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Hello dears,

Sorry, I am not able to reply individually to your comments, this time also. I am just going to directly update PART 11.
I have made it a bit longer than usual..😃😃

But I have read each and every comment and I loved them all..Thank you sooo much everyone 🤗 for reading the previous update.
I appreciate your likes and comments, wholeheartedly..
Here is the PART 11 for you all to read.. Hope you all enjoy reading it too..

PART 11

Sw: Actually I had come here, to tell Adarsh bhaiyya to meet Sneha once, so that there will be some improvement in her mental condition.. I didn't want to break his and Parineeta's relationship..But actually things are different here..He still loves my sister..And he has not married Parineeta as we had thought..Maa still doesn't know that Adarsh bhaiyya is from this family..If Adarsh bhaiyya wants to accept Sneha, then things are going to be difficult..
Swara looked at Sanskaar again, for some reaction. But still he was wearing that blank expression. She moved closer to him and placed her hands on his shoulders.
Sw: Sanskaar..We have to do something..I can't let your Papa meet my Sharmishta Maa..
Sa: (determined tone) But, I want Papa to meet her..
Sw: (shocked) What..? But why..? (painfully)
Sa: Swara..I want to make everything right..Please, you trust me na..?
Sw: (nods) Yes..
Sanskaar embraced her with all his love and she nestled inside his arms, quite securely.
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Meanwhile Adarsh and Parineeta were having a big fight in their bedroom.
Ad: (furiously) I will go and meet Sneha..! She needs me..! She might be thinking that I left her and married you, Parineeta..But you and me know the truth..By the way, you used to be her friend too..Don't you want to meet her after all these years..!
Pa: (defiantly) Nooo..I don't want to meet her, Adarsh..!! And I will not allow you to meet her too..(points her index finger in warning, she was shaking all over)
Ad: (garbs her shoulders angrily) But why, Parineeta..? Just tell me, damn it..!!
Pa: (in a helpless tone) Because I love you, Adarsh..!! (tears in her eyes)
Ad: (equally helpless tone) But..But, I love Sneha..!! And you know that..!! You heard what Swara said na..Sneha never left me..She was there in India with her family, because her Papa got ill..When I went to Italy for that business tour for one week, she might have not been able to contact me, to inform me that she was going to India..May be after reaching there, she would have tried to contact me in our U.S land phone number, but we also had left to Kolkata by then..You, me and my kids..I don't know who wrote that fake letter in Sneha's handwriting, saying that she was eloping with her new boy friend..(looks away with a painful frown)
Parineeta who was looking into Adarsh's eyes till then, looked away guiltily. But Adarsh didn't notice it, he was thinking about his Sneha. He left Parineeta's shoulders and turned away.
Ad: I am sorry to say this, Parineeta..But I have to meet Sneha..And I am going to tell Rahul and Dhruv about Sneha, that she is their real mother, and that we are going to meet her tomorrow.
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Next morning dawned with new hopes for Sanskaar, Swara and Adarsh. Swara knew that today, Lakshya would come to take her and Shriya to their home in Rajkot, as he had promised her the previous day. So she telephoned him and told that there was no need to come and that she would arrive on her own.
Meanwhile, Sanskaar walked into Durgaprasad's room. He was sitting on his bed and was reading the newspaper, while having some hot coffee.
DP: (smiles) Sanskaar..Good morning beta..
Sa: (smiles) Good morning, Papa..I need to talk to you..!
Durga Prasad cast the newspaper aside and asked him to sit down. Sanskaar sat down on the couch and faced his Papa.
Sa: (seriously) Papa..We are going to Rajkot, today..!
DP: We, means..? Who all are going..?
Sa: Me, Adarsh bhaiyya, Rahul, Dhruv, and you Papa..
DP: (frowns) Rajkot..But why..?
Sa: We are going to meet the real mother of Rahul and Dhruv..
The coffee mug was about to slip away from Durgaprasad's hold, in shock, but he managed to hold it tighter, before it fell down.
