Swasan and kavsan os- it's over epilogue pg 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I watched today's episode and unfortunately I realised that my fear might come true - swara will continue to be infected by mahanta syndrome and due to this would be hurting sanskar like hell. This os is from sanskar's point of view so pls everyone who sympathises with swara just avoid reading it because I might seem insensitive towards swara because God I really hate her mahanta crap.😆

It's over

Sanskar- Kab tak doosron k baare Mai sochogi? When will u think about us?
Swara- kavita kaisi hai??
Sanskar- when I come close to u tumhe pharak nahi padta? Are u not affected by me?
Swara - nahi
Sanskar - i love u swara pls dont do this I really love u plss
Swara- i don't love u
Sanskar moved back her words hit him hard more than thousands of bullets and they hurted him in a way which was irreparable
Sanskar - kya yeh tumhara akhri faisla hai
Swara - hmmm
Sanskar - kal meri sagaI hai zaroor aana tumhai kuch dena hai
Swara as confused before she could ask him he turned around and left the place

Sanskar reached his room
Kavita- aa Gayye sanskar
Sanskar - i need to talk to u
Kavita - Haan bolo
Sanskar- i don't love u any more I love swara
Kavita - no no u can't do this to me
Kavita ran and sanskar chased her only to witness a car speeding towards her but the car stopped on time but kavita fainted due to shock
Sanskar carried her back to his room
He sprinkled water on her face and she gained her conscious
Kavita immediately gave him a hug
Kavita - Maine bohat bura sapna dekha sanskar bohat bura you said u don't love
Sanskar moved back
Sanskar - sleep kavita u need rest
Sanskar left the room

It was the night of kavsan engagement
Sanskar(self thought) - enough I can't do this any more khatam kardunga yeh sab Mai kavita ko dhoka nahi de sakta, I don't love her uski zindagi mere saath Barbad ho jayegi aur swara mughse pyaar nahi karti toh kya fayda
Sujata- chal chore Teri sagas ka waqt ho gaya hai
Sanskar- MA
Sujata - Haan bol
Sanskar - shayad yeh baat koi beta apni ma se na bolein par aapne mughe majboor kar diya yeh kehne ko
Sujata- kya?
Sanskar - kaash aap jaisi ma kissi ko na miley
Sujata was stunned
Sanskar left for his engagement ceremony
Sujata kept standing there with tears in her eyes but it was to late to repent

Sanskar went downstairs
Kavita was waiting for him
He reached there and stood before her
Kavita slipped his ring in his finger and now it was sanskar turn, he looked towards swara who was watching all this.
Suddenly swara noticed blood oozing out from sanskar's nose.
Swara ran towards him
Swara - sanskaaar
Sanskar's knees buckled and he fell on the floor before anybody could reach him
Sujata came running
Sujata- sanskar k papa
Ram - sujata sanskar ko dekh k ho gaya hai jaldi doctor ko phone
Sujata- nahi jaldi mahre chore ko hospital le chalo usnai puri bottle neend ki goliyan kha li hai chalo jaldi
Everyone was paralysed due to shock, lakshay reacted and he started picking his brother up
Lakshay - adarsh bhaiya jaldi
Adarsh and lucky picked him up and carried him towards the car to run for hospital

Everyone reached the hospital
Doctor took him to the operation theatre
No one spoke a word...
(everyone's self thought)
Dp- sorry Sanskar sorry apni majboori Mai itna aandha Aur khudgarz ho gaya ki ek baap honey ka farz hi nahi nibhaya
Ap- maaf kardo mughe beta laut aao tumhari ahemiyad hi nahi samjhi Maine kabhi, sirf saara din lucky Lucky Lucky tumhare baare Mai socha hi nahi sorry
Ram- tere liye kabhi khada na hua Tera baap, itna kamzor baap kissi ko na miley, na 5 saal pehle kuch Bola jab Tu kavita se pyaar karta tha Aur na abhi kuch Bola jab Tu swara ko apni zindagi manta tha laut aa beta meri kamzori ki sazza khud mat bhugat aaja
Sujata- ek baar laut aa mere bache jo Tu kahega bilkul vaisa hoga bas Tu laut aa, dekhna Mai itni achhi ma bannungi ki tughe naaz hoga mugh par aa ja
Swara - i am sorry Sanskar I love u pls dont leave me I love u pls
Swara clutched her mungalsutra for strength
Kavita stood in the corner of a corridor, she was never guilty but today she was
Doctor came out from the operation theatre Everyone ran towards him with a hope of a good news
Doctor - who is swara and kavita?
Both of them stepped forward, doctor took out 2 envelopes and gave it to them
Doctor - patient gave it to me before passing out
Ram - mahra chora kaisa hai?
Doctor - hum nai neend ki goliyan nikal di hai shareer sai agar unko hosh na aaya 24 ghante Mai toh he can slip to coma

