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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Nainu, Nainu, my dear...🤗 🤗

This update was utterly, beautifully SwaSanlicious. 😳 So romantic, so passionate, so tender, so loving! Their interaction at the beginning of the chapter as well as the end was completely mind blowing!

So at the beginning, Sanskaar showed his obvious affection and care to Swara, and said that he wanted to give a new start to their relationship. He is so serious about them, he also says they can start off as friends, till she gets comfortable. Swara was deeply touched by that, she still feels, for some reason, that she would not be able to marry Sanskaar, but she is very happy to at least become his friend again. Because she also has very deep feelings for him.

Lakshya seems a rather interesting character here--there is definitely a suspense about his nature. Though he seemed arrogant and brash while he talked to kaka, he doesn't seem to be a bad person. He is advising Swara to avoid Sanskaar it looks like, but it doesn't seem as if he has any lustful or indecent emotions towards her. It seemed more like the way a close friend or even a cousin might interact with her.

Sanskaar is such a smart dude! He made the perfect plan to have Swara realize the depth of her own attraction and feelings for him. She just couldn't resist stealing glances at him while he was clad in a vest, and she was stitching the shirt button he had deliberately torn! 😆 And then came that superb, romantic scene between them and that scorching kiss. 😳 ☺️ So happy that Swara now realizes she and Sanskaar love each other so much. She wants to be completely honest with him now, and tell him the whole truth about what happened earlier, why she deserted him without ever telling him anything.

Naina, my dear! How can you end the chapter just there!! At least put us out of our suspense by updating soon na! I want to know what the reason was! 😊

And yes, update Zinda Rehti Hai...also please! 😉

Love,

---Viji

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Jwala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Nainu lovely. . ee story oru perfect blend aayitund ipo. one side curiosity. . I have so much doubts. . laksh sharikkum aaranu.. villian? supporter? onnum guess cheyyan pattunilla. next side beautiful dreamy swasan.. loved it to the core.. want more and more swasan romance. . laksh ne pattiyulla doubt onnu para nainu.. ragini udo ithil? pettennu update cheyh.. it is wonderful. . love u dear

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chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Hi dear...havent commented a long time bcoz of my xams...sorry...thanks for the pm

just love the way the story is shaping up...waiting eagerly for the next update...wanna know about swalak n also who shriya is...just loved the last 2 parts

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#534

Why is Lucky here... I don't like home... Hope Swara and Sankaar stay together...

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Pearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#535

Yayy !! Finally the hot romance n the secret I've been crazily wanting to know will come out !!

Do update soon...

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#536

Hello my dear readers, I know you are all waiting for the mystery to be solved, and so I will directly update the PART 9. But a little bit of mystery still remains and it will be revealed in the next update, PART 10

Sorry, I am not able to reply individually to your comments, this time.
I have read each and every comment and I loved them all..
Thank you sooo much everyone 🤗 for reading the previous update. I appreciate your likes and comments, wholeheartedly..

Here is the PART 9 for you all to read.. Hope you all enjoy reading it too..

