SwaSan OS: When She Got Drunk :P

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Hi 😊
I'm here wid my another ajeeb sa OS 😊😊

Dis one z dedicated to my sweet so big sisi Deep 😳
Belated Happy Birthday Deep 🥳
Hope tujhe accha lage 😳


Based on current track..( divorce had loopholes so Swara managed to return back in MM )
SwaSan returning from some part..

SwaSan in car..
Sanskaar driving.
Swara opens window glass & starts looking outside.
Sanskaar: kya kar rahi ho tum?
AC chal raha hai nah

Swara: par isme se acchi wali hawa nahi aa rahi ( makes baby face )

Sanskaar: acchi wala hawa? R u crazy?

Swara ignoring him & looking outside window.. Feeling breeze..smiling..blushing

She sees a bike passing..in bike girl waa holding her guy tightly..

Swara suddenly starts behaving weird..

Swara: vroom vroom vroom vroom ( as if she is riding bike )

Sanskaar glares her through mirror..

Sanskaar's monologue: Isse kya ho gaya hai? Zaroor attention paane k liye yeh sab kar rahi hai.

Swara shakes her head and like a kid speaks lil louder: vroom vroom vroom vroom vroom..

Sanskaar's monologue: zaroor kuch gadbad hai.. Kahi isne party mein drink toh nai... Oh shit...

Sanskaar: Swara tumne drink kiya hai?

Swara not listening him...and busy with her vroom vroom ( 🤣 )
Sanskaar: Swara main tumse kuch puch raha hoon.

Swara: Maine pee nahi hai..maine pee nahi hai.. Mainu pee la di gayi hai.. ( making cute cute face )

Sanskaar: kisne pee laya tumhe?

( he is still driving )

Swara: waiter ne aur kisne? Vroom vroom..

Sanskaar: uss waiter ne tumhe drink serve ki aur tumne pee li?

Swara: Haan.. Usme kya hai.. Cold drinks hi toh thi.. Vroom vroom..

Sanskaar: cold drinks? ( Giving W*F looks )

Swara: tumhe pata hai Sanskaar jab maine..maine..ummm.. Haan yaad aya jab maine pehla sip liya nah bahut ajeeb tha..

Sanskaar: ajeeb toh hoga hi nah

Swara: shhh meri baat toh suno ( starts crying ) tum kabhi meri baat nahi sunte

Sanskaar: itni der se sunn hi raha hoon -_-

Swara: accha suno phir ne mujhe vo cold drinks bahut pasand ayi.. Maine nah.. ( starts counting in fingers )

Sanskaar: don't tell me tumne ek se zyda?

Swara: one , two , three , four , five... Five five..

Sanskaar: 5 glass? Are u crazy?

Swara: five k baad kya aata hai? Ummm yaad aya seven.. Haan five k baad seven glass cold drinks piye maine ( smiles like kid )

Sanskaar: five k baad six aata hai
Swara: haan toh Maine six or seven sath mein piye... Aisa lag raha tha Maine vroom vroom bike ride kar rahi hoon ( laughing )


Sanskaar: are u even in ur senses? Actually NOT
seven like really?

Swara starts crying like baby... Phir se daant rahe ho.. 😭 jab dekho daant te rehte ho 😭 aur jab main roti hoon tab hanky bhi nahi dete ab 😭😭

Sanskaar gives his hanky to her..

She smiles & wipes her tears off..

Sanskaar: I'm sorry.. Par tumhe itni peene ki kya zarurat thi?

Swara: Toh main aur kya karti?
Tum mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahe the..
Meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe the..

Main itni zyda bore ho rahi thi isilye cold drinks one by one karke finish kardi 😳
Aur phir...
Vroom vroom vroom vroom...

Ishhhtoooppp

Swara screams: stop stop stop stop

Sanskaar stops car in jerk: pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Swara: Mujhe bike ride karni hai...

Sanskaar: what?