Kavita opened the envelope, sanskar left her a letter

Kavita,
I am sorry. I am your culprit. Sorry to move on without asking u. I never thought about u while I was falling in love with swara. I love her Kavita u weren't dreaming yesterday. I am sorry to spoil half of your life I can't spoil the rest too, u deserve someone who loves and cherishes u. I am sorry.
Sanskar

Swara opened her envelope with shivering hands
Swara,
Sorry swara I love u but I can't do this. I cant spend my life without u. I know u don't love me. It's ok Swara please never ever blame your self for that. It was not your duty to reciprocate my love. Kavita is a genuine person I can't spoil her life by trapping her in a loveless marriage like I spoilt your's
Sanskar

Both kavita and Swara cried for this incredible man.
Kavita ran towards the family, it's time to give up and confess her guilt.
Kavita- i am sorry
Sujata- kis liye
Kavita - i never loved your son
Swara was shocked she looked up and the others were also stunned by her Confession
Kavita- 5 yrs ago I trapped him because me and my mom were behind maheshwari property but sanskar became too Passionate and started loving me unconditionally so me and my mom faked my death to get rid of him. My mom got a jackpot when Durgaprasad ji was trapped and we started blackmailing him. 4 months ago we got to know sanskar was ur son. So we planned everything. Nothing was coincidence my mom threw that picture in front of dadi to get back into the house, swara found me because I Wanted her to find me
Swara came towards her and slapped her
Swara- he loved u Kavita why?
Kavita smiled sadly- i am sorry I am ready to take any punishment for this I am sorry but can I ask u a question swara? He loved me swara but he loves u then why?why did u gave up?
Swara was stunned she looked down and today she was ashamed of herself for not standing up for her love.

Suddenly they heard a commotion I'm front of sanskar's ward everyone got tensed
Ap- nurse kya hua
Nurse- he is sinking
Everyone started crying
Swara pushed everyone and went inside the ward.
She saw him breathing heavily with difficulty she ran towards him
Swara- sanskar Sanskar listen to me pls I love u pls don't go fight pls I love u pls
Sanskar smiled and said - it's over swara it's over
And he passed out
Doctor - i am sorry he is in coma

Swara cried and cried he has given her the punishment of waiting, waiting for him to wake up, waiting for him to confess his love again,waiting for their marriage just wait and wait

Swara- i will wait for sanskar I would wait for your love and I would wait till my last breath


PART 2 -PG 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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akansha
sweetu m crying lyk hell reading this
serial kya kam that ki tumne sanky ko coma m bhej diya...sob sob
but loved it
really touchy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No words..
I didn't imagine it will turn out to be like this..
It was awesome..
Swara should really drop her mahantaa ..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very lovely heart touching story.
It's simply amazing.
Of you don't mind I suggest you to write second part of this story where Sanskaar regains consciousness and swara Sanskaar become swasan.
If you like then take my idea otherwise please don't mind. Plzzz pm me about your future posts.
Plzzz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avihothi

Very lovely heart touching story.

It's simply amazing.
Of you don't mind I suggest you to write second part of this story where Sanskaar regains consciousness and swara Sanskaar become swasan.
If you like then take my idea otherwise please don't mind. Plzzz pm me about your future posts.
Plzzz.

I also lyk d idea
akansha plz convert this is to ts wide epilogue plz plz...this can't b d end
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanita

I also lyk d idea
akansha plz convert this is to ts wide epilogue plz plz...this can't b d end

Ok I would write a happy ending for this one
God u people really don't like sad endings 😆
Most of the love stories have sad endings by the way
But no worries I won't give that to my Swasan so would write an epilogue for this and will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Akanksha 😊
Awesome yaar!! Its so subtle and heart touching 😳
Please try to compose another part 😉
I'd loved to read that 😊
...

Esha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvakanksha


Ok I would write a happy ending for this one
Godu people really don't like sad endings😆
Most of the love stories have sad endings by the way
But no worries I won't give that to my Swasan so would write an epilogue for this and will continue soon

woaaa
am dam excited for epilogue. post asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was so emotional
u mde m cry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
its jst awsum..
sanskar was hurt...
it high time 4 swara to stop being mahan...

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