DP: (shocked voice) What are you saying, Sanskaar..!! Parineeta is their mother, right..?
And then Adarsh entered the room, looking determined.
Ad: No, Papa, Parineeta is not my wife, she is my friend only..I am sorry..It's all my fault..Please forgive me..!
Adarsh began to tell everything about Sneha and himself while Sanskaar supported him by helping him complete the story, whenever Adarsh felt weak, while narrating it.
After hearing out every bit of the story, Durgaprasad was too much heart broken.
Sa: And there is one more thing that you should know..Swara had come here for this reason only..Sneha is her elder sister..And Shriya is not my daughter, nor she is Swara's daughter..
DP: (shocked) What..?!!
Swara entered the room just at the point and Durgaprasad glanced at her.
Sw: Yes, Durgaprasad Sir..I am really sorry for all the trouble I caused you when I reached here. Actually, Shriya is Lakshya's daughter.. he is my brother..I brought her along with me so that I could stay here, till Adarsh bhaiyya returned from Bangalore..My sister was really heart broken when she learnt about Adarsh bhaiyya and Parineeta's marriage from a magazine..She was pregnant with Adarsh bhaiyya's child at that time..And soon she lost her baby due to a premature delivery..It had all been so shocking for her, so she slipped into acute depression, gradually..
Adarsh was shocked to know this, yesterday Swara hadn't got time to explain all this to him.
Ad: What..?!!
Sw: Yes, bhaiyya..Sneha's mental condition is worse now..She has developed suicidal tendencies..And her doctor advised us to make you meet her at least once..So that she may show some positive response..I didn't come here to break your marriage life..I just wanted to ask you meet her, to talk to her with some care and affection..
Adarsh had tears of remorse in his eyes. He just wanted to cry out loud, for whatever harm he had done to his Sneha, even though it all happened unknowingly. Sanskaar understood his pain and he hugged his bhaiyya..Adarsh cried silently, resting his head on his younger brother's shoulder.
Parineeta was watching all this from the doorway and she had no other choice, but to walk away, knowing that no one in this house was going to support her.
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Swara, Sanskaar, Durgaprasad, Adarsh, Shriya, Rahul and Dhruv reached Swara's apartment in Rajkot. Only Sanskaar and Swara knew about Sharmishta-Durgaprasad's relation, they had not mentioned anything to the others about it. Moreover, Sanskaar wanted to see his Papa's reaction, when he saw Swara's mother.
As they walked up the steps which led to the apartment, Swara glanced at Sanskaar in an apprehensive way. Sanskaar nodded at her with confident eyes and he held her hand, quite protectively. Swara smiled at him gratefully and her eyes twinkled with her love for him.
When they reached the threshold of the house, Swara knocked at the door. Ragini opened the door and she was really surprised to see all of them in front of her. Shriya hugged her happily, when she saw her mother.
Sh: Maaa..
Ragini bent and scooped the child in her arms and kissed her cheeks with love.
Rg: Awww my Shriya babyyy... (smiling with happiness)
And then she glanced at the Maheshwaris and Swara.
Rg: Please come inside..(smiles warmly)
They all walked inside into the drawing room.
Sw: This is Ragini..She is my bhabhi..! She knows each one of you..(smiles pointedly)
Ragini looked at Adarsh first, and then at everyone else with a polite smile.
Ad: (apprehensively) Where is Sneha..? I want to meet her..And Rahul and Dhruv too..
Rg: Err..Adarsh ji..I don't think its a good idea for the boys to meet her, right now..I guess, it will be too shocking for them..
Ragini looked at Swara, for support. But Swara was looking around for the sign of Lakshya or Sharmishta maa.
Rg: Isn't it, Swara..?
Swara looked at Ragini and answered.
Sw: Yes..you are right, bhabhi..! Adarsh bhaiyya..I will take you to her..
But then to everyone's surprise, Rahul and Dhruv who were silent till now, grabbed the end of Swara's saree.