Swara: Haan bike ready karni hai..wo bhi abhi abhi abhi abhi

Sanskaar: dekho Swara u are not in your senses ..Jo karna hai kal karna..

Swara starts crying like baby... Irritating Sanskaar..

Sanskaar: Jo karna hai karo..jahaan jana hai jao.. Main ghar jaa raha hoon.. >.<

Swara gets out of car.. Okkkayyy bye bye ( blinks her eyes twice )
And goes towards bike which was parked outside ice cream parlour

Sanskaar: oh shit.. Ye ladki... Swara Swara rukooo...
Sanskaar follows her..

Swara sitting on bike: Vroom Vroom...

Sanskaar: Swara chalo yahaan se..
Swara: arey Sanskaar tum bhi bike ki speed ki tarh speed mein bhaage ho ^_____^
Mera pati Milkha Singh se bhi tez bhaagta hai ^______^

Sanskaar: Swara dekho bike nahi chal rahi hai 😵

Swara: accha matlab yeh road chal rahi hai? ^____^
Wow yeh road kitni speed mein chal rahi hai..

Guy: oh hello behen ji.. Hatto yahaan se.. Yeh Meri bike hai..

Swara: nahi main nahi hattungi.. Iss bike mein main aur mera pati ghar jayenge..
Sanskaar jaldi mere peeche baitho.. Aur Haan tight se pakadna ☺️

Guy: abhi police ko bulata hai hum.. Humara bike churata hai..

Sanskaar blocks his way..
Tashan between Sanskaar & guy..

Sanskaar: kisko chor bola? Patni hai wo meri..chor nahi.. Uske liye ise acchi bike khareed sakta hoon main..

Guy: Haan toh jake khareed nah.. Humara bike humko wapas kar.

Sanskaar: Swara

Swara: vroom vroom.. Sanskaar baitho nah..

Sanskaar: Swara dekho yeh bike bahut bekar hai..

Guy: humari bike ko bekar bolta hai tum?

Sanskaar: tum chup raho

Swara: Sanskaar kya hua baitho nah..aur tight se pakdna mujhe ☺️
*eyelock* ( Swara blushing )

Sanskaar: Swara Yeh bike toh chal hi nahi rahi hai.. Ise chod do..

Swara: arey haan yeh bike toh chal hi nahi rahi.. Sirf road chal rahi hai speed mein..
Main na iss road pe bhaagungi speed mein.. Bilkul tumhari tarh..

She leaves bike and starts running..
She ran towards their car..

Sanskaar running after her..

Sanskaar finally manages to get hold of her hands & pull her towards him.
She collides with him...
Too close...*intense eyelock*
Her heart beating fast..

Sanskaar: ahhh.. Bahut hua Swara ab ghar chalo

Swara: Mujhe ghar nahi jaana..

Sanskaar: kyun?

Swara: ghar jayenge toh tum phir mujhe akela chod k chale jaoge.. Aur humesha ki tarh meri baat bhi nahi sunoge..
Tears drop from her eyes..

Sanskaar: Swara maine pehle bhi kaha tha aur ek baar phir kehta hoon.. Ab kehne sunne ko kuch nahi bacha hai.

Swara with teary: kya ek baar tum wapas mujhpe trust nahi kar sakte? Bilkul pehle jaise?

Sanskaar turns his face otherside: tumhi batao nah Kyun karu main tumpe trust? Kaise maan lu ki tum..
He turns back to face her... But she was not there..
He looks here and there... Swara ... & founds her standing on his car..
Oh god ab kya tamasha karne wali hai yeh ladki :o

Swara on car...not able to stand properly... ( full on talli mode on )
Blinking eyes...

Swara: arey oh gaav walo...

Crowd gathers around ( 🤣 )

Sanskaar: Swara neeche aao...

Swara: nahi aaungi... ( laughs like talli 😆 )

Swara: arey oh gaav walo..

Paan stall wale uncle: arey oh bitiya yeh gaav nahi Kolkata hai..

