SAWSAN FF: My Foe to My soul (PART:-16(B). PAGE:-141) - Page 39

Originally posted by: jomenon

hey,

ur story is really nice...hmm... i was a silent reader till now...but somebody made me realise that being a chatterbox is much better than this silence... so now i want to say that ur concept is wow... pls do pm me the updates if possible.

Hey... Jo.. Nice to meet you... Thanks yaar for liking my story...

Yep being chatterbox... Is better... I hope you'll enjoy your chatting...

Once again thank you so much... For liking my story..

Sure will pm you...

waiting eagerly 4 ur nxt update...pls update ur nxt epi soon.,...

Hola... Girls..&..Boys... Here is my next update... Really.. Really sorry for the delay... Holiday lot of work... Family... get to gether... After that My mom visited me on Monday... She stayed with me the hole day... She is already scolding me for watching serial... What if she came to know that her daughter.. Writing a fanfic... she'll run her parade on me... So I simply logout from forum... Stop writing dialogues... Saved myself...from my moms parade... I love my mom... I dont want her to, waste her energy on me... So late update...:-D Thanks for your patience towards me... Once again a big fat Thanku from me for your loveable COMMENTS... B-) Hope you guys will enjoy this update tooo... Sweet... Hugs... From me... ;-)



PART:--10

I turned myself... to face her... opened my eyes to see... She is in sound sleep... Hugging pillow... close to her... I'm not as lucky as that pillow.. Her hair hiding her beautiful face... I moved myself.. to get closer to her... My fingers tracing her along her forehead... tug that hair strands behind her ear... Her Angelic face... It's seducing me.. Totally.. Her closed big doe eyes ... With long lash.. Parted lips... Little snoring.. I laughed by hearing it... Ah I missed this yesterday... My fingers travelling throughout her beautiful face... I caressing her.. Cheeks.. Her lips.. I placed a soft peck on her cheeks.. It disturbed her sleep.. She is whimpering.. I got up from there.. reached washroom for freshen up...
I stepped out of the washroom.. She is still sleeping.. I'm wiping my hair.. "Good Morning Mr.Maheswari" She wished me.. I'm seeing her through mirror... She is stretching her body... To remove laziness.. "Mr.Maheswari.. How do I call you" I lift my head to.. See her... "Hmmm.. How about BIG FOOT, Grunting Pig... Haan for that you may need a special permission from chachiji" I turned myself to face her... She throw pillow at me... it hit my face... "Stop teasing me. I'm asking seriously" I laughed... "Its tour wish just call me its enough for me".. She smiled wider... " Then let me think" with that she went inside the washroom...

As she stepped out of washroom... "Ahhh" its my mouth.. It's opened wide.. She is.. She is just wearing a towel around her body.. Water dripping hair.. Her skin with droplets.. is like dewdrops on a rose petals... Her fresh fragrance roming around me.. I'm totally spellbound... I can't blink my eyes.. She turn to reach wardrobe.. She ran inside the washroom as soon as she saw me... "What are you doing here" She shouted from there... "Ah.. hh.. Doing work" I struggling to speak... I unbutton my T.. I'm struggling to breath... "Why don't you go for jogging" she shouted again... "It's raining" I said... "Oh.. I thought you were out.. for jogging... Will you please leave the room.. I need to change" I left room.. For her..


"Swara what did you just did... You have to be little more caution" my mind warned me... I hit on my head.. I opened the door and peeped outside.. to confirm he is not there... I stepped out.. run to lock the door.. I saw my reflection in mirror.. "Oh.. he saw me like this.. how I'm going to face him.. he is right you are a kiddo" I talked to myself..
I dressed.. Im trying to tie dory.. He stopped my hands... I'm seeing him on mirror.. His intense eyes.. getting on my nerves.
His fingers tracing my ear.. neck.. my nape.. he put my hair on my right shoulder.. His fingers traced my back to get dory... I closed my eyes... I'm breathing heavily.. He tied the knot... "You are a bad girl" He whispered in my ears.. I opened my eyes.. Oh.. its a dream.. How... How.. Can I dream like that.. He is right I'm a bad girl... I went downstairs to help bhabhis..