PART 9

Sw:(whispers softly) Sanskaar..I still love you..
She didn't know why she said that. But she didn't regret it either. Those magical words had their effect on Sanskaar instantly. He raised his face and looked into her beautiful face, with happy eyes. He hugged her tightly and kissed her forehead.
Sa: I love you too, Swara..
Swara felt a special feeling of protection inside his arms. In her serene mind, she debated whether to talk to him about everything which was troubling her mind. But she was not sure, how he would respond after knowing the truth. But still a strong voice inside her heart was urging her to speak out her problems to him. So she decided to seize the chance.
Sw: Sanskaar..I need to talk to you..
Sanskaar realized that the time has come, for him to know her secret. He took off his arms from around her and looked into her face.
Sa: Tell me, Swara..
Both of them sat down on the couch and sat facing each other.
Sw: Sanskaar..I have come to your house with an important mission..
Sanskaar was listening carefully now.
Sw: Both of us know that Shriya is not our biological daughter. And you might be wondering now, who her parents are..?
Sanskaar nodded his head seriously.
Sw: Well, she is the daughter of my brother Lakshya and his wife Ragini...(then with a helpless look) But I am sorry Sanskaar..I had to tell such a big lie to enter into this house..!
Swara looked at Sanskaar for a few moments for this truth to sink in. But Sanskaar didn't show any surprise, he just viewed her with concern.
Sa: But why Swara..?
Sw: Because I wanted to meet your elder brother, Adarsh bhaiyya..!
Sanskaar was really shocked now.
Sa: What..?!
Sw: Do you remember that Adarsh bhaiyya used to work in U.S before coming back to India.
Sa: Yes..And he came back seven years ago, with Parineeta bhabhi and Rahul and Dhruv. They were really small kids then. It was a shock for Papa, that Adarsh bhaiyya had married without his knowledge and even kids were born , which we were not aware of. I remember that Papa was very angry with him. I was in our college in Delhi, at that time.
Sw: Sanskaar, Rahul and Dhruv are not Parineeta's biological children. They are my sister Sneha's kids.
Sa: (angrily) What the hell, Swara..?!!
Sw: (patiently) Sanskaar, if you want to listen to what I am going to say, please be patient. Don't over react like this. Hear it out as a story and then tell your opinion.
Sa: (impatiently) Ok..!
Sw: About 11 years ago, Sneha had met Adarsh bhaiyya in their U.S office and they fell in love immediately. They were in a live in relationship and Sneha got pregnant. It was very late for having an abortion and thus Adarsh bhaiyya married her, and of course they didn't inform their families. After an year Rahul was born and then the next year Dhruv was also born. They were having their own happy and lovely world.
Parineeta was Adarsh bhaiyya's best friend at that time. Years passed and about 7 years ago, my father was diagnozed with brain tumour. Sneha had to come and visit Papa and so she came alone, without Adarshh bhaiyya and her kids. No one in our family knew about her marriage and she couldn't tell us because, Maa and Papa were not in a state to stand any more shocks. She knew that it was not the right time to let us know about that news.
And then after one week had passed after her arrival, she fainted while we were keeping a 'Nirjala' fast and puja for the well being of Papa. That day, when doctor came to do the check up, we came to know that she was two months pregnant. It was a huge shock for all of us and we didn't inform Papa about it. Maa slapped her and asked who was responsible for the pregnancy. She told us all about her marriage with Adarsh bhaiyya and also the fact that she had other two kids, Rahul and Dhruv.
Maa forgave her when she learned about the truth and she wanted to meet Adarsh bhaiyya and her grand sons. Sneha tried to contact him in many ways, but didn't get any response. Our brother, Lakshya went to U.S and went off in search of the address which Sneha gave him. But when he reached there, he came to know that, Adarsh bhaiyya and kids had moved from there. To where, it was not known. Lakshya came back home and Sneha was really heartbroken. Papa passed away after a month. And then another month passed. It was at that time that I met you Sanskaar, and then we both fell in love. I didn't want to bother you with all my family problems, so I thought of sharing all these with you later. At that time, Sneha chanced upon a photograph of the Maheshwari family in a magazine and it showed all of you, ie, your Papa, Adarsh bhaiyya, Parineeta, Rahul and Dhruv and Sanskaar, you. Sneha was shattered beyond limits when she read about Parineeta as his wife. She fell into a state of semi shock. She showed the picture to our brother Lakshya and he was enraged beyond measure.
There is back story at this point and I will come to it later, Sanskaar.
Sneha's mental health began to deteriorate gradually. After some months, Sneha had to undergo a premature delivery, and the baby died within a day.
She finished telling the story and Sanskaar had a shocked look on his face.

Sa: So why didn't your sister come here to claim her rights over my bhaiyya, before itself..?
Sw: I told you na she was broken to core. She felt as if he had cheated on her. And she didn't want any of us to go and meet him too.
Sa: Ok so what happened now? After all these years, why did you come in search of my bhaiyya..?