Ra: (confidently) Swara aunty..We want to meet our Mumma..!
Dh: (pleads) Please, Aunty..Let us meet her, na..!
Sanskaar knelt down in front of the young boys and tried to explain the situation to them.
Sa: Rahul, Dhruv..Please try and understand..your Mumma is ill..She should not be disturbed..
Ra: Chachu..we know why she is so ill..It is because of not seeing her family for so many years..Papa and Mumma got separated due to some reasons..We want to tell sorry to her..(tears in his eyes)
Hearing this, Dhruv too began to sob slightly and Sanskaar wiped his tears away. Rahul hugged his little brother and tried to pacify him.
Ra: Dhruv..listen to me, we should not cry like this..Mumma will feel sad..We are big boys na..big boys don't cry like this..!
Dhruv stopped crying instantly listening to Rahul's words.
Dh: Ok..bhaiyya..! I don't want to hurt Mumma again..I won't cry..!
Adarsh turned toward his sons.
Ad: (gently)Rahul, Dhruv..you both can meet your Mumma..But first of all I want to meet her..And after that I will take you to her..I just want to explain her a few things..Can you please let your Papa do that, first..?
Rahul and Dhruv looked at each other first and they both decided silently. Then they turned towards their Papa.
Ra&Dh: Ok Papa..(tries to smile bravely)
Adarsh had tears in his eyes and he knelt down on the floor to hug them. The boys put their little arms around their father, with love.
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When Adarsh entered the room, his eyes fell upon his wife. Sneha was sitting on an arm chair, near the window, she was looking out of it. But her eyes had a blank look, it was devoid of all hopes. Her hair was tied into a neat plait, but her once beautiful face had lost all its glow and charm. She was wearing a light blue salwar kameez and her fingers were absent mindedly playing with the ends of her dupatta. Adarsh's insides wrung with pain when he saw the sight in front of him.
Ad: (softly) Snehaaa...
It didn't seem as if she had heard him. Her eyes left the window, but she didn't look at the direction of his voice. She just gazed at the floor and then into her lap, but he noticed that her fingers were now playing with the ends of the dupatta, in an even more frantic manner.
Adarsh slowly walked inside the room and,
Ad: (louder, but with love) Snehaaa...
Sneha looked up at him and then her eyes scanned his appearance from head to foot. But her face was blank, she blinked her eyes slowly and steadily, and she didn't show any reaction as if she had actually seen him. Adarsh smiled at her through his tears and walked towards her. Sneha's eyes began to widen slowly and her mouth uncertainly opened to say something. Her breathing pace quickened and her chest was heaving in a faster pace.
Sn: Aaarrrgghhh...!!!
A loud cry of pain escaped her mouth and Adarsh was shocked at its intensity.
Ad: (shocked voice) Snehaa..Its me..(chokes) Your Adarsh..!
Sneha was looking everywhere else except him, and was clutching her ears with both hands. And she yelled again as if she was in deep agony.
Sn: Aaarrrgh...Aaarrrgh...!!! (gasps for breath uncontrollably)
Adarsh was shocked beyond limits at her reaction, but he didn't want to back off now. He moved closer to her and she stood up from her armchair, feeling alarmed. Her eyes were bulging with fear and she was acting as if she badly wanted to escape from the room. Adarsh tried to hold he shoulders in order to pacify her, but she pushed him away and ran off towards the door.
Swara, Ragini and Sanskaar came running into the room, hearing all the noise and Sneha ran straight into Swara's arms. She hugged her as if her life depended on it and Swara tried to caress her hair and back, in order to calm her down.
Sw: Sneha..Its ok..I am with you..Relax..Relax...
Sneha just hung close to her sister and was trembling like a leaf caught in a gust of wind. Sanskaar walked towards Adarsh and placed his arm around his shoulder. Adarsh leant his head on to Sanskaar's shoulder and began to sob hysterically. Sanskaar stood silently and let his brother cry his heart out.