Now I'm heading to our room.. with 2 cups of tea... I stopped myself at door... to get my courage to face him.. "Tea" I entered in.. He is sitting on bed... doing some paper work... He smiled at me... I smiled back... I avoid further.. eye contact.. I forwarded his tea to him.. and started..my walk towards sofa... "Where are you going" I stopped in midway.. "Hmmm... To sofa".. I said without turning back.. "You can sit with me... Infront of me.." before i could say anything... "Please" he said.. I have no chance.. So I sit Infront of him on a bed. I didn't dare to lift my face.. I was so engrossed in my tea... I'm acting actually.. "Have you decided" He asked me... I lift my head... I can't face his gaze.. I put my head down... "I asked you something.. Where were you.. Swara" He asked again... "Ah... Hmm.. Nothing.. What did you ask" I said without lifting my gaze.. "I asked you that have you decided.. How to call me.. First look at me".. I closed my eyes.. " Swara.." I heared his voice so close to me.. I opened my eyes... He is sitting Infront of me.. "Are you blushing.. it doesn't suits you.. Come on where is my little rowdy"He said scornfully... He caresses my cheeks... I'm dumbstruck.. His touch.. I'm feeling chill.. on my cheeks.. He is smiling at me.. Mischievously.. Ran away from me..
I wiped my cheeks.. and saw my hand.. It's a ink... "Mr.Maheswari this is not fair... I'm not going to leave you" with that I ran behind him... chased him.. all around the room.. Finally.. He fell on sofa... I hold his hands... I leaned on to him... and rubbed my face along with his... Cheeks.. In order to apply.. Ink on his face.. I released his hands.. Tapped my hands.. blowed my hair on my face... gave him a victorious smile... "That's my little rowdy" we both laughed... "Hrrr..hmmm... We didn't see anything" its Laksh bhais voice... We turned ourselves towards door... Everyone standing at the entrance...
"Did anyone feel like a interrupting bear... I'm feeling like that" its Adarsh bhai.. teased.. Us.. It's a worst moment for us.. He wiped his face with his kerchief.. Then only I realised.. Why they are laughing at us... "Anything important maa" he asked Maa.. "Here.. a surprise gift from us" maa gave him a package... "What is this" He asked them.. "Find it by yourself" Laksh bhai.. said.. He opened that package... He is stunned... for a moment... "What is it?" I'm so eager to know about the surprise... It might be some dinner coupon or lot of chocolates... No..no... It will be a dinner coupon in luxury hotel.. Oh I'm so excited... He gave that package to me... I'm totally disappointed.. It's a honeymoon trip to Venice... Italy... "Are you happy Swara".. Maa asked me..." He... He... He" I put a fake smile on my face... Hugged her "I'm so happy maa thank you" he is seeing me.. He is standing behind maa... He raised his eyebrows... I made a dead expression to him.. He laughed at me.. "Always be happy" Maa parted from hug and kissey forehead.. His brothers wishing him to have a memorable honeymoon... After few minutes everyone left..
"I'm not going with you... To Venice"He tried to say something.. "Don't say anything.. I'm not going with you that's all chapter closed" with that I left to kitchen...

After breakfast I'm feeling restless... I shouldn't have behave with him like that... I was little bit rude... He is upset.. even though he is not exposing it but I can sense it.. I need to clarify him.. about my fear.. I entered our room.. he is not there.. He may gone for work.. I went near window to get some fresh air... I saw him.. He is washing his car... I went down.. To have a word with him...


I'm upset with her.. I know it will be difficult for her.. but she use a polite tone... She is too rude... "You didn't go for office" ah her.. She wants me to stay away from her.. She standing next next to me.. I turned to face her... "You're too sincere Mrs.Maheswari today... Sunday.." I frown at her.. She bite her tongue "Sorry.. I forgot that today is Sunday... You wash your car" she asked me... "Yes.. Why your papa won't wash his car" I asked her.. "Nope... I'll wash his car.. I can help you too" I shake my head in no... "Please" she said with puppy eyes... "With this dress" I indicate her pure white anarkali... "Within two minutes.. I'll be back".. She ran to change her dress...

After few minutes she came back in full black.. Even black suits her well.. She tied her hair in bun... I gave her a sponge.. She dump that sponge in soap water... Started her work from behind... "It's not you.. It's flight" she is speaking quizzical.. "Seriously I took a resolution... After soo many flight accident.. That I won't travel in a flight for any reason..." It made me laughed... "I have traveled so many times nothing happened to me... I'm with you Swara why are you afriad..of." I try to clear her fear.. "What if someone hijacked or someone plant a bomb or what if that flight burst out in the middel of the ocean... What you'll do... Nothing you'll die with me" Her logics are funny... Before I say something.. "Please Mr.Maheswari don't force me" she said..she came near me.. "I won't force you for anything Swara" she stepped close to me... Looking me soo intensely... She caressed my cheeks... Softly.. "You are a sweetest husband in the world".. I was so melted in her touch. Then I noticed that naughty smile... I touched my cheeks... It's a paint " Tit for Tat" she ran away from me.. I run behind her.. Caught her behind the car... She leaned on car to and hide her face behind her palms.. escape from me.. I hold her wrist.. pull her hand off her face... I leaned on her... To get close to her face.. She closed her eyes tightly... Her face was so pure as.. Moon.. Even moon have faults.. She is so pure.. I don't want to spoil her angelic face... I withdrew myself from her...and taken a step backwards to give way for her... She opened her eyes one by one... "You didn't apply on my face" she confirmed it by rubbing her cheeks... "No I don't want to spoil your beautiful face" I blurted out... Sudden change in her expression... Embarrassment visible in her face... "Where did you get this paint" I'm wiping that paint to remove it.. "Paint... It's just a mixture of soap water and a dirt from silencer.." She is ... A infant.. "You're unbelievable Swara.. Everytime I try to believe that you are a grown... girl... But everytime you're proving me that I'm wrong... Who'll apply silencer dirt on face.." She pissed me.. "Hey... Chillax I tried it many times nothing happened to me... See my face" she came close to me to show her angelic face.. Something urges me to take her in my arms.. Close to my heart... Then and there.. I controlled it.. "Hold this" I gave her the hose pipe... I started to wash my face.. I sprinkled water on her face.. "Oh you" she sprayed water on me... I'm fully drenched.. I grabbed that hose from her.. Sprayed water on her... "Please Sanskaar.. Stop it"... My name she called me by my name... I'm hearing my name from her mouth... It's sounds rhythmically... Perfect... "What did you called me" I sprayed more water on her... "Sanskaar ji" I stopped spraying.. She smiled at me.. We both laughed together... I never thought that car wash will be more fun and romantic around her.. I'm so lucky to have you in my life.. "I love you Swara... I love you so much.. I don't know how I'm going expose my love to you.. It's growing day by day.. One day it'll burst out...for sure.. That day is no longer" I said to myself...


