AADHA ISHQ SS, Final Part and Epilogue-Pg 94

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Eagerly waiting for part 10 darling. 🤗 Resing this spot for comment on that part. 😉

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naina

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Dear readers,
I am really very sorry for delaying this update so much..I was very much busy for the past few days, and I couldn't finish writing this update as soon as I had anticipated..
And I am again sorry, I am not replying to your comments individually..But I have read them all and I appreciate your opinions with my whole heart..I enjoyed reading them..Love you all 🤗 for the love and support you are showing me..
So now I am back with a new update, which is solving all the mysteries till now..
Hope you all enjoy it..😊😊

PART 10

Terrace of Maheshwari Mansion, 8.00 pm

Pa: (painfully) I love you Adarsh..You cannot leave me and go after her..!
Ad: (defensively) I never promised you anything Parineeta..I still love only Sneha..You are not my wife, she is..!!
Pa: But I looked after Rahul and Dhruv all these years..
Ad:(scoffs) Well, I know you never cared much for them..You just acted as my wife and their mother..All you were interested in was business, property, parties and all..
Pa: (shocked face) ADARSHHH..!!!
Adarsh didn't want to argue with her anymore and he just walked away from there. Parineeta glared at Swara and Sanskaar and she too walked off.
Sanskaar looked at Swara with lots of concern in his face.
Sa: I am sorry Swara..I didn't believe you earlier..
Swara placed her index finger on his lips.
Sw: Don't say sorry, Sanskaar..I can understand..
He took her into his arms and hugged her with all his love. He kissed on top of her head and she pressed her cheek close to his chest.
But it was then that she remembered something and her expression changed into a worrisome one. She withdrew from his embrace quickly and Sanskaar frowned at her, seeing her tensed face.
Sa: What happened, Swara..?
Sw: Sanskaar..Adarsh bhaiya and Sneha cannot reunite..Just like we both can't..
Sa: (stunned) WHAT..??!! What are you trying to say, Swara..!!
Sw: Sanskaar..I am going, downstairs..
Since Swara couldn't face his questions again, she turned away and started walking off. But Sanskaar was quick for her, his hand grabbed her wrist and turned her around to face him again. He caught hold of her other hand too and pulled her closer to him, rather angrily.
Sa: (shouts) Stop this non sense, Swaraaa..!!
Swara looked at him feeling alarmed at his fury.
Sw: (helplessly) Sanskaar...Please let me go..(struggles to free from his grip)
Sa: (shakes his head ) No Swara..I want to know..What is the reason..?
He glared into her eyes, with a mixture of blazing fury and pain. He gripped her shoulders roughly and began to shake her body desperately, to get an answer out of her.
Sw: (painfully) Sanskaar..
Sa: Why can't we reunite, Swara..! And why the hell can't Adarsh bhaiya and Sneha bhabhi become one again..They are already married, for god's sake..!! What is your problem, Just share it with me, DAMN IT..!!!
Swara began to cry now, unable to contain her worries and feeling afraid how Sanskaar will react, after knowing the truth. Sanskaar felt bad, seeing her cry and he took her inside his arms again, protectively.
Sa: (consoles) Stop crying Swara..Please just trust me..and tell me the reason..I may be able to help you, Swara..!! Please share your problems with me..(caresses her hair affectionately)
Sw: (slowly and softly) You won't be able to help me..
Sanskaar loosened his embrace and made her look at him.
Sa: (softly) Let me hear it first..then we will decide..
Swara let out a deep steadying breath and she was ready to face his reaction.
Sw: (seriously) Can we sit and talk, Sanskaar..
Sa: (nods) Ok..
He followed her towards the metal swing chair at the far end of the terrace. Both of them sat on it, facing each other. Swara braced herself for his reaction.
Sw: Now, I am going to tell you something, which is going to be really shocking for you..But its the truth, and I am telling it you, because you demanded the truth..
Sa: (anxiously) Please, Swara..Stop torturing me like this.. This suspense is killing me..! (looks at her intently)
Sw: (takes a deep breath) Sanskaar..The reason is your Papa, Mr. Durgaprasad Maheshwari..!
Of all the things, this was the least expected one to come out of Swara's mouth..!
Sa: (stands up in shock) WHAT..?!!
Swara took a steadying breath and looked away impatiently, and then looked at him again, this time with patience.
Sw: (seriously) Sanskaar..Please..Listen to me once..And then you can react in any way you want to..!
Sanskaar frowned at her and sat down again, wanting to hear out what her reasons were.
Sw: I don't know, from where I should begin..But let me tell it to you like a flashback story.
Sa: Ok..(nods blankly)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> FLASHBACK >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Seven Years Ago
Delhi
In the evening, Swara came home after meeting with Sanskaar, after their Ice cream shop date. When she arrived, she had a strange feeling that something bad had happened. Swara tried to avoid the feeling and she tried to reminisce about the way Sanskaar had kissed her at the ice cream shop. She hummed her favourite song and walked upstairs, to her room. But before she reached her room, she heard Lakshya's voice.
La: Swara..