Swara and Ragini had tears in their eyes and they watched each other silently. Swara whispered in a slow and soothing manner, into Sneha's ears.
Sw: Sneha..There is no need to be sad anymore..Your Adarsh has come to you..He has left that woman, Parineeta..There has been a misunderstanding and that is the reason why you both had to separate..Please relax and sort it out with him..Your husband wanted to meet you at once, when he heard everything..Please talk to him..Will you, Sneha..Its your life and you should not let it go out of your hands again..You love him so much na..He loves you a lot more than that..I have seen it in his eyes..And you know what, Sneha..he has not married Parineeta, as we all had assumed earlier..He has loved only you, all his life..Please trust him, Sneha..Please talk to him..He loves you, Sneha..He loves you..
Sneha slowly detached herself from Swara's arms and turned around to glance at Adarsh. Her eyes drank in the sight of him, who was crying helplessly into Sanskaar's shoulder. Her brows furrowed and her gaze softened, but she had the same blank look in her eyes. Sanskaar patted on Adarsh's head to make him notice Sneha.
Sa: bhaiyyaa..
Adarsh straightened himself and watched Sneha intently, but he was scared to go close to her, afraid that he would frighten her again.
Sneha began to walk towards him slowly.
Sanskaar left Adarsh's side and went to join Swara and Ragini who were still standing at the doorway.
Adarsh spread his arms wide, he wanted her to know that he wanted her in his life forever. But still, Sneha didn't bother to run into his arms, and continued walking towards him in a slow pace.
Ad: Sneha..I love you..(looks at her with tears in his love filled eyes) (shouts) I LOVE YOUUU..
Sneha reached closer to him and she looked straight into eyes. Adarsh gazed at her in an unflinching way, bravely showing his love to her.
Ad: I am sorry Sneha..I am sorry for every trouble I have caused you..(chokes and sobs)
Without waiting for her response, he just hugged her with all his love. He tightened his grip around her and he began to weep again, sobbing severely and clutching her face close to his chest.
Sneha's eyes filled with tears but her face was blank, slowly she raised her arms and placed it around his body. Her fingers clutched the fabric of his shirt and then she gradually began to tighten her hold on it. Her nails were digging into the skin of his back, but Adarsh didn't feel the pain at all. Sneha's breathing pace began quicken and she began to heave long agonizing breaths. Soon they became shallow and she also began to sob hysterically. She wept silently into his chest like a child.
Swara hugged Sanskaar, unable to contain her mixed feelings of grief and utmost relief, anymore. She too wept silently, placing her head on his shoulder. Sanskaar also had tears in his eyes, but he was strong enough to console his Swara. Ragini, who understood that the lovers needed some privacy, walked away from there, discreetly.
Adarsh kissed Sneha's forehead and Sneha hugged him tightly and wept even more, moaning loudly. Adarsh knew that he had to be strong now, so he stopped crying and began to console Sneha.
Ad: (whispers softly ) Shh...Sneha..baby, don't cry..I won't leave you again..I love you Sneha..Snehaaa, relax..
Sneha began to relax a bit and her agonized wails gave way to small sobs. Adarsh began to pat along her hair and back, and she eventually stopped her sobs too. He cupped her face in his hands and made her look into his eyes, so that she could clearly see his love for her.
Sn: (whispers) Adarsh..
Ad: Snehaa..
Sn: (gently) Our kids..? Where are they..?
Adarsh smiled at her and his palms were still cupping her face.
Ad: (softly) They have grown up into big kids..You want to see them na..(looks at her affectionately)
Sn: (widens her eyes) B-Big kids..?? Re-reallyyy...?
She couldn't believe her ears. She was expecting her kids to be both 3 years and 2 years old, just as she had last seen them. She was not aware of the number of years, she had spent separated from them. Time had been standing still for her, while she was in a state of depression.
Ad: (nods excitedly) Yes, Sneha..Rahul is nine years old and Dhruv is eight.