It's night.. I entered our room it was empty.. I find a note.. On mirror.. "I'm waiting for you in terrace... By cadbury" I smiled... I changed to night wear... And left the room to reach terrace... I entered in... I see him sitting on a bench.. He is smiling at me.. I sit next to him.. He gave me cadbury silk bubble.. I opened it.. start munching it.. "When we have to leave" I turned myself to face him.. "Where?" He asked me... "To Venice.. for honeymoon" He was shocked to hear from me.. "I didn't plan for any vacation this year... I got married... So this will be my summer vacation.. with you" His radiant expression cleared me that he is happy with my question... "We have one week".. He replyed with a smile...


Ahhh.. She is such a cute doll.. God made her to punish me.. She is my wife... I love her.. She is close to me... But I can't touch her.. What a life... Bit I love this life man... The way she is munching her chocolate... She is speaking something.. I can't concentrate on it... Im too engrossed in her.. admiring each and every bit of her antics.. Her single snap brought me back.. Is she really talking about honeymoon... Really I'm floating on cloud nine... " Mr.Maheswari "she was about to say something.. I interrupted her " Call me Sanskaar... It's really nice to hear..when you call me by my name" She is feeling shy.. That smile.. edge of her lips...its eating me alive.. "Sanskaarrr" she laughed aloud... There is no bound for her naughtiness... "Why Swara... If you're feeling fussy.. don't force yourself" I asked her... "Ah Sanskaar yes I'm fussy but I want to overcome my fear... Trust me I'm happy.. I'm not forcing myself" she never fails always impress me... My eyes noticed something... On her left edge of her lips.. It's a melt chocolate.. Clinging on her lips... I indicate that to her...


He indicated me about that chocolate... I was about to wipe that... He hold my hand by his.. I'm seeing him.. His eyes looking at my lips. His eyes... it's captivating me.. His right hand.. reached my lips.. He wiped that chocolate by his forefinger by tracing my bottom lips with a force... I parted my lips and let out my breath... I can't hold it any more... He is seeing his finger.. Carvingly.. He kept that finger on his mouth.. He bite that finger gently.. sucked that chocolate... He lift his eyes.. It attacked mine.. I suddenly turned to face forward.. Our breath is getting heavy.. I can hear his.. He can hear mine.. I just want to leave from there... I don't want any cozy moments in between us... I got up from the bench.. started my walk towards the gate... "Where are you going?" He asked me so romantically.. I gulped.. I have to find a reason to escape... "To make call... To maa" nice try Swara... You still have that talent... Lying... "It's 11:30 pm she'll be in deep sleeping..." Oh he got my lies.. "She called me before... I was busy then... I couldn't speak with her properly... I told her that I'll call her later... I totally forget about that... Just now came to my mind... She'll be waiting for my call" I didn't even try to face him I ran away from there to my room...


What you did... So impatient.. See you made her run away from you... I really don't have any idea... It happened out of my control..


I closed the door.. I leaned on the door... My heart is pumping like a piston... It's not coz of running... It's coz of what happened before... I went to my side and lied down on a bed... After 10 minutes I heared him... Im awake but didn't even give a hint about my fake sleep...

I know she is awake... I know she needs time... I'm giving it to her...




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Originally posted by: abi03

waiting eagerly 4 ur nxt update...pls update ur nxt epi soon.,...

Just now updated abi... Sorry yaar...

Awesome update 👏
Update soon
Thanks for the pm

diii
it was really nice
our patience has paid off
hats off to u
lv the frankness of swara to tell what she feels to sanskar.
and what to say about their teasings to each other...amazing
must say m impressed
sorry to cheat from your update but wanna say even moon has flaws but did udate was flawless... stole my heart...m falling: n luv with ur big foot...one day I will be a big threat to kiddo swara.
ur sis 😃

Wonderful update

Wow..Amazing update
I really loved it ..
Poor sanskaar...He can't even touch his wife..
Next part soon.. 🤗

Awesome update my friend

Loved it ...they r vry cute together...😳..plz upload nexg part soon