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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Nainu...🤗 🤗

What an action filled, dramatic, emotion filled update yaar! It was completely fabulous!

I just loved the way your portrayed the intense emotions of everyone involved--Adarsh, Sneha, Rahul, Dhruv; Sanskaar & Swara; and even Lakshya and Durga Prasad.

The meeting between Adarsh and Sneha was so very profound, so moving. It was very realistic as well. Poor Sneha, she was completely blank in the beginning and couldn't even react. And then, he instinctive reaction was that of fear and panic, she rushed to her sister for comfort.

I loved the way Adarsh just broke down, and had to be comforted by Sanskaar. It was such a painful moment, a bittersweet moment for him to reunite with the love of his life, whom he could never forget. Though it almost kills him to see her in this condition.

The way Sneha slowly opened up to Adarsh again, was reassured of his love again, was SUPERB. As was the way she reacts on seeing Rahul and Dhruv. The kids also were so excited to meet their real mother, it was as if a void in their loves has got filled.

I loved the way Sanskaar was like a bedrock of support for an emotional Swara, even though he himself was feeling so moved and upset. The small scene between them was emotional and romantic (in a soulmates supporting each other kind of way).

And that last confrontation scene between Lakshya and Durga Prasad, and the brief tussle between Lakshya and Sanskaar, was wonderful as well. Poor Lakshya, he never wanted to come face to face with the man he so hates, the man who cheated his mother, and never bothered to find out anything about him, though he had had a dalliance with Sharmishta and was Lakshya's biological father.

Sanskaar's reaction was also understandable. Though he feels upset at Durga Prasad's past, and is sympathetic towards his half brother's emotions, as a son, he cannot bear to see his father being physically manhandled. So he does rush to push Lakshya away from literally attacking their father. But then Shomi enters the scene---and Durga is shocked at this revelation of his past.

Waiting for the next chapter, dear!

Love,

Viji



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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi

I want to thank all of my dear readers for the wonderful comments and the 'like's you have showered upon me with all your love. I value them with all my heart, love you all from the bottom of my heart 🤗