Swara turned and she noticed that he looked tensed.
Sw: What happened, Lakshya..?! Is everything ok..?
La: (seriously) I want to talk to you..
Sw: Ok..
La: Not here..Lets go to your room..
Swara followed Lakshya into her room and Lakshya closed the door after she entered. He handed her an open magazine. Swara was intrigued by his action, but still she took the magazine in her hand and her eyes scanned the open page. What she noticed first was a photograph in which she saw Sanskaar in a recently clicked family photo. For the first time, she saw his father, Durgaprasad Maheshwari, his brother Adarsh Maheshwari, his bhabhi Parineeta, and his nephews Rahul and Dhruv who looked 3 years and 2 years old, respectively. She scanned the title of that particular article and noted that it was based on Kolkata based Industrialist Mr. Durgaprasad Maheshwari.
But she couldn't guess why Lakshya was showing this to her. She wondered if her brother had found out about her newly formed romantic relationship with Sanskaar Maheshwari. She looked at Lakshya with a half-confused, half-inquisitive expression.
La: (apprehensively) Sneha showed me this, today morning..
Sw: (surprised) What..? But why..?
La: He is Adarsh..! Her 'so called husband'..
Swara felt like a huge blow had hit her head. She fumbled for words, due to shock.
Sw: Wh-What..? Oh my god..!!
Swara looked into the photograph again, and tried to read the description under it again. It clearly read that Parineeta was Adarsh's wife and Rahul and Dhruv were their kids. But what shocked her even more was that Adarsh was Sanskaar's brother. But she couldn't share that piece of information with Lakshya, right now. No one at home knew about Sanskaar.
Sw: (shocked face) Lakshya..I can't believe this..! This Adarsh has cheated our Sneha..!!
La: (bitterly) And that Sanskaar will cheat you too..!
Sw: (widens her eyes) Lakshya..Do you know about our relationship too..? But how..?
La: I saw him drop you home yesterday night..
Swara remembered that it was after their restaurant date.
La: I didn't know who he was, yesterday..but I know, now..And I am sure he will cheat you just like his brother cheated our Sneha..(looks away seethingly) Its in their blood..(shivers angrily)The Maheshwari men are born cheaters..! Even that bloody Durgaprasad..(grits his teeth)
Swara was in a state of shock, she couldn't even think that Sanskaar would cheat her, but when she heard the last bit of Lakshya's accusations, she looked up into his face, with confusion.
Sw: What are you trying to say, Lakshya..? What did Sanskaar's Papa do..?
La: (angrily) I will tell you what he didn't do..(shivering voice) He didn't marry my mother, in spite of being in love with her for almost two years..(voice cracks and eyes fill with tears) And I regret to say that he is my own Father..(wipes off his tears furiously)
Swara received the next big shock of the day. She was receiving shock after shock, this evening.
She didn't know that Lakshya was an illegitimate child of Sharmishta maa.
Swara and Sneha were Shekhar's biological daughters from his first marrriage with Janki, where as Lakshya was Sharmishta's son. Lakshya was ten years old, Sneha was eight years old and Swara was seven years old when they met each other for the first time at Rajkot. It happened when the young and handsome, Shekhar Shah (who was a widower), moved in with his two daughters near the apartment of Sharmishta Bose who was a single mother to Lakshya. The kids bonded well with each other from the start and it led to a companionship between their parents, who were lonely and single. After some months, Shekhar asked Sharmishta's hand for marriage and the kids were really happy to know this. Sharmishta was reluctant at first, but Lakshya's insistence made her comply. He really loved Shekhar and he even used to address him as Papa just like Swara and Sneha addressed her Maa. Shekhar and Sharmishta got married and their neighbours were against this decision. So Shekhar had brought his newly formed happy family to Delhi and settled here since then.
And now, Swara learnt the secret about Lakshya's parentage after these thirteen years. She felt really sad after seeing his condition.
Sw: Ohh Lakshya..! (puts her arm around his shoulder consolingly) You never shared this with us..!!
Lakshya nodded with a bitter smile and told her the story..
La: Maa told me about it when I was nine years old.. Everyone was teasing me about my father, my friends my neighbours and all.. And I asked Maa about why I didn't have a father when everyone else had..And then Maa showed me a photograph of this man Durgaprasad Maheshwari and told me that he was my father..I was very much happy and then I wanted to meet him..But then she told me that I couldn't meet him, that he had married another woman and now he had another family..She had told me that she never wanted to meet him again in her life and made me promise that even I must not try to meet him..It was one year later that you all came to live near our apartment in Rajkot..
Sw: (nods with tearful eyes) But did Durgaprasad ji know that Maa was pregnant when he left her..
La: No..Maa never told him, as she came to know about her pregnancy after his marriage. He had to marry a lady named Annapurna, whom his parents had chosen for him. His parents opposed his love relationship with Maa, since she was a Bengali and that cowardly man left her much conveniently. Maa was really heartbroken with his decision and when she learned that she was pregnant, she never went begging after him. I really respect my mother's courage, Swara, she didn't opt for an abortion and she gave birth to me. After my birth she took me to Rajkot, to stay much far away from Kolkata.
