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Sunday
This is a story after swasan confessed their luv for each other n everything b/w them is alright.
Saturday evening 6 pm at mm-
Su- sanskaar tu aagya chore (she takes his bag)
Sa- ji mom
Su- swara zara chai toh le aa chori
Sw- ji mom
(she enters with a cup of tea n water )
Sw-sanskaar kesa thatumhara din
Sa -nice
In swasan room-
(after swasan have changed for the night n sanskaar comes out after a shower swara is already waiting forhim in the room)
Sw-who kal Sunday h toh...
Sa- toh??
Sw- mera matlab tha ki agar tum free ho toh hum ek outing par chal sakte h
Sa(happy n excited)- sure
Sw- thanku
Sa-well bike p ya car mein.
Sw-ammm... Bike p
Sa-okay mrs. Sankaar mahewari(hugs her from back)
Sw truns n kisses his forehead feels shy sa turns swara and kisses her cheeks and they hug each other.they are lost n each others embrace when pari bhabhi arrives
Pa-ahmmm.(fake coughs)
Swasan break their hug
Pa- swara n devarji tumhara khane pr wait kar rahe h
swasan - ji bhabhi
swara takes a bag n moves out with sanskaar
In mm hall dining area
sa- bade pap who kal sunday h toh main soch raha tha ki kal mein aur swara kahin ghoomne chale gayen ..matbal agar ap sab ko koi problem na ho toh
dp- haan zaroror jayo sanskaar
sa- thank q bade papa
su makes a face n starts her drama
su- huh ..! patra nahi kk jadoo tona kare h je bangalan. Jiji mahra toh chora hi mahra na raha
rp- ab bas karegi tu sujat
su- haan ji mein hi chup kar jati hoon mahri toh kisi ko padi hi na h je ghar mein..mahri toh kisi ko koi chintahina h hai ...
swara covers sujata's eyes
sw-momapseesa kisne kaha ki aapki kisko chinta nahi h .. ap dekhengi nahi k sanskaar apke liyekya gift laya
su- kya gift laya h tu mahre liye sanskaar
swara removes her hand n sanskaar hugs sujata
sa- khud hi dekhlo
su opens the gift in bag
su- hai saree je tu mahre liye laya h ..
sa- ji mom apko achi lagi
su - haan bahut acchi lagi
sw-mom kya wese aap kalfilmdekhengi dad k saath
su-je tu kkehrai h chorichalmein toh dekh bhi loon par je inhe toh phursat hi na h mahre sebaat karne ki ke film dekenge je
rp makes a face
rp-ab santi se khana khane degi kna
su- dekha tum dono ne
sa- dad kal no cheating no bahana kal aap aur mom bhi film dekhne ja rahe hein aur yeh rahi aapki tickects
su n rp luk at each other n offcourse everyone smile sat su's child like innocence
precap- swasan leaving for the outing n lots of swasan movement