Ragini-Laksh FF (CH-5 Updated)

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Porkalai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

wow!superb update...
no tomatoes...
its so much better dan original swaragini...
nd thanks for pm...

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alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey thanku for the pm

Beautiful update

Loved it

Can't wait to see who the new entry will be

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mridulakrishnan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

wow ..awesome update dear...b/w thanks for the pm...&&& next part jaldi update karo...😉

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mika17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey just read both of your chapters

Love the concept of your story

Can't wait for the next part

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bhanu321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

CH-3

Laksh & Sanskaar brings unconsious Ragini to Maheshwari Mansion. All the family members are there, doctor checks Ragini & says- I have given her injection & she will be alright in 3-4hrs. Doctors goes. Sharmishta goes towards Ragini and was about to put her hands on Ragini's forhead when Dadi pulls her other hand & takes her outside. All were shocked, they close Ragini's door & go behind them.

Sharmishta- Maa, what are you doing?

Dadi- Dont you dare touch my Laddo, Sharmishta. You, your daughter & this Maheshwari family is responsible for my Laddo's condition.Dont know at what time we decided to join relations with this family.

Shekhar- Maa, what are you speaking? Why are you blaming Sharmishta, Swara and this family? You also did not trust Ragini after she reveled her truth. You were the one who kept her under your toes. From childhood uptil now you have always imposed your decision on Ragini. Even before finalising Ragini & Laksh relation you did not think of asking Ragini whether she is ready for it or not. Maa, you never asked her if she loves someone else? You never allowed her to take her own decision? And now you are blaming others.

Dadi was quiet, she did not have any words to say because she knew that each & every word which Shekhar spoke was true. She never allowed Ragini to take her own decisions. She always restricted her. She remembers how even after when swara exposed Laksh being a casonova infront of all she black mailed Ragini emotionally to go on with the engagement.She breakdown and says you are right Shekhar i have no right to blame others when i myself is at fault. I have never asked her whether she liked my decision or not, i just imposed my decisions on her. I am the main reason that today her life is destroyed. She cries hard.

There some where in a bunglow- A man was sitting (face is not yet reveled), two ladies are there one is 40-45 yrs old & another is around 60yrs.

Lady1- How can you do this with her, how can you destroy Ragini's life for your revenge? Dont you know she is your...

Man- I am sorry mom. In my junoon to destroy that Shekhar Gadodia, i destroyed my own...

Lady1- Shut up, just shut your mouth & i will never forgive you for what you did to Ragini. Infact i cant forgive myself, i cant go infront of her and hug her once. I feel myself responsible for destroying her life. She cries.

Lady 2 (who was quiet till now) stands up and put her hand on the shoulder of lady1 and says control beta, everything will be fine.

Lady1- How Maa, how will be everything fine. She is in so much pain maa & i cant even go infront of her. My own son has destroyed her life. (She said pointing towards the man) I will never forgive him Maa, never. She leaves the room.

Man- Mom, atleast listen to me once, plz. He cries. I did not do it intentionally Nani, (he said turning to Lady 2) and how can i destroy her life, nani. He punches his fists on the wall.

Lady2- I know beta, you did not do anything intentionally. But you have hurt her alot. And she too leaves the room.

The man sees Ragini's pic and shouts "I am sorry Ragini, to destroy your life, plz forgive me." He cries hard.

In MM- Sharmishta tries to console Dadi and says no maa, you are not the only one who is responsible for Ragini's condition today. Infact, one & every person standing here is responsible for her condition. We saw her wrongdoing but did not tried to find out why she is doing all these. We did not tried to find that why a girl who can do anything for her sister changed so much in 24hrs that she tried to kill that sister. We did not tried to find why she wld marry a guy whom she does not love. Laksh's heart broke into pieces hearing this. We just believed the reasons which she gave for her wrong doings. We did not try to look for the truth in her eyes, Sharmishta continued. Just then they all hear Ragini's scream. They all run towards her room. Rigini was very much frighten & was sitting crossing her legs & head on it. Annapurna keeps her hand lovingly & says- Ragini, you are fine beta, see your Maa is here,your whole family is here beta. Ragini sees her & hugs her tightly. After sometime Ragini composes herself & breaks the hug. She sees Swara standing near the door. She gets up & go to Swara. There was a pin drop silence in the room when they heard a loud sound chattaaak. Ragini gave a tight slap to Swara. All were shocked. Actually they were not expecting this. There was tears forming in Swara's eyes. Sanskaar tried to move forward but Sujata hold his hands & stopped him. She said- Not now, this is a matter between two sisters & let themselves handel this. Its important that Swara & Ragini should confront each other now otherwise it will be late.

Ragini- How dare you to get me kidnapped Swara?

Swara- (with tears) No Ragini, I did not get you kidnapped. You have some misunderstanding.

Ragini- Oh really, Swara, i have a misunderstanding. You were the one who told me that you will throw me out of this house & will not let me enter in laksh life. And still i have the misunderstanding, right Swara. ( she said in scarism tone)

Sharmishta- Ragini you are wrong beta, Swara cannot do this. She is your sister beta.

Ragini- Oh right, how can i forget this she is so innocent,pure and a devi right Maa. After all she is your own daughter, right.

All were shocked by Ragini's words. But they all knew that her burst out is neccessary because she has been going through alot of pain in last three months.

Sharmishta had tears in her eyes. She says- No Ragini, i never diffrentiated between you & Swara. I loved both of you equally.

