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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini
naina darling read 3rd 4th parts in one go
flash back sooo passionate...
the close moment they shared is awesome
his concern over swaara
sooo touching
their confession super adorable
kids are more than adorable wat to say
cutest kids love them
they changed their mission too cute
swara z so sweet
taking good care of shreya
kids changed thier party n mission
yayyy way to go kids love you
looking forward to next
love u loads naina
great work...
mai na ...ye comments pm kiya...but may b u dint see
posting it here too
double double na dont mind

Suhaa my dear🤗

I will read your PM's too..But lots of PM's in my inbox now😆 since I was missing from the forum..😛

Glad you loved the update 3 and 4 dear..😃😃

Kids changed their party😆 I loved your this comment 😛

Kids will play cupid for Swasan.

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Monica_Suhasini

@Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Suhaa my dear🤗

I will read your PM's too..But lots of PM's in my inbox now😆 since I was missing from the forum..😛

Glad you loved the update 3 and 4 dear..😃😃

Kids changed their party😆 I loved your this comment 😛

Kids will play cupid for Swasan.

are yar...i understood thats y commented here my love❤️

so not to worry...

kids...awww

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Sorry my friends for such a late update..I was really busy and was not in a mood to write..Hope you all enjoy this latest update..But before that here is a quick recap for you all, in case you forgot the plot..

{{RECAP: Kolkata based industrialist, Durgaprasad Maheshwari asks his younger son, Sanskaar to get married to (his Business Partner and friend) Shekhar's daughter Kanika and he agrees. Their engagement is fixed on the next Sunday which was only 6 days later. His elder son, Adarsh and his wife Parineeta, who stays in another house in Kolkata, and works in the media field, decides to visit Bangalore for an important meeting. They drop their two mischievous sons Rahul (9 years old)and Dhruv(8 years old) at the Maheshwari Mansion in Kolkata. Rahul and Dhruv are good friends with Sanskaar. Next day Swara arrives at the Mansion with a small girl and claims that she and Sanskaar were in a romantic relationship and the girl Shriya was Sanskaar's daughter
Durgaprasad believes Swara that she was Sanskaar's girlfriend in the past and he even decides to conduct a DNA test to confirm whether Shriya is Sanskaar's daughter but only after consulting with Adarsh who will be arriving back after a week. He asks Swara and Shriya to stay at his house till then. He also postpones Sanskaar's and Kanika's engagement.
Sanskaar sits in his office and has flashbacks about how he had tried to woo Swara seven years back in their college days, about why Swara had slapped him in front of the whole college and the way he apologized to Swara in the college assembly.
Sanskaar feels that he is in love with Swara. Swara also realizes that she loves Sanskaar. In the College Holi celebration, Sanskaar and Swara apply color upon each other. In the evening Swara accompanies Sanskaar to the coffee shop. Both of them wishes to confess their love towards each other, but circumstances don't allow. Swara gets a call from her home and she leaves from there. Next day, at a party night, Swara proposes him by singing "Pehla Nasha" for him. He also remembers the way she had left the place, without a proper explanation, only leaving a note for him, which read "Sanskaar, Don't search for me..I am going..Sorry..But we were never meant to be.."
Now after seven years, Sanskaar wonders why she is back in his life again, that too with a girl child, whom she is claiming to be their daughter.
He gets drunk and goes to her room late night and questions her about this. She doesn't answer him properly and again replies on his face that "I know I did the right thing, Sanskaar..! And as I told you in that note, we were never meant to be.."
He felt bad and said that he hates Swara and he promises her that he will surely prove that the girl was not their daughter. Then he leaves her room without a backwards glance.
Sanskaar decides that he will find out about Swara's reasons for coming back. He asks Rahul and Dhruv to spy on Swara while Sanskaar and Durgaprasad will be away at office. Both of them become friends with Shriya. Rahul searches Swara's belongings for any clue or proof against her. But he does not get anything. They like Swara and Shriya very much and they decide to make Sanskaar and Swara fall in love again.}}

