swasan 3 shot sunday

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hi i am new here 😊 this is one of my 1st writtings here😊 so pls do read and comment😊

Sunday

This is a story after swasan confessed their luv for each other n everything b/w them is alright.

Saturday evening 6 pm at mm-

Su- sanskaar tu aagya chore (she takes his bag)

Sa- ji mom

Su- swara zara chai toh le aa chori

Sw- ji mom

(she enters with a cup of tea n water )

Sw-sanskaar kesa thatumhara din

Sa -nice

In swasan room-

(after swasan have changed for the night n sanskaar comes out after a shower swara is already waiting forhim in the room)

Sw-who kal Sunday h toh...

Sa- toh??

Sw- mera matlab tha ki agar tum free ho toh hum ek outing par chal sakte h

Sa(happy n excited)- sure

Sw- thanku

Sa-well bike p ya car mein.

Sw-ammm... Bike p

Sa-okay mrs. Sankaar mahewari(hugs her from back)

Sw truns n kisses his forehead feels shy sa turns swara and kisses her cheeks and they hug each other.they are lost n each others embrace when pari bhabhi arrives

Pa-ahmmm.(fake coughs)

Swasan break their hug

Pa- swara n devarji tumhara khane pr wait kar rahe h

swasan - ji bhabhi

swara takes a bag n moves out with sanskaar

In mm hall dining area

sa- bade pap who kal sunday h toh main soch raha tha ki kal mein aur swara kahin ghoomne chale gayen ..matbal agar ap sab ko koi problem na ho toh

dp- haan zaroror jayo sanskaar

sa- thank q bade papa

su makes a face n starts her drama

su- huh ..! patra nahi kk jadoo tona kare h je bangalan. Jiji mahra toh chora hi mahra na raha

rp- ab bas karegi tu sujat

su- haan ji mein hi chup kar jati hoon mahri toh kisi ko padi hi na h je ghar mein..mahri toh kisi ko koi chintahina h hai ...

swara covers sujata's eyes

sw-momapseesa kisne kaha ki aapki kisko chinta nahi h .. ap dekhengi nahi k sanskaar apke liyekya gift laya

su- kya gift laya h tu mahre liye sanskaar

swara removes her hand n sanskaar hugs sujata

sa- khud hi dekhlo

su opens the gift in bag

su- hai saree je tu mahre liye laya h ..

sa- ji mom apko achi lagi

su - haan bahut acchi lagi

sw-mom kya wese aap kalfilmdekhengi dad k saath

su-je tu kkehrai h chorichalmein toh dekh bhi loon par je inhe toh phursat hi na h mahre sebaat karne ki ke film dekenge je

rp makes a face

rp-ab santi se khana khane degi kna

su- dekha tum dono ne

sa- dad kal no cheating no bahana kal aap aur mom bhi film dekhne ja rahe hein aur yeh rahi aapki tickects

su n rp luk at each other n offcourse everyone smile sat su's child like innocence

precap- swasan leaving for the outing n lots of swasan movement

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Sunday part 2

Next mrng in swasan room

Swasan r getting ready

Sanskaar is in the washroom and swara is getting ready

Sanskaar comes out n they both get mesmerized on seeing each other (swara wearing a light blue kurta n matching leggings n chunri n her contemporary accessories n sanskaar in black jeans dark blue top )

(bgm tune mari entry)😉

They share an eye lock. Swara breaks the eye lock n try to go away (moves towards their bed).sanskaar holds her hand n tries to pull her towards himself but she slips n they both fall on the bed. Sanskaar does not move

Sw- kya kar rahe ho tum

Sa- apni biwi ke saath romance kar raha hoon

Sw- darwaza khulla h

Sa-it hardly matters n goes to kiss her lips but swara moves away

Sw- pagal ho kya

Sanskaar pulls her back they r very close to each other now

Sanskaar is about to kiss swara when rags enter

R- swara woh ( n she sees them n feels embarssed n turns her back )😕

R- sry humne kuch nahi dekha

Swasan too feel embaraced

Sw- bolo ragini

R- sab nashte par intezar kar rahe h

(Teasingly) par koi baat nahi hum keh dete h ki aap dono ek important kam mein busy ho😉

Sa-nahi ragini hum aate h tum chaloo

Sanskaar wears his jacket n swasan wear their glares

Sa-kesa lag raha hoon

Sw-hot aur mein😎

Sa - uff... no words😉

They move to the dining area

Every one look at them and r happy to see their stunning looks

Su - wese je bangalan achi toh bahut lagti h mahre chore k saathpar mahra chora toh mahra chora h

