takes a seat besides Swara. Sanskar feels uneasy to see this but composes himself as laksh is also a part of their group and also a gppd friend of Swara in short span of time...He somehow is not ok with their sudden closeness but tries to be normal infront of all and wants to seek Swara's attention towards him by asking whether she wanna have anything else or nt while Swara being swara is not responding to him and continues talking to laksh freely and totally ignores Sanskar...

After complete their meals they came out of the canteen and Swara leaves with Laksh for home as both of them will headed towards a similar direction where Sanskar will go completely opposite direction.She dnt even wave a goodbye to him and that night after trying a couple of time she never answered neither his calls and messages.

Whereas laksh informed him at late night that he had a talk with swara in the evening for a long time and she is landed home safely...this makes Sanskar soo upset and he got tears in his eyes unknowingly and slept in his room.

Sometimes due to our own stupidity and stubborn ness we directed ourselves in a wrong way and thinks that we are doing things right but when we actually realises our mistakes its already too late.
Precap: Swalak goes for a movie alone...Sanskar proposes Swara

Guysss leave ur comments and criticism is welcomed...enjoy reading
With Love
Soumi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Superb update...emotional nd well written..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Finally update ho gaya 🤪
Awesome update 👏
Swalak watching movie alone
Sanskar will proposed swara 😳
But swara 😡

This time please bhagwaan ke liye update jaldi karna please 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update... Actually... You update after a long time I didn't even remember the story line and then i read all chapters again... 😃 next time jaldi update dena aap...
update more soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I read all the chapters together Soumi.
Loved all the parts. Plzz taratari continue koris.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww..so cute n emotional yaar..flashbak was soo Sad..Poor Swara...i hope Sanskaar helps swara in brging her out of Past..n realizes her love fe Sanskaar...past jaldi reveal karo n strt SwaSan Love Trck..Continue soon n thnks fr PM

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