Swara: oops my mistake... Sorry sorry sorry ( blows her hairs which covered her eyes )
Arey oh Kolkata walo...

Sanskaar: Swara neeche aao...

Swara: agar tum upar aye toh main yahaan se kud jaungi..
*angry eyelock*

One man drinking water..

Swara: Yeh bottle mujhe dede thakur..

Man: Tum toh veeru bani ho nah? Toh Yeh gabbar k dialogues kyun bol rahi ho?

Swara: arey haan main toh veeru bani hoon 😳😆
Lekin veeru k paas bottle hoti hai nah haath mein?

Man gives her bottle..

Sanskaar: Swara...

Paan stall wale uncle ji: beta par mausi ji aur basanti kon hai?


Swara: ye basanti hai... ( points to Sanskaar )

All eyes on Sanskaar..

Sanskaar: What the... Main aur basanti.. 😵 Swara neeche aao..

Swara: nahi aaungi...

Crowd: mausi ji kon hai?

Swara: no mausi ji.. ( laughs )
Isssh issstoryyy mein basanti hi nakhre dikha rahi hai

Crowd to Sanskaar: kya hua basanti... Kyun phool jaise naazuk Veeru ko pareshan kar rahe ho?

Sanskaar: Shut up.. Main koi basanti vasanti nahi hoon 😡
Swara neeche aao
Nahi toh main abhi upar aa raha hoon..

Swara: agar tum upar aye toh main kud jaungi.. Aur phir jab Mujhe chot lagegi nah.. Tab mujhse zyda tumhe hi hoga..
*intense eyelock*
Swara with teary eyes: tumhe kya laga tha... Tum mujhe ignore karte rahoge.. Mujhse rude behave karoge.. Aur main tumhari zindagi se door chali jaungi.. Yeh jaante hue ki jab tum mere sath aise behave karte ho tab mujhse zyda dard tumhe mehsoos hota hai
( SwaSan BG )
*intense eyelock*SL

Swara: Tum aisa kyun kar rahe ho Sanskaar? Kyun hume itni takleef de rahe ho?

Tum kyun nahi samjhte ki.. ki...ki... I... I... I...I love... I love...

Crowd: Haan aage bol...

Swara: I love... I love... ( she sees rasgullas shop... )
I love rasgullas... & trips.. She falls... But directly lands in his arms..
SwaSan *intense eyelock*

BG: Pal bhar thahar jaao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun
Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
'Agar tum saath ho..
Agar tum saath ho

Crowd claps...

Swara: Mujhe pata tha tum Mujhe kabhi girne nahi doge.. ❤️

Sanskaar breaks eye contact with her and makes her stand..

Sanskaar: ghar chalo..

Swara: nahi...
She moves towards rasgullas shop..

Sanskaar: tum yeh nahi khaa sakti.. Tumhara nasha uttarne ki jagh aur badh jayega..

Paan wale stall k uncle ji: beta yeh toh Ishq ka nasha hai jo kabhi nahi uttarega..

Sanskaar: Swara rukooo..

Swara eating rasgullas...

Sanskaar: Swara.. ( before he could say anything she feeds him rasgullas )

She laughs... Kitne cute lag rahe ho Mr Maheshwari...

& she starts running on road...

She starts singing:
( dancing like cute innocent child )
Haan Hai Koi To Wajah
Jo Jeena Ka Maza Yun Aane Laga
Yeh Hawaon Mein Kya
Thoda Sa Jo Naasha Yun Chane Laga
Pucho Na Pu Hai cha Mujhe Kya
Hua Hai Teri Raahon Mein Aakar (Pucho Na
Pucha Na)
Pucho Na Pucha Mujhe Kya
Milega Teri Bahon Mein Aakar
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe Bithaye
Jannat Dikhaye Haan
O Raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe Bithaye
Jannat Dikhaye Haan

Sanskaar adorbs her..

She comes close towards Sanskaar and cups his face...