Swasn take the breakfast n everyone's blessings

Outside mm

Rp- sanskaar thari gadi kathe h

Sa-papa woh hum bike p ja rahe h😎

U- bhai bhabhi kal aap kewal mom kliye gift laye the ab aaj mere liye bhi lana

Swasan- sure dearie😊

Uttara n swasan hug each other

N swasan leaves

Precap- lot of cute swasn moment

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Sunday part 3

Swasan leave

They 1st visited a flower garden

Swasan were roaming in a flower garden, hand in hand they were lost in each other clicking selfies n photos😉

Soon they decide to sit on a bench in a last hidden type corner

Swasan hugged each other and were lost in each other's embrace (bgm-yeh hasin wadiya yeh khulla asma )

Sanskaar breaks the hug

Sa-ab chalein ya yahin bethogi

Sw-chaloo.par kahan jayenge

Sa-park chalogi badminton khelenge

Sw- sure .aur I challenge mein hi jeetungi

Sa-park chaloo tumhe bata hoon

They sit on the bike😎

Sanskaar ride the bike and swara hugs him from behind, she is continousely talking to him (bgm- tu tu tu meri mein tera hone laga)😎

They reached the park and played badminton for long which exhausted them but the happiness they experienced in being together ... they in fact did no scoring but busy were lost in the giggles they herd from each other😊😳

After some time they sat on a bench

Sw- haha ..kitna maza ayaya na

Sa-yups

Sw- but scoring toh bhulgaye

Sa-hahaha

Sw-haha...! Suno sanskaar mujhe bhukh lagi h

Sa-kya khaogi

Sw- rasgulla

Sa-hmm... Mera rasgulla ... rasgulla khayega😆

Sw- kya tumne mujhe rasgulla kaha

Sa-nahi..mene toh tumhe cute kaha😆

Sw- oh... Thank u😊

Sa- haha...

They go n eat lots of street food and yes rasgullas in the end

In the meantime in mm

Sujata and rp are getting ready

Su - kesi lag rhai hoonn

Rp-bahut phutri ( beautifull ) lag rahi h

Su- pata h mahre ko mahre chore ki pasand ki saree h toh acchi toh mein lagoongi hi na

Rp smiles

Su- sunnoji filum k baad na aap mahre ko ghumaoge

Rp-ab je kai keh rahoi h sujata

Su- kyu ji aap mahre ko kitne samaye baad baharle ja rahe uske baad bhi ghumaooge nahi .mahri toh kissi ko chinta hina h aatthe

Rp- thik thik ab chaalegi k na

Su (making a face)- chaloo😆

N they leave

At the market with swasan

sa- ho gaya tumhara khana pina😊

Sw-han.. aur tumhara

Sa-hmm ab

Sw- ab shopping chalet h.yaad h uttarak liyegifts lene h

Sa-ji madam aur aap k liye bhi

Sw - tum kuch nahiloge

Sa- tum dila dena😉

N they share a hearty laughter😆

While ridding to the mal swara saw an amusement park

Sw- dekhona amusement park pls pls thodi der kuch rides le lein phir mall jaynge😛

Sa- thik h

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Swasan enter the amusement park n take some rides

Sanskaar sees the happiness on swara's face.😊

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

They leave for the mall and did shopping actually too much of it sanskaar was holding bags and swara was continuously talking to him😊

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Then they go and sit on the river bank and swara saw some balloons and cotton candy which she bought.😊

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm... hmmm..

This was the best outing ever for sanskaar...full of laughter, enjoyment, fun ... Full of love full of his beloved's innocence ...he was happy now ...happy after soo many years all his pain all his guilt vanished and all what was left was happiness...and love

The end

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very sweet!! Everybody is positive here.. Coool.. And kya pataya hai sasumom ko.. 😆😆 waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very sweet kash show me bi sab sweet ho n its only a myth ki sweet show do not fetch trps. Yeh rishta gives tough competition to SR in same time slot n its running for so long n Main couple pair is alwz shown sweet to kys hmare swasan nhi sweet ho skte always
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its very dear...sujatha and ram scene was Soo funny...😆next part update it soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful ts
awww sujju is so cute
rp &sujju ko bhi date pr bheja swasan ne nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!!
Maza aa gaya!! Every body is positive here.😊
SwaSan r so cute, romantic and sweet.😳
And kya pataya hai Sujju ko!😆
Awesome.👏Loved it vry much!!!😃

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