Sneha looked away feeling distressed, trying to gauge the time she had spent away from her family. Adarsh felt frightened when he saw the look on her face and he just made her look at him again, afraid that he would lose her into that abyss of depression again.
Ad: (loving voice) Snehaaa..You want to meet them, right..? I have brought them with me..
Adarsh signalled to Sanskaar to bring them inside.
Excitement crossed Sneha's face again and she smiled widely with twinkling eyes.
Sn: Really, Adarsh..? Rahul and Dhruv are here..?!!
Ad: Yes baby..They also badly wanted to meet their Mumma..
Sanskaar brought in the boys and Adarsh held her shoulders carefully and turned Sneha towards the doorway.
Ad: Sneha..can you see our kids..Rahul and Dhruv..?
Sneha's eyes were fixed upon the two handsome boys. Her face was filled with a motherly glow and an affectionate smile appeared on her lips.
Ra: (softly)Mummaa..
But Dhruv was too touched to speak, he was gazing at her with curious eyes.
Ra: (turns to Dhruv) Dhruv..Look at our Mummaa..
Dhruv looked at his brother and smiled widely with tearful eyes.
Dh: Bhaiyyaa..Our Mummaaa..
Rahul nodded at him with eyes filled with pride and affection. Both the boys ran towards Sneha and she knelt down and welcomed them into her arms.
Sn: Ohh..my cute little babies...!
For the first time in their life, Rahul and Dhruv didn't mind someone addressing them as "cute" or "little" or "babies". They just hugged her with all their love. Sneha began to shed tears of happiness and she smiled widely through her tears.
Ragini and Shriya also appeared at the doorway, and now she was watching the lovely scene with Swara, Sanskaar and Adarsh.
Sneha rained kisses all over Rahul's and Dhruv's faces and the kids were happier than ever. Adarsh too joined the group to hug them with love.
Right at that very moment, they could hear a commotion from the drawing room area. Swara, Sanskaar and Ragini rushed forward to the front room.
They were alarmed when they saw the scene. A very much furious Lakshya was trying to strangle Durgaprasad and was shouting things like, "How dare you come here, you cheater?", "I will kill you..", "I will not spare you, you unworthy man.." etc now and again.
Ra: (shouts) Lakshya..please leave him..!
Sw: (alarmed) Please stop it, Lakshya..
But Sanskaar's blood boiled when he saw someone manhandling his Papa and he just went forward and grabbed Lakshya clutching the fabric of his shirt with his both hands.
Sa: HOW DARE YOUUU...!!
He just hauled him away and Lakshya fell towards the wall with a crash. Lakshya was infuriated by this and he scrambled up and shouted at Sanskaar, pointing a finger at his half-brother.
La: YOU STAY OUT OF THIS, SANSKAAAR..!!
Lakshya charged towards a very much confused Durgaprasad again and grabbed his collar, shaking with rage.
Just then a strong female voice rang out in the room.
Sh: Leave him Lakshya..!! Don't you dare forget that he is your father..!!
Lakshya let go off the collar and pushed him away, with utmost regret and contempt, while Durgaprasad was looking at Sharmishta as if he had literally seen a ghost.
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END of PART 11
Hope you all enjoyed the update..
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow fully superb update 👏
Adharsh and sneha scene was lovely
Swasan scene was cute
Lakshya as angry young man 😆
Update soon

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Nynaeve

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Dear Naina,

That was one roller coaster of an update - so two couples seem to have patched up. Adarsh and Sneha and their kids (hope Parineeta is just going to walk away, she seems to wrecked their lives enough).

The ending was a slight cliffhanger - with the start of Lakshya and DP confrontation - and Sharmistha steps in - eager to know what happens next.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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naina
simply superb .
sanskar took the right decision to take DP with them .
Feeling very happy for adarsh and sneha reunion .
feelings good for swara
but lakshay has hatred for Dp
waiting for next update
love
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Awesome up as usual...finally sneha adarsh reunion...n dp got to knw bout sharmishta n lucky bt u made clifhanger for next chapter...swasan scenes r very cute...