swasan os....tumhi ho..

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Helllo everyone..dis is d first time m writing something...dis is just my thought on how sanskar believes she just want to do all dis for family not for him...dis os is based on scenario where she brought kavita to home...
After she brought kavi to mm...ragini decided now she will live in mm only...n swara returned to baadi wid sadness...she is still not getting wat has she done...is dat good for sanskaar or not...she is still confused wat sanskaar wants...but somewhere she thought by sanskaar mixed emotion on seeing kavita...their interaction all made her believed dat sankar still loves her n wants to be wid her...n she thought to leave sanskar for his happiness...
At baadi..
Shomi- swara kya ye sahi h beta..
Swara- haan maa bas ab yahi sahi h
Sh- par sankar
Sw- wo kavita k sath hamesha khush rahega maa...wo bht acchi h...aur fir mera liye to uska pyaar vese hi khatam ho chuka..dhire dhire wo care or concern bi khatam ho jayegi..
Sh- beta me to fir bi yahi kahugi...tu ek baar mil le usse...ab so ja raat bahut ho chuki subah milte h...
After shomi left swara thought so much n finally decided to met sanskar last time...she text him..
Sanskar me janti hu tum abi vese hi bahut pareshan ho...par plzzz tum se milna h mujhe...call karti to tum cut kar dete...aur tuhare pas ati tab bi tum dur chale jate...but plzzz i want to meet u...is baar mana mat karna...i know bahut late ho chuka h par mujhe abi hi milna...iss baar tmhe hamari dosti ki kasam h us pyaar ki kasam jo hamare bich tha...ya shayad aaj bi h...hum river view point par milte h(i dont know its name jaha swara aur laksh first time mile the it looks like marine drive place of mumbai i dont know)...me tumhara wait karugi..
Sanskaar who was lost in his thoughts..his phone beeped n saw msg from swara..
First he thought to ignore it..but den he thought itna late akeli ghar se nikal jayegi..so better to call her he deciddd to meet her..
Swara who was lost in her thought..have full faith dat sanskar will come...
Sanskar reached dere...they both looked each oder n intense eyelock..den suddenly swara hugged him tightly n crying bitterly..like hell..
He hold her try to console her...wants to know she wants meet him at dis odd hours...n here she is crying like dat...
He said...swara
Swara- no sanskaar no...still hugging him..
Tum abi kuch nai kahoge...its my turn..i dont know yeh kya ho gaya wats dis...i love u soo much dats all i can say...bahut pyaar karti hu me tumse...kab hua tumse itna pyaar bas nai pata...kavita aur tumhara sath hurts me alot...kese jiyugi ab tumhare bina...n den again started crying...
Sanskar was all speechless...dey remain like dat for some time
Den after sometime she came out of hug..n smiled through tears..
Swara- ok its ok...not now me control hi nai kar payi sanskaar...tum mere aansu se pareshan mat hona...yeh to bas ese hi...me tumhare liye bahut khush hu...after all tum mere best frnd ho...kavita sach me bahut acchi ladki h...i hope no i wish wo tumhe sari khushiyaan de jo tum deserve karte ho...
Hamara divorce to vese hi file ho chuka h..it will all be over in some days...koi alimony nai chahiye mujhe tumse...ek adhikar chahiye...me kabhi mera mangalsutra nai utarugi...apni puri zindagi yeh sindoor apni maang me bharugi...tumhare naam ka..
Tum apne zindagi me hamesha khush rehna...kavita k sath...aur me hamari yaado k sath...me labhi tum par koi haq nai jatane aaugi...par tum mujhe yeh haq mat chhinna...
Aj ham last time mile h sanskar...tumhe dekhna chahti thi apni aankho me sama lena chahti thi..me kal hi mumbai jaa rai hu...me jaanti hu tum hamari family ko ragini se jarur bacha loge..aur bade papa ko bi sabka dhyan rakhna bye...n left d place with crying..
Sanskar who was all just listening her n too much shoched n emotional to react...just stare at her disappearing figure...wondering is she really loves him who just want to leave him...for whom..jise thik se janti bi nai...yahi chiz jo mujhe iski pasand nai...
But out of all dis he has finally realised dat she truely loves him...n wanted to save his family for him only...not for anything else...she just loves him...



Ohh guys plzzz tell me if u liked it or not...its d very first time m writing fiction i know itna accha to nai hoga. .but still i tried my best...sorry n plzz forgive me for d mistakes...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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anjum its really nice ..👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome.
I think you should continue this.
Plzzz pm me.
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Really good! Is there going to be a second part? Im waiting😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its really really nice...😊swara is leaving...😭my swasan are in pain..😭continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanabmw

anjum its really nice ..👏👏

Thank u sana di...after all dis kavita's issue i just wanna swara to behave like dis...dat y first time ever thought to share something like dis wid os...bcoz i think now sanskar behaviour towarss her not like dat she should fight for her love..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avihothi

It's awesome.

I think you should continue this.
Plzzz pm me.

Thank u...even m also thinking for 2nd part but i dont know if i continue it or not...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is really amazinggg
if u can then plz cont this
would luv to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u everyone for reading n commenting and appreciating my first ever written fiction shot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice hope we will get second part soon

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