AADHA ISHQ SS, Final Part and Epilogue-Pg 94

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

so the two cannot keep themselves away from each other or even keep the other's thoughts from their mind. i guess there are going to reach a point soon when even them telling themselves to back off won't help and they will want to be together. will swara and sanskar really reveal the truth to the family about shriya or will they hid it for the sake of their family, pretending she is theirs?

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

naina my love 😊 !! This update was delightful and soothing...
You explanation of their attraction towards each other was so subtle and sweet..
Loved your work dear...you're a talented fiction composer 👍🏼

Love you dear

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Naina, it was a awesome update. Rahul, dhruv and Shreya they are so sweet. Swasan romance was also beautiful. They really love each other. Their is mystery behind swara's action. But I think she can't hurt sanskar. Because she love him . I think this mystery will unfold soon. Thank you for giving such a beautiful story. Waiting for next update

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Res. 😊 Will un res tomo, Naina dear...

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Naina darling...🤗 🤗

First, I must tell you that I really admire the way you can multi task two very different works like "Adha Ishq" and "Zinda Rehti Hai...". Both have your trademark intensity and powerful romance between our beloved lead pair, but the setting, plot devices, characterization, all are so distinct. Kudos to you! 👏 👏

What I loved in this chapter, was the intense pull Swara and Sanskaar feel for each other. The attraction is there, onviously. But its much more than that. It is the deep love they had for each other 7 years back, which has not diminished in its intensity and passion the slightest. In fact, the enforced separation, due to circumstances you will reveal soon, has made their feelings for each other grow, with their utter yearning for one another.

Rahul and Dhruv are playing cupid very efficiently, I must say. What brainy kids these 2 are! 😃 And cutie pie Shriya is also unintentionally playing cupid...between her mausi and mausa? 😉 😊 Or should they be called chacha and chachi? 😉 I know you will reveal the details in good time. Waiting for that!

That kiss was so very sensual, Naina. This is your trademark style--intensely romantic and passionate descriptions, but never in the least bit risque or bawdy.

Do update soon. If I could make a wish, I would ask for one update of Zinda Rehti Hai...and one update of Adha Ishq at least on alternate days!! 😛 What can I say, you know how mad I am about Zinda...and indeed all your fics. 🤗

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#365

wow...naina...so romantic.the two souls are connected to each other...they want each other badly ..but something is dragging them...waiting for next update... [:)]

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Patel.S.Patel

@Patel.S.Patel

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Naina am really vry sad !! u forgot to pm Me I was waiting for 4th part bt u dint pm me.. I got part 6 link frm my frnd .. plz do pm me all ua ffs plzz ... its just Awsm ...