PART 12

They could hear a commotion from the drawing room area. Swara, Sanskaar and Ragini rushed forward to the front room.
They were alarmed when they saw the scene. A very much furious Lakshya was trying to strangle Durgaprasad and was shouting things like, "How dare you come here, you cheater?", "I will kill you..", "I will not spare you, you unworthy man.." etc now and again.
Ra: (shouts) Lakshya..please leave him..!
Sw: (alarmed) Please stop it, Lakshya..
But Sanskaar's blood boiled when he saw someone manhandling his Papa and he just went forward and grabbed Lakshya clutching the fabric of his shirt with his both hands.
Sa: HOW DARE YOUUU...!!
He just hauled him away and Lakshya fell towards the wall with a crash. Lakshya was infuriated by this and he scrambled up and shouted at Sanskaar, pointing a finger at his half-brother.
La: YOU STAY OUT OF THIS, SANSKAAAR..!!
Lakshya charged towards a very much confused Durgaprasad again and grabbed his collar, shaking with rage.
Just then a strong female voice rang out in the room.
Sha: Leave him Lakshya..!! Don't you dare forget that he is your father..!!
Lakshya let go off the collar and pushed him away, with utmost regret and contempt, while Durgaprasad was looking at Sharmishta as if he had literally seen a ghost. He couldn't believe his eyes.
DP: (shocked) Mishti...!!
And then he glanced at Lakshya, who was fuming with anger and frustration, Durgaprasad was finding it difficult to believe Sharmishta's words, but if she was saying the truth, this young man was indeed his son.
DP: Mishti...what are you doing here..? Is this your home..?
Sanskaar was shocked when he heard his Papa calling Sharmishta by such an endearment, he was double confident that Swara had after all told him the truth. Meanwhile, Sharmishta frowned at Durgaprasad and then looked around the room. She was shocked to see Sanskaar too, because she had unknowingly uttered the secret of Lakshya's parentage in front of Durgaprasad's family. She knew his name and she had seen him in the Maheshwari's family photos which used to appear in the magazines and newspapers now and then. And then her eyes fell on Swara.
Sha: Swara..!
Sharmishta was shocked to see Swara too. Swara ran into her arms and hugged her step mother. Lakshya was looking at Swara with an exasperated expression, but then Ragini came towards him and placed a comforting hand on his shoulder.
Sw: Maa..(smiles)
Sha: (hugs Swara but then she blinks uncertainly and looks at DP and Sanskaar again) Swara..Did you come here with them..? You had gone to Mumbai for a job, right..? Then how ..
Swara knew that the time has come to explain everything to her. Slowly and confidently, Swara withdrew from the embrace and faced Sharmishta.
Sw: Maa..I had lied to you..I didn't go to Mumbai..
Lakshya realized what Swara was trying to do, he didn't want her to hurt his mother.
La: (impatient tone) Swaraa..Just stop this non sense..Ask them to leave, right now..
But Swara didn't pay attention to him and, continued,
Sw: Actually I went to Kolkata to meet Adarsh bhaiyya..
Sha: (shocked) Adarsh..?? You mean that person, who left our Sneha..? What has he got to do with them..(indicates DP and Sanskaar)
And then realization dawned upon Sharmishta, she already knew that Durgaprasad's elder son's name was Adarsh, and she connected the dots easily.
Sha: (clasps her mouth with her hands in shock) Oh god..!! He is Adarsh Maheshwari..!!
When the initial shock wore off, Sharmishta realized that Adarsh too had cheated Sneha just like Durgaprasad had left her, and she turned towards Durgaprasad with fiery and tearful eyes. He flinched seeing the look in her eyes and he looked towards the floor, guiltily. Swara glanced towards Lakshya, who was shivering all over, caught in a fitful frenzy. Any moment, he might pounce upon Durgaprasad again, and then she was sure that Sanskaar won't spare him, this time around. She decided to intervene, before the scene got too much awkward.
Sw: (excitedly)Maa..you know what..Sneha is alright now..!
Sha: (looks at Swara with surprise) Really, Swara..? But, how..?
This caught Lakshya's attention, and his expression softened instantly.
La: Swara..what are you saying..?
Sw: (nods with a smile) Maa, Lakshya..Adarsh bhaiyya is innocent..He didn't cheat Sneha as we all had thought, there had been some serious misunderstanding between them..When Sneha left to India urgently, she could not inform Adarsh bhaiyya, since he had been away for some business tour to Italy..But when Adarsh bhaiyya came back home, he found a fake letter written in Sneha's handwriting, saying that she was eloping with her boyfriend, leaving her family behind. Someone had played a really dirty game with them, Maa..And so, he left to India with Rahul, Dhruv and Parineeta..This is what had happened actually..He didn't marry Parineeta, she was just taking care of Rahul and Dhruv, all these while, acting as their mother and his wife..And you know what, Adarsh bhaiyya was really sad and guilty when he heard about Sneha's condition..He broke all ties with Parineeta and came here with his whole family, to see Sneha..
Sharmishta couldn't believe her ears, a great feeling of relief was coursing through her being.