Sw: (looks away with a sad expression) Sneha's mental condition is worse now. She is suffering from acute depression and has been showing signs of suicidal tendencies. She is under the treatment of a new Doctor now. It was he who advised us to inform Adarsh bhaiyya. According to this new doctor, at least he could come and meet her and god knows may be she will show some kind of postitive signs. But Lakshya was against it, since he hates Adarsh bhaiyya for cheating our sister, Sneha. But his wife Ragini suggested a plan to me. That, when Lakshya went to Mumbai for a business trip, Ragini and I would come to Kolkata to meet and talk to Adarsh bhaiyya. As a result, we came in search of his apartment address in the Kolkata city. Shriya was also with us. Then we came to know that he has gone for a one week Bangalore tour with his wife Parineeta and they have left Rahul and Dhruv here at your home. So I thought of coming to Maheshwari house, ie, where you and Durgaprasad ji lives. I knew that I can't tell the real reason of coming here to both of you. That is why I did this drama of you being Shriya's father, since I had our photographs as a proof of our relationship. It was Ragini's idea, she asked me to take her daughter with me. Since Shriya was almost 6 years old, and she used to call me Swara Mumma, it was really convincing. She adresses Ragini as Maa, and she calls me Swara Mumma..We anticipated that your Papa would take a decision of DNA test and that too only after discussing with Adarsh bhaiyya, since he is in the media field. So I made sure that I can stay here till he comes back. Also I wanted to know the real reason behind him marrying that woman, Parineeta.
Sa: Ok Swara.. I don't know what to believe..But, I want to talk with Adarsh bhaiyya about this first. He will arrive tomorrow. Let us wait till then..

She knew that it was not easy for him to accept all the truth so easily. She looked at him patiently and said,

Sw: Ok Sanskaar..Its already lunch time and I need to serve food to the kids..

Saying so, she stood up to leave from the room. Sanskaar decided to ask the very question, which had been hurting him for years.

Sa: Does this have any connection with why you left me at that time?

Sw: (nods sadly) Yes, Sanskaar..But the real reason is not that. I don't know how you are going to take it.. ! (looks away sadly)

Sanskaar stood up and placed his hands on her shoulders.

Sa: And what is that reason..? Please tell, Swara..

Sw: (cups his face with love) I am sorry, Sanskaar..But I am not ready to reveal it now..But I will tell you, before I leave this house, tomorrow..

Sa: (shocked) What..?!! You are leaving me again..??!

Swara shut her eyes with pain, when she opened them again, they were filled with tears.