PART 5

In the evening, Sanskaar and Durgaprasad came back from the office. Sanskaar was quite confident that the boys would have succeeded in their mission of finding clues against Swara. Smiling excitedly, he went up to their room. When he entered the room, he found them sitting on the floor and playing a video game together.
Sa: Hey guys..!
Rahul and Dhruv heard their Chachu's voice and they looked up.
Sa: So boys...Did you find out anything..?
They stopped playing and got up from the floor and stood facing Sanskaar.
Ra: Chachu..We didn't find out anything suspicious. I had searched her entire room..
Sa: (face turns sour) Oh..!!...All right..!...(pauses to think for sometime) Well then..You keep a watch on her..You can do it for me, right..?
He looked at them with a pleading face and the kids felt pity for him.
Dh: Sure..
Sa: Alright champs..Let me go to my room and freshen up..I will see you around later..
Ra: Ok Chachu..
Sanskaar left their room feeling dejected and the boys looked at each other.
Dh: (feeling frustrated)Why is Chachu so sure that Swara Aunty is wrong..I don't understand, can't he just see for himself that she is so nice.
Rahul just smiled and put his arm around his brother who was upset.
Ra: He will realize Dhruv..We will make him realize..
Dh: (groans miserably) But how, bhaiyya..?!
Ra: I have an idea..
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The boys went into Sanskaar's room after some time. Sanskaar had just come out of the shower and was changing into his t-shirt and loose pants.
Ra: Chachu..
Dh: We have an idea..
Sa: (wearing his t-shirt) What..?
Ra: You have to try and be friends with Swara Aunty..
Sa: (feeling confused) But why..?!
Dh: (feeling irritated) Just do as we tell you..ok..!
Sa: (grumpily)But I don't even want to talk with her..I just hate her..! (looks away in anger)
Rahul felt that Dhruv was getting over emotional and he decided to take the matter in his hands. He caught hold of Dhruv's arm and squeezed it meaningfully.
Ra: (smartly) Offo Chachu..She is your enemy right..?
Sanskaar looked at him feeling confused. He thought, "Swara is my Enemy..?? Now where did that come from..?". But then he decided to hear him out and nodded at him to go on.
Ra: Ok.. So haven't you heard this quote ,"Keep your friends close and your enemies closer." You need to be nice to her and in that way you can keep a close eye on her.
Sanskaar was about to interrupt when Rahul held up his hand and continued in a hurry.
Ra: We will also keep a close watch when you are not around. But still, try to talk with her in a friendly way.
Sanskaar was thoughtful for a moment and then he asked doubtfully.
Sa: But what if I try and still she doesn't talk to me..?
Ra: You must first start with being nice to Shriya.
Sa: Hmm..ok then..But you have to help me..
Dh: (feels happy and excited) You just leave it to us..!
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After having dinner with Sanskaar and Durgaprasad, the boys went straight towards Swara's room and knocked at her door.
Sw: Come in..
They walked inside and saw that Swara and Shriya were having dinner together.
Sw: (smiles)Hello boys..
Shriya smiled when she saw them and they too smiled at her affectionately.
Sw: You both had your dinner..?
Ra & Dh: Yes, Aunty..We came to take Shriya upstairs with us..We want to show her our room.
Sw: Alright..(smiles)
Swara helped Shriya wash her hands and mouth and then allowed her to go with Rahul and Dhruv.
They took her to their room and Sanskaar was already there. It was for the first time that Sanskaar actually noticed the girl. In the earlier occasions, he was so angry at Swara that he just didn't look at her properly. He now thought that she was really cute and he felt an instant liking. But he didn't want to express that feeling and so he just smiled at her. He watched her as the boys showed her around the room. The way she widened her eyes and giggled cutely reminded him of Swara and all the happy moments which he had spent with her in the past made him smile even wider.
Just then he noticed her looking towards the cupboard rack near the ceiling. She extended her tiny hand upwards and pointed her index finger. She was indicating a spider-man toy, with which the boys used to play when they were little kids. Since they didn't use it now-a-days, it was kept up in the shelf.
Sh: (smiles widely) I love Spiderman..
Before Sanskaar could realize what he was doing, he went forward and picked her up in his arms. He raised her upwards and helped her reach towards the toy easily. Shriya was so excited that she began to laugh uncontrollably at being hoisted up to such height. She took the toy and looked into Sanskaar's face and kept laughing happily. Sanskaar also started laughing with her and just then Swara made her entry into their room. What she saw, made her froze at the doorway. When she saw him laughing like that, a slight smile appeared on her lips and she kept looking at him feeling transfixed.