Lakshya's eyes filled with tears of anguish again and he walked towards the window of her room. Swara was left confused with her future with Sanskaar. She looked at Lakshya uncertainly, whose back was turned to her now.
Sw: (softly) But Lakshya..Sanskaar is not like his father or Adarsh..He is not a coward..He will never cheat on me..!
Lakshya turned towards her with a murderous look. She was alarmed when she saw the transformation in him.
La: (shouts angrily) You are not getting it Swara..!! I don't want you to be in this relationship..!! Its not about the "trust" factor any more..Its just that, I want to keep my promise to my Maa..!
Sw: (confused) What..?!!
La: (softly) Yes..Maa made me promise that I will never try to meet that wretched man..(snorts derisively) My father..!! And she also does not want to meet him again..(shouts) Do you get that, Swara..!!
Swara trembled with shock at his angry words. Lakshya had never talked like this to her, she noticed that he was so much disturbed.
Sw: But, Lakshya..(tearful eyes)
Lakshya noted that she was very much hurt. He felt guilty and so he took her in his arms, with affection.
La: I am sorry, Swara..But you have to forget him..
Swara detached herself from his arms and stared at him with shock.
Sw: No Lakshya..Please..I can't..!
La: Then I will be forced to believe that you just don't love our Maa..! (looks away with determination)
Sw: (shocked) Nooo Lakshya..I love her..!! How can you say something like that..
La: (looks at her intently) So then you have to take care of her happiness..It has been only two months after our Papa's death..You can't marry Sanskaar, Swara..How will you explain this to our Maa..That you want to marry from that "cheater Durgaprasad's" family..Maa won't like this relationship at all..Look, its by god's grace that Sneha escaped from that relationship..She will forget him in a while and then we can get her married to someone who desereves her..And it will be better if you will also forget that Sanskaar..
Swara's eyes were filled with tears of distress and she was in a dilemma. She realized what Lakshya was telling was right. She didn't want to cause any unhappiness to her Sharmishta maa. But she knew that she loved Sanskaar, and she was really confused to take a decision right now. Feeling uncertain, Swara took her mobile, and was about to dial Sanskaar's number. Just then Lakshya noticed it.
La: (frowning) Are you going to call him..?
Swara was startled at the menacing tone in his voice.
Sw: (looks up in shock) Ye-Yes..I just want to explain him about all this..
Lakshya snatched her mobile away and glared at her. Swara looked at him feeling apprehensive.
La: ARE YOU MAAADDD..!! How the hell are you going to explain, Swara..Are you out of your mind..!! You are about to make things complicated..Listen, we have to shift our family to my Maa's old apartment in Rajkot..Then only you will be able to forget him..I am going to delete his number from your cellphone..
Before Swara could protest, Lakshya just deleted Sanskaar's number from her phone. Swara couldn't believe what he had just done.
Sw: But Lakshya..Sanskaar should know..
La: (angrily roars) SANSKAAR SANSKAAR SANSKAAAR..!!! ITS ONLY HIM YOU ARE THINKING ABOUT..! JUST LEAVE HIM SWARA..FOR GOD'S SAKE..COME WITH ME...TOGETHER, WE WILL LEAVE THIS DAMNED PLACE..!!
Sw:(cries) Ok Lakshya..But please, I will just leave him a note..So that he won't come looking after me..!
La: (heaves a deep sigh) Do it fast..and pack everything..We are not coming back here again..DO YOU GET THATTT..!!!
Sw: Ok..
That night itself, Lakshya, his wife Ragini, Sharmishta, Sneha and Swara left their house in Delhi to their old house in Rajkot.
Before leaving, Swara left a note for Sanskaar on the front door saying,
"Sanskaar, Don't search for me..I am going..Sorry..But we were never meant to be.."
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> END OF FLASHBACK>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Swara finished telling Sanskaar, the whole story and Sanskaar was watching her with a blank face.
Sw: Sanskaar..Please tell something..
Sanskaar just stared at her, without uttering a word. She realized that he was in a state of shock.
Sw: Actually I had come here, to tell Adarsh bhaiyya to meet Sneha once, so that there will be some improvement in her mental condition.. I didn't want to break his and Parineeta's relationship..But actually things are different here..He still loves my sister..And he has not married Parineeta as we had thought..Maa still doesn't know that Adarsh bhaiyya is from this family..If Adarsh bhaiyya wants to accept Sneha, then things are going to be difficult..
Swara looked at Sanskaar again, for some reaction. But still he was wearing that blank expression. She moved closer to him and placed her hands on his shoulders.
Sw: Sanskaar..We have to do something..I can't let your Papa meet my Sharmishta Maa..
Sa: (determined tone) But, I want Papa to meet her..
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End of PART 10 update
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Naina😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wonderful update Nainu dear...will unres for a detailed revert tomorrow.