Sw: Lakshya knows that I am here and he is really angry at me.. He will come here to take me back to Rajkot, which is where we live..But I have asked him to give me one more day, so that I can talk to Adarsh bhaiyya..He will be back tomorrow, right..?
Sa: Yes..! But Swara..Please don't leave me..(he cups her face)
Sw: (she hugs him tightly) I am so sorry, Sanskaar..I have to go..
Swara started to weep and Sanskaar was so heartbroken. Sanskaar didn't know what her problem was, but he hoped against hope that she would stay for his sake. He hugged her tightly and pressed her to him even more protectively.
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Next day evening, when Adarsh and Parineeta arrived back to the Maheshwari Mansion from Bangalore, they were astonished to see a cute little girl playing along with Rahul and Dhruv. Rahul and Dhruv were disappointed to see them back. It seemed to them that it was the end of all their fun, since they have to go back with their parents to their own house in the Kolkata city.
Ra: Mumma Papa, you are back..!
Pa: (laughs) Look at them Adarsh..They are not even happy to see us both..!
Ad: Hmmph..That is because they realize that "No more Masti" from now on..
Then he walked towards Shriya and knelt down beside her.
Ad: Now who is this cute little girl over here..
Dh: She is Shriya..! Swara aunty's daughter..!
Adarsh and Parineeta were really intrigued now.
Pa: Swara..?! Who is she Adarsh..?
Ad: I think I have heard this name before..But can't remember who she is..? Let me ask Papa and Sanskaar..
Pa: Rahul, Dhruv..Both of you go and pack your bags..We have to go home tonight after dinner..
Ra&Dh: Ok Mumma..
Both of them ran towards their room and Shriya followed them, laughing merrily.
Adarsh and Parineeta went towards their usual bedroom they used to stay when they lived in the Maheshwari Mansion, to freshen up after the long journey.
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When Adarsh came out of the washroom after freshening up, Sanskaar was sitting in the bedroom.
Ad: Sanskaar..(smiles)
He came and hugged his younger brother affectionately.
Sa: (hugs back) bhaiyya..!
But then Adarsh noticed that Sanskaar was not in his usual self. Something seemed to bother him.
Ad: What happened, Sanskaar..Are you ok..?
Sa:(sighs) I want to talk to you bhaiyya..There are a lot of things to be cleared..
Ad: (concerned tone) Tell me, Sanskaar..
Sa: Not here..Can you come up to the terrace..
Ad: Ok..
When they arrived at the terrace, Swara was waiting for them both.
Ad: Sanskaar..Is she, Swara..? I saw her daughter downstairs..She was very cute..(smiles)
Sa: Yes, bhaiyya..
Adarsh looked at Swara and smiled pleasantly.
Ad: Hello Swara..
Sw: Hello..
Ad: I think I have heard your name somewhere..But I don't remember when..? Do we know each other..?
Sw: (smiles pointedly) Well..You don't know me..But you might know my sister..Sneha..!
Upon hearing the name, Adarsh's eyes widened in shock and soon his face contorted with fury.
Ad: (angily) Sneha..!! Where is she, now..?!
This was not the reaction Swara had expected. She had expected him to deny that he knew anyone named Sneha.
Sw: (frowns) Ok..I will tell you where she is..But can you please tell Sanskaar about your relationship with her..
Adarsh turned his face towards Sanskaar and saw the look on his brother's face. Sanskaar was having a half uncertain--half apologetic expression.
Sa: Bhaiyya..I want to know whether she is telling the truth..I will only believe what you say now, bhaiyya..I trust you, completely..
Adarsh let out a heavy sigh and turned away from Sanskaar, afraid to face his reaction.
Ad: She is my wife, Sanskaar..!
Hearing this from his brother's mouth was even more shocking to Sanskaar.
Sa: But bhaiyya..Then Parineeta bhabhi..?
Ad: Is not my wife, as you all think..!
This was a shock for both Sanskaar and Swara.
Sw: What do you mean by not married..? You are a couple right now..
Adarsh was getting infuriated now. He turned towards Swara defensively.
Ad: She was my best friend, when I started working in U.S.. Wait a minute..Why are you here, Swara..? What do you want now..?! And where is she..Sneha..?!
Sw: (confidently) Do you actually want to meet her, after all that you did to her..?
Adarsh was clearly baffled now.
Ad: (frowns) What are you trying to say..?
Sw: I mean why do you want to meet her, after all these years..?!
Ad: (shouts angrily) Well..I want to ask her, why she left me and our kids and eloped with her boy friend.
Swara was at complete loss of words now. She couldn't believe what she was hearing.
Sw: What..?! Sneha eloped with her boy friend..(scoffs) Wow..!! What a likely story..
Ad: (confused) Then where is she, now..tell me, Swara..!
Sw: She has been staying with us in India for the past seven years..
Adarsh couldn't believe his ears. He tried to remember the incident that happened seven years ago.
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When Adarsh returned after the one week business trip to Italy, to his apartment in America, he was shocked to find a letter from his beloved wife, Sneha addressed to him on the table.
It read,
Dear Adarsh,
I am going..Please don't search for me..I am not coming back into your life..I guess you can get married to someone else and look after our two kids..I am leaving the country with Mike, a charming and handsome personality, whom I met recently, and fell in love. Then only I realized that ours had been a hollow relationship, and that Mike is the man of my dreams, who has taught me the real meaning of love..
Sneha.
Adarsh was shocked beyond measure and he slumped down into a nearby chair.
Ad: How could you so this to me, Sneha..! (holding his forehead)
Parineeta arrived the apartment after sometime and was shocked to see Adarsh's condition. She went and put her arm around him.
Pa: What happened..?
Adarsh showed her the letter. After reading it, she placed her hand on his shoulder.
Pa: Adarsh..Did you try to find her..?
Adarsh shook his head, unable to say anything. Tears were threatening to fall from his eyes.
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Adarsh finished telling Swara and Sanskaar about the incident.