Dhruv noticed Swara at the door and he already knew she would come looking for Shriya, as per they had anticipated.
Dh: Swara Aunty..!
Sanskaar stopped laughing and looked towards the door and Swara immediately brought back her cold expression. He felt a bit uncomfortable at her stare and so he tried to lower Shriya towards the floor. Rahul hurriedly whispered to him, "Keep holding her, Chachu..Don't put her down..". Sanskaar remembered their plan and felt confident. He kissed Shriya's cheek and pressed his cheek closer to her soft cheek with love. Swara didn't know what to do or say.
Ra: Hello Swara Aunty..Please come in..Shriya is enjoying with us.
Sw: (without looking at Sanskaar) Err..Rahul..I just came to check whether Shriya is alright.. You people carry on..I will go back to my room.
Sa: (in a soft tone)No Swara..Please stay..
Dh: (whines)Please Aunty..
Swara was stuck. She knew that they couldn't create a scene in front of the kids. So she decided to stay in the room with them.
Rahul, Dhruv and Shriya sat down together on the bed and the boys played with the Spiderman toy trying to make her laugh in various ways. They just loved the way she laughed. Sanskaar also kept smiling at their antics and he turned towards Swara and smiled at her affectionately. Swara was feeling perplexed at his actions. She thought, "Why has he changed his attitude towards Shriya and me, all of a sudden." But still, she also smiled back in a formal way.
Just then, Dhruv nudged Rahul and whispered in his ears, "Oh no bhaiyya.. these two are not even talking".
Rahul winked at his impatient younger brother and whispered "Now, watch what I am going to do."
Ra: (loudly) Dhruv, let's play something else. But before that we want to have some ice creams and refreshments. Chachu, Swara Aunty, Shriya, can you please stay here, till we both go and get them from the kitchen.
But, once they reached downstairs, Rahul led Dhruv towards their Daadaji's Private Bar near the dining area. Rahul sneaked inside and took out a bottle of vodka. Dhruv widened his eyes and clasped his mouth in awe.
Dh: (whispers cautiously) Are you sure, bhaiyya..?
Ra: (grins wickedly) Of course, yes..!
They went into the kitchen and took two huge glasses, filled them quarter with orange flavored cold soda and filled the remaining half with vodka. They took some ice creams for the three of them and chocolate cakes for all five of them.
They went back upstairs and handed over the two glasses to Swara and Sanskaar. They gave the one bowl of ice cream to Shriya and they also started eating their ice creams. The boys covertly watched Swara and Sanskaar sipping the juice occasionally. After finishing their drinks, they also had their chocolate cakes.
Ra: (announces happily)Ok..Now let us play, hide and seek..!
Sa: Hide and seek..? No way..What a silly game..!
Dh:(angrily growls widening his eyes ) Grrr... Chaaachu..!!
Ra: Swara Aunty..Please tell him to play with us..
Sw: (apologetically)No..Even I can't play..I am so sorry boys..You people play..
Dh: Ok then..Shriya..You both go and hide somewhere out of this room. I will come and try to catch you after counting till fifty..
Sh: (jumps up and down)Yayyy..It's so exciting..
Before, Sanskaar and Swara could say anything, Rahul and Shriya ran out of the room. Swara was feeling a strange sort of excitement. Even Sanskaar was feeling a little light headed. By that time, Dhruv turned towards the wall, counted till fifty and he too ran out of the room leaving both of them together.
Swara turned towards Sanskaar and smiled uncertainly.
Sw: It's really exciting to be a kid, right..?
Sa: (smiles dreamily)Yeah..Kids are so lucky. They only have small worries. "Like exams, studies and all". But as we get bigger, our tensions also increase.
Swara looked away thoughtfully and laughed softly. But suddenly, she started laughing again and again without able to stop. Sanskaar felt amused and he too laughed with her. After sometime he stopped laughing and just kept on staring at her.
Sa: Swara..
Sw: Hmm..(laughs again)
Sa: You look so pretty when you laugh..
Sw: (laughs again) Even I love it when you laugh, Sanskaar..(looks at him silently and then laughs)
Sanskaar put his arm around her neck and laughed with her happily. Then his face turned sad and he said suddenly.
Sa: I missed you Swara..(pouts like a child)
Swara's face fell and she too stopped laughing. She turned her gaze towards his child like face.
Sw: Awww..my poor baby..(pouts similarly)
She plucked his cheeks with both hands and pulled them outwards. Then she raised her lips and kissed the tip of his nose. Then she smiled naughtily and blurted out.
Sw: I too missed you, Sanskaar..