Sha: (smiling wide, with tearful eyes) Swara..you are telling the truth na..?
Sw: (happily) Of course maa..And you know what..? Your two grandsons are here..? You want to see them..?
Sha: (surprise) God..!! really..??! (then nods with excitement) Yes, I want to meet them..!
Sw: Come with me..(smiles with tearful eyes)
Swara held Sharmishta's hand and led her inside. Ragini and Lakshya followed them, but Sanskaar chose to remain with his Papa.
When they reached inside the room, they were really surprised to see a very happy Sneha, who was talking incessantly with Rahul and Dhruv who were sitting on her either side. Shriya was also there with them, she was sitting in Adarsh's lap, and both of them were watching the scene with real interest. When Shriya saw Lakshya and Sharmishta, she yelled in delight.
Sh: Papaa...Dadimaa..
She jumped off from Adarsh's lap and ran towards them, bubbling with excitement. When Lakshya took her up in his arms, she kissed him and then leant towards Sharmishta to place a sweet kiss on her cheek too.
Sha: Aww Shriya..my Shona baby..(kisses her too)
Adarsh, Sneha, Rahul and Dhruv stood up to greet them, when they came closer. Sneha's face was shining with happiness and Sharmishta embraced her happily with all her love.
Sha: (choked voice) Sneha..
Sn: (overwhelmed with emotion) Maaa...(hugs her tightly) Adarsh has come for me..(smiles through tears)
Sha: Hmmm...(nods, emotionally)
Lakshya had tears in his eyes and he was watching the scene, with a happy smile. He hugged Ragini and she took him in her embrace, offering solace to her beloved husband. Sneha's eyes fell upon them and she left Sharmishta and slowly went towards Lakshya.
Sn: (shining eyes) Lakshya..!
Lakshya left Ragini and faced his sister, overcome with emotion. He raised his hand and caressed her cheek, affectionately.
La: Snehaaa..
Sneha let out a soft sob and she hugged him tightly. Lakshya shut his eyes tightly and hugged her back with love.
La: I am happy for you, Sneha..
And then he opened his eyes and looked at Swara, who was watching the scene, with tearful eyes. He smiled at her and beckoned her to join the hug. Swara ran towards them and hugged them both with exhilaration.
Meanwhile, Adarsh turned towards Sharmishta and held her hands inside his palms.
Ad: I am extremely sorry for everything, Maa..If Swara had not come to me, then I would never have known the real truth..(voice chokes)
Sh: (caressing his cheek) It's ok beta..Now let us forget all bitterness of the past..
And then she glanced towards her grandsons, her eyes shined when she saw the two angelic boys.
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Meanwhile, Durgaprasad was finding it difficult to believe all that he had seen and heard, and he was pacing to and fro along the room. He was still in shock, Sanskaar went and placed his hand on his shoulder.
DP: (blank face, without looking at Sanskaar) Sanskaar...I..
Sa: (carefully) Papa..Please, don't worry..
DP:(shakes his head uncertainly) No beta..I want to tell you something...But, I don't know how to..
Sa: (interrupts) Papa...its ok..I know everything..
Durgaprasad looked at Sanskaar with shock, but then suddenly he felt a sharp pain in his chest, and he clutched his left chest with his hand.
DP: (painful expression) Aaagghhh..
Sa: (worried) Papaaa..Oh no..Relax..Papaaa..
But Durgaprasad's condition worsened and he staggered a bit and was about to fall down, when Sanskaar caught him around his midriff and offered strong support.
Sa: (yells for help) Adarsh bhaiyaaa..bhaiyaaa..Papa is not feeling well..!!
Adarsh reached the hall first and he was followed by Swara, Sharmishta and then Lakshya. Ragini had remained in the room with Sneha and the kids, since they felt that Sneha was not ready to take any more shocks.
Adarsh ran to Durgaprasad and Sanskaar. Durgaprasad was sweating all over and his eyes were shut with intense pain.
Ad: (shocked) Oh no..Sanskaar..What happened to Papa, suddenly..?
Sharmishta and Lakshya also were shocked.
Sa: I will explain later, bhaiyya..Please help me carry him to our car..Let us take him to the hospital..
Sw: I will also come..
Sharmishta and Lakshya too hurried after them.
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Later, as they all were waiting in the hospital corridor, the Cardiologist emerged out of the ICCU. Sanskaar and Adarsh stood up and went towards him, while the others looked at him expectantly.
Sa: Doctor, how is my Papa feeling now..?
Doc: (serious tone) He will be fine..It was just a minor heart attack..He was brought here, right on time..
Ad: Can we go and meet him..?
Doc: Sure, but only one person is allowed inside, at a time..We don't want the patient to be disturbed, right..?
Sa: Ok, Doctor..Thank you..!
Sanskaar went inside the room and he saw his Papa lying on the bed unconscious. Many sorts of tubes and wires where connected to his body and an oxygen mask was fitted over his nose.
A sob struck in his throat. He went and took his father's hand inside his both hands and held them gently..
Sa: I am sorry Papa..I am really very sorry..I should have told everything to you, before itself..Otherwise, it wouldn't have been so shocking to you..