Swara and Sanskaar were listening with shocked faces.

Sw: But that is not the truth.. 7 years ago, our father was diagnosed with brain tumour. Sneha had to come and visit Papa and so she came back to India.

Ad: But then if this is the truth..why she didn't inform me before going..?

Sw: But she had tried a lot to contact you, a week after her arrival..In fact, when she arrived home, she didn't tell us about marrying you, or about having two kids because, Maa and Papa were not in a state to stand any more shocks. And then when we realized that she was pregnant, ...

Adarsh couldn't believe his ears. He was receiving shock after shock tonight.

Ad: She was pregnant..?!! With my child..??!!
Sw: Yes..! But the child is no more..It was a premature baby..It couldn't survive..
Adarsh's eyes filled with tears. He moved closer to Swara and took her hands in his hands.
Ad: (shaking voice) I want to meet Sneha..! Where is she now..?
Sw: Our home, in Rajkot..

Just then they heard a loud voice.

"You are not going anywhere, Adarsh..!!"

It was Parineeta and she was looking at them with a murderous look on her face.
Ad: Parineeta..!
Parineeta walked towards them, with a determined expression.
Pa: (shaky voice) What about my life..?
Ad: But..Parineeta..
Pa: (painfully) I love you Adarsh..You cannot leave me and go after her..!
Ad: (defensively) I never promised you anything Parineeta..I still love only Sneha..You are not my wife, she is..!!
Pa: But I looked after Rahul and Dhruv all these years..
Ad:(scoffs) Well, I know you never cared much for them..You just acted as my wife and their mother..All you were interested in was business, property, parties and all..
Pa: (shocked face) ADARSHHH..!!!
Adarsh didn't want to argue with her anymore and he just walked away from there. Parineeta glared at Swara and Sanskaar and she too walked off.
Sanskaar looked at Swara with lots of concern in his face.
Sa: I am sorry Swara..I didn't believe you earlier..
Swara placed her index finger on his lips.
Sw: Don't say sorry, Sanskaar..I can understand..
He took her into his arms and hugged her with all his love. He kissed on top of her head and she pressed her cheek close to his chest.
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End of PART 9
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Love,
Naina😊

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isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#537

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unres

yipppee m first
ooo aammm geee
lux is swaras brother !dis is the shock of d day for me
hush that cutie Shriya is not swasans daughter
I think pari is d main culprit
and swara is suffering from a deadly disease therefore running from sanky. is it?
hope sneha gets fine too after seeing her hubby n sons.
rah dhruv really need a dotting mother like sneha.

Edited by ishanita - 9 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#538

Awesome update naina 👏
Poor sneha and adarsh
Parineeta 😡
Update soon

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Anusha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#539

omg loved it naina so laksh is bro of swara and sneha wow..suprbd part nxt soon plz.and i thnk may be parineetha wrote dat letter

Edited by anushapinky - 9 years ago

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#540

wow! what a bomb to throw in us. parineeta played a game to trap adarsh and throw sneha out of his life. and worse never cared for his children and wasnt even married! so sneha is alive...hopefully she can recover enough for her and adarsh to get back together. now what is up with swara? don't tell me she had brain tumour as well? if yes, please make it operable so that she can survive it and have a happy life with sanskar.

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