Swara was looking into his eyes with her lovely doe like eyes in a breath-taking way. Sanskaar raised his right hand and caressed her cheek softly and she closed her eyes momentarily feeling dazed.
Sw: (softly) Sanskaar...
Sa: Hmmm..
Sw: (curious voice like a child)Are you going to kiss me now..?
Sanskaar smiled serenely and blinked in an innocent way.
Sa: (laughs softly like a kid) Yes..!
Then he closed his eyes and proceeded forward. When his lips met hers, she drew a deep breath and her fingers clutched onto the bed sheet. Sanskaar kissed her lips with all his pent up feelings of seven years. Even though he had dated a hundred girls before her, she was his last and final girlfriend and his only lover. He just lost his habit of chasing skirts after she had left him. In that dizzy state, Swara felt like her soul was yearning for his kiss, for a long time. Deep inside, she knew, he was the only person, she had ever loved.
Sanskaar raised his left hand too and cupped her tiny face lovingly inside his palms. He then drank in her lips with so much love and passion. She felt her eyes moisten and tears streamed down her eyes. She embraced him with all her love and he was overwhelmed. He stopped kissing her and then hugged her back.
They sat like that on the bed for a few more minutes lost in the magic of their embrace. Suddenly, they heard voices of the children who were approaching the room.
Swara opened her eyes in a jiffy and reality struck her like a whip lash. She pulled herself back from the tight hug and blinked uncertainly. Sanskaar was looking at her with confusion, and he too regained his senses. He thought miserably, "Did I just kiss her..?"
Sa: (blurts out and looks down) Oh my God..! (runs his hand along his hair apprehensively)
Sanskaar and Swara arranged their positions in such a way that nothing particular had happened in the room. Swara wiped her tear stained face hurriedly.
Shriya came running inside first.
Sh: Mummmaaa...
Then they heard Rahul's voice.
Ra: Shriya..Stop..
Dh: Oh no..Shriya..
The boys also came running in after her. They all were panting hard. Shriya wanted to see her Mumma suddenly while playing and Rahul and Dhruv were trying hard to stop her from getting inside the room. But now, finally they were all inside the room and the boys looked at Swara and Sanskaar's faces. Both didn't seem happy at all and the boys looked at each other, feeling perplexed.
Swara grabbed Shriya and left the room, mumbling a vague "good night" to the boys. Sanskaar watched her go. He didn't know he felt good or bad after that kiss. Rahul and Dhruv confronted their Chachu and were about to shoot questions at him. But Sanskaar didn't look at them and left the room without a word.
Ra: Dhruv, I guess they fought again..
Dh: Oh nooo..! (hits his head with his palm) So, adding vodka to their drinks didn't work..?
Ra: I don't know, Dhruv..But I have a feeling that our mission is going to fail..
Dh:(patting Rahul's shoulder) Don't worry bhaiyya..Everything will be fine..
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End of PART 5
Hope you all enjoyed the update
Plzz share your views
Love
Naina😊

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

its very cute updae naina

the kids are too smart...

omg they mixed vodka

shaitan bachhe...but did for swasan

adorbs

shreya asusual very lovely

the way sanskaar loved her instanly was sooo sweet

how they laughed

and the passionate moment between swasan is

speechless

pored out his love for her

wich he was eager since 7years

how much special is sanskaar for swara

dont know what made her leave him

even though she loves him to the core

very curious for next

asusual u rocked dearie

love you naina

Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 9 years ago

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Naina finally u r back... Was waiting for your updates only... These kids are such devil they added vodka and gave SwaSan and their kiss was sooo magical... Soo waiting for SwaSan to talk and clear out their differences

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saira98

@saira98

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

This was amazing...i just love the two kids..they are awsm!!

And love to see u again Naina😳

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Interesting

Eager to know the complete story of swara

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Superbb OS Naina...
Loved it vry much...
loved ur writing skill... Its jst awsm...
the two kids r adorable...
SwaSan moments & their kiss... ❤️ 😳

thnx for d pm dear...
continue soon... 😊

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chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Very nice...was waiting for this a long a time...its very sweet...i luv rahul n dhruv and of course shriya...so sanskaar finally softening towards shriya