Durgaprasad's lips moved a little and he was trying to say something, but Sanskaar didn't notice it. He placed his Papa's hand back on the bed and turned to leave.
Just then,
DP: (gently) Sanskaar..
Sanskaar turned and looked at him, he was slowly opening his eyes.
Sa: Papa..
DP: (looks at him intently, and in a weak voice) I want to meet Mishti..Is she here..?
Sa: Yes, Papa..
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Sharmishta came inside the room, some moments later. Slowly, she walked close to him, with an uncertain look in her eyes. A weak smile appeared on his lips as he saw her.
DP: (gently) Mishti..I really didn't know that you were pregnant, before I got married to Annapurna..Why didn't you tell me..? I would have done something..!
Sha: (soft, but confident tone) Durgaprasad ji..Please remove this burden of guilt from your mind ..I have got no hard feelings against you..I have forgiven you long ago..
DP: But, Mishti...
Sha: (interrupts) You can call me Sharmishta..
He cast her a look of shocked surprise for a moment and then continued,
DP: Sharmishta..I also wanted to talk with our son, Lakshya..
Sharmishta flinched a little bit, when she heard "our son" from his mouth.
Sha: I will ask him to come.
Slowly, she turned and walked away.
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Lakshya walked into the room, feeling uncertain and a bit guilty.
DP: I don't have the courage to ask forgiveness from you, beta..
Lakshya looked away, but didn't tell anything.
DP: Beta, Lakshya..I know that you can't forgive me, its ok..But I am really sorry..Is there something I can do for you..?!
La: (looks at him and thinks for a moment, and then says) Ya..there is something you can do for me..
DP: (soft voice) What is that..?
La: I have done a really big mistake in my life, and right now I want you to correct that mistake..
DP: How can I do that..? Please tell..
La: You have to accept Swara as Sanskaar's wife..They love each other a lot, but Swara had to leave him years ago, just because of my stubbornness..I was against their relation, because Sanskaar was your son, and I didn't want my Maa to be sad, knowing about it..
Durgaprasad looked away with a look of intense grief and remorse. Tears streamed down his eyes and he shut them momentarily. But he composed himself quickly, and then again looked at Lakshya.
DP: Sure, beta..I know that they love each other a lot..I don't have any problem with their marriage..But I didn't know that I had been the reason for their split up..Also, I owe you something, Lakshya..I am ready to accept you as my son, beta..I would like to make a formal announcement, in front of national media, once I am out of this hospital..
La: (smirks) No need of that, Mr.Maheshwari..My name is Lakshya Shekhar Shah.. I have addressed only one person as my Papa in my entire life, and I can proudly say that he had been a wonderful father to me, till he died..But you don't have to worry..I have no hard feelings against you now..
Durgaprasad was slumped by his answer, but he felt proud of his son, for his steadfast nature, which had to be attributed to Sharmishta of course.
DP: (emotionally) Thank you, beta..
La: (nods)Get well soon, Mr.Maheshwari..
DP: (nods gravely) Thank you..
Without saying anything else, Lakshya departed from there.
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So next part is SWASAN MARRIAGE.
End of PART 12
Hope you all enjoyed this update.
Please post your opinions and comments.
Love
Naina😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Another superb update naina 🤗
It was full of awesome really
The way you expressed the emotions of everyone is very well written
Dp deserves that what sharmishta said to him 👏
Lakshya i really him in this part
Finally swasan coming together i am very happy
It was superb update

Now please update zinda rehti hai unki mohbatein please 😃
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaaay SwaSan Marriage Nextt . 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So finally all are resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Loved Lakhya's stance of keeping his father's name as opposed to his birth father's name.

And the icing and cherry is that the next update would be the SwaSan wedding - yaayyy!

Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update naina dear
How sharmishta and lakshya controlled their anger after seeing sneha so happy...and lakshya is a very good man, how he wanted to keep his stepfather's identity as his...speechless... Naina awesome work.. Thank you for the sweet precap😊 🤗
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Awesome update so finally Misti and DP come face to face and...
Lucky condition is also cute so indirectly he want to sort out his mistake about swasan...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh awesome update!!!
Waiting for next ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice..
Finally swasan will be together...

continue soon..
thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Little sad and big happy happy part...finally all problem sort out...

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