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Hey Nainu...🤗 🤗

Wow, what an action packed chapter full of amazing truth reveals! Really fultoo masala, paisa vasool entertainment! 😉

I loved how you have woven so much intrigue into the story. Adarsh--Sneha being a couple truly in love, and in fact Parineeta playing a dirty trick to separate them and come into Adarsh's life, was revealed in your last chapter, and then you further developed it here. God, that lady is so awful, breaking a family for her own selfish reasons. She claims that she took care of Rahul and Dhruv all these years, and she loves Adarsh, so he should stay with her!! 😡 I hope Swara and Sanskaar reunite Adarsh with Sneha...

But the clincher in this chapter was the staggering revelation of Durga Prasad's past with Sharmishta. Lakshya is his son, and therefore Sanskaar and Adarsh's elder half brother! No wonder he hates the Maheshwari family...poor guy must have had such an awful childhood, before Shekar and Sharmishta married. Very creative touch there, Nainu...

So that is the reason Lakshya was so angry with Sanskaar and Swara's relationship. He knows that Durga Prasad cheated Shomi; and he is under the impression Adarsh cheated Sneha. So he is convinced that Sanskaar would also, sooner or later, cheat Swara. He is just being a protective and possessive elder brother (since he is now Swara and Sneha's step brother). Nice touch there, about the familial bonds that they share. Also, apart from the trust factor, he does not want his mother to feel hurt, come face to face with Durga Prasad or anyone from his family. When Swara insisted earlier, that Sanskaar was faithful to their love, not like his father, Lakshya made her promise to give him up, saying that otherwise she would hurt Shomi! 😲 😭

Sanskaar cannot bear the thought of Swara going away from him. 😳 When she said that there was a reason she could not divulge, but they could never be together, he felt so much anger and pain...good that she finally told him the complete truth. Even amidst all this confusion and pain, they felt so much solace in each others arms...😉 ☺️.

Good to know that Sanskaar is planning to confront his Dad, and make him meet Shomi. I am so happy that he believed Swara and did not doubt her. Even though he puts his Dad on a pedestal and practically worships him, he has realized that Swara always speaks the truth; its one of the qualities he adores so much in her...

Waiting for the next chapter, dear!

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update naina 👏
I loved it
The way you shows the emotions in your stories is awesome i really liked it.
Update next part soon

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Res ❤️
Will patiently give reviews tomorrow

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I am really sorry naina for doing it late...please check pg87 i have a reason..
This update was super awesome..swara has really a lot of pain inside..sneha has suffered a lot 😭 its good to see thast sanskaar is supporting his swara althrough..
Magical update...well written 👏

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shamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Awesome update

You beautifully unfold the mystery behind swara's action

But it was really a surprise.

Laksh is Durgaprasad's son.

Waiting for your next update

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

naina
you always surprise m with your works...they are not superb but out of d world...they are too gud to b just complimented by words
jus luv your twist n turns...
so lucky is d 'villain' of story but for a genuine cause is for his mummy.
update zinda also

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KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

Naina...Awesome...omggg twist after twist...very thrilling one...Without any of their mistakes sanskaar & swara r suffering... Will they unite or not?

What will happen when Sanskaar confronts DP & Dp meets Sharmista?? What would be laksh reaction?? Will Adarsh reveal about sneha to DP??

Omggg so many questions running in mind..hope will get answers in next update...

As usual very well written..loved ittt

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swetha10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Awesome update...

thanx a lot for the pm...

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Vry vry sry dear 2 unress late...
Update was fabulous..thnks dear 4 d pm...
Ntha paryuka.. Shck pe shck.. U r givin yaar...
Laksh s sanskaar's brthr...
Ellam.complicated aayi...really shckd dear..
Secrets r revealin mre n mre...
It s affectin so many lifes..
Laksh's angry is rite in his pov..
Durgaprasad cheatd his mthr..
His son adarsh cheated laksh's sister sneha(voh manta aisa he).
Obviously vo sochega sanskaar wil cheat swara..
Hope sanskaar wil clear al d mess..
Pls bring swasan soon yaar.. Both luvs each othr madly..
Waiti 4 nxt update dear..do continue dear ..

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago

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