Mere Jaise Lakho Mile Honge Tujhko
Piya, Mujhe To Mila Tuu Hi

She made him held out his left hand on which she placed her right one & slid his right
hand around her waist while she placed her left one on his shoulder. She pulled him stightly closer into dance position.

( Romantic eyelocks)

Tu Hi Mere Hooton Ki Khilti Hui Si Hasi
Gila Bhi Piya Tu Hi
Dekho Na Dekho Mujhe Kya Hua Hai
Tujhe Sapno Mein Lakar (Dekho Na Dekho)
Pucho Na Pucha Mujhe Kya Hua Hai
Teri Baaton Mein Aakar
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe Bithaye
Jannat Dikhaye Haan
O Raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe Bithaye
Jannat Dikhaye Haan
( imagine normal ballroom dance postures )

As they were enjoying dancing togerher , it almost starts raining...

There was no shelter..

They almost got drenched..

She was shivering..

He places his jacket around her body..

But she removes his jacket & used it like umbrella.. She grabs his wrist... Pulled him closer & covered that jacket over their heads..

( imagine Aashiqui 2 pose ☺️❤️ )

Sanskaar surprised & impressed... He didn't expected this from her..

Inside jacket they are too close.. Few inches apart.. His head touching her's
*Intense eyelock*

BG: Janam janam janam saath chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yahin
Ek jaan hai bhale do badan ho judaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Both remembering hospital scene.. their Sindoor marriage & real marriage.. Pheras..side hugs..
KC scene.. She looking his face from channi.. Running towards him when he was about to hit her or injured himself ( car brake fail scene )
Meri subah ho tumhi
Aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho

They were about to kiss... Their lips slightly touched.. But something in him stopped him from taking that step forward.. He removed jacket.. & turned his face..
Swara with teary eyes..was about to touch his shoulder.. But he starts moving...

Swara standing numb..

But she was shocked when she saw him covering his jacket around poor kaka

He coming towards her..
*intense eyelock*
( respect for him increased more in her eyes & heart )
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida
Aha ha ha...

He lifted her bridal style..
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida..

Teri baahon mein hai mere dono jahaan
Tu rahe jidhar meri jannat wahin

Continuous intense eyelock..

Swara: Mujhe ghar nahi jana Sanskaar...
Jab tum mere sath nahi hote tab iss Dil ka dhadkana mehsoos hi nahi hota..

Jal rahi agan hai jo ye do tarfa
Na bujhe kabhi meri mannat yahi

Sanskaar in tears too..

Tu meri aarzu, main teri aashiqui
Tu meri shayari, main teri mausiqi

Swara closes her eyes..

I love you Sanskaar... Main tumse sacch mein pyaar karti hoon..

Sanskaar in his heart: I love you too Swara..❤️


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MysticMoon thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Magical Writing...
Hats off Mishu...👏
Love this one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
amazing story
I just loved hole story mainly that talli scene dance n every thing was amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Amazing os...so cute n romantic.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Awesome 👏
Too too too good 😆
Wish to see something like this in the show ☺️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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mishu this was awesome bestest wonderfull 👏mind blowing fantastic superb⭐️
i really enjoyed 😊😊i wish hume show main aisa kuch dekhne ko mile😳😳b/c i know aisa kuch hua to VK and helly bahot hi cute lagege...and i love all the songs.all r my fav😉😉😉

this is for u👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome.
I love it.
Talli swara cnfessing her lv with her cute antics.yet touchy updt.
Bdw,i love all 3songs u used.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hayee hayee.. meri mishu rocked it.. tum ho itni awesome. . bura halath mein bhi achi achi kahaniyaam likhanewali.. bohoti zabardast os tha.. enjoyed it a lot..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...!amazing...taliyaa taliyaa...👏what a song slection yaar...impressed...😊iss story ki tarah hope serial may be divorce may loophole ho...😉mazza ayega...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow kitna cute os hain
loved it
awesome
sanskaar ko basanti bana diya

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