Ragini just gave a sad smile & said atleast be true to yourself Maa.

Swara- Enough Ragini, yes i kidnapped you, so what this is small in what you have done to me. You broke my marriage, you gave me drugs. you tried to kill me. Infront of all these a kinapping is nothing.

Ragini- ya right, i did all that but that were for your... she realised what she was going to say.

Swara- For my, for my what...

Ragini gives a sad smile and says nothing, you are right i should not have done all that i should have left it on you to handel (she says taunting) atleast my life would have been smooth. Ragini walks out of the conversation. All the family members leaves. Ragini takes out a pic. Its Jhanvi's pic. She says "I miss you, Maa". She hugs it and cries.

Precap- New entries...

Okay guys so how is CH-3????????

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Porkalai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

dis s small... bt anyway I luved it...
superb storyline...
dis s one I m always expecting from original swaragini...
u r tooo good...
nd thanks for pm...

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alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hey dat was a lovely update

I think Ragini's mum will be alive

Can't wait to see who the new entries will be

Thanku for the pm

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mridulakrishnan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

nice update dear...i loved it...but jadi next chpter update karona...pls..pls..pls..

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bhanu321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

CH-4

Downstairs in MM-

DP- Shekhar ji, what to do now. We all know that whatever Ragini did was only for our safety & happiness. For us she destroyed her own life. Now what about Ragini & Laksh rishta. I will leave this decision on you. Whatever will be your decision we will accept it. If you want to break this marriage you can.

Shekhar- DP ji the decision on this relation will be taken by Ragini. Only she will decide if she wants to be with Laksh or not. If she decides to go with us & divorce Laksh then i will support my daughter this time.

Dadi- Shekhar jey tu kya bol raha hai, tu abhi bhi mahri laddo ko inken pass chorna chahata hai, joh uski kadar bhi nahi karte (she says eyeing Laksh). Aur waise bhi tunne dekha na laddo ne pahele hi talaaq ke paper per singnature kar diye hai, toh phir usse inn logo ke pass chodne ka kya phayeda.

Swara- Dadi, What are you saying. Do you even know how much Laksh loves Ragini. And Ragini too loves him. He will keep Ragini happy.

Dadi- Tu mahre ko matt samjha chorri, aaj uski joh bhi halat hai na uski jimmedar tu bhi hai. Teri zindagi bacchane ke liye ussne apni zindagi barbaad kar li. Aur rahi baat Ragini ki toh tunne suna na woh Laksh sey nahi kissi aur se pyaar karti hai. Aur jeh Laksh jo aaj tak usse izzat nahi desaka, samman nahi de saka, uski kadar nahi kar saka woh pyaar kya dega.

Laksh was quiet and was trying best to stop his tears. He knew that in this marriage he never accepted Ragini, he has always taken her for granted. He was always running behind Swara. He always tried to keep her away from his life. Infact he was happy that she was kidnapped. But now in past 48 hrs things have changed drastically. He realised that he has fallen for Ragini & cant live without her. This song plays in back ground-

kab se usko dhundhta hu bheegi palko se yahan

ab na jane wo kaha hai thaa jo mera aashiya

kab se usko dhundhta hu bheegi palko se yahan

ab na jane wo kaha hai thaa jo mera aashiya

rabba mere mujhko bata haye di mujhe kyun tunne ye saza

ab saare bandhan tod ke yaado ko tanha chhod ke

main gam se rishta jod ke jau kahan...

Annapurna- Aisa mat kahiye Parvati ji, main maanti hoon Laksh se galtiyaan hui hai lekin usse ek mauka toh dijiye apni galti sudharne ka.

Swara- Haa dadi, badi maa sahi bol rahi hai, (She goes to Laksh) Aur Laksh tum chup- chap kuy ho, kucch bolte kuy nahi ki tum kitna pyaar karte ho meri bahen se.

Sanskaar- Haa, lucky tu kucch bolta kuy nahi.

Laksh- Abb tak saare phaisle main hi toh liye hai bhai, ab Ragini ko decide karna hai ki usse mere saath rahena hai ki nahi. Uska jo faisala honga, mujhe manjoor honga. He says with tears flowing from his eyes.

Swara- Lekin Laksh...

DP- Bass ab iss baare mein mujhe koi argument nahi chahiye. Iss rishtey ka phaisala sirf aur sirf Ragini hi taye karengi.Kucch dinno baad hum Ragini sey iss baare mein baat karenge.

Shekhar- You are right DP ji , Accha ab humme chalna chahiyen. And Dada, Dadi , Shekhar & Sharmishta leaves MM.

All the members also dispersed to there rooms. Laksh goes to his room and sees Ragini sleeping like a baby holding Janhvi's pic in her hands. He smiles seeing her and puts a blanket over her. He sits on the couch and eyes sleeping Ragini lovingly.

In Sanskaar's room- Swara was standing in her balcony and crying. Sanskaar comes to her & consoles her. Sab thik ho jaye gaa Swara dont cry. She hugs Sanskaar.

In Laksh's room- Laksh was just watching a innocent soul sleeping like a baby infront of him. Tears were in his eyes. He thinks "I have hurt you alot , but from now on i promise i will never let a drop of tear come in your eyes" Just then he sees Ragini waking up from his sleep. Ragini to sees him.

Ragini- Arrey, Laksh aap yahan.

Laksh- Haa,kuy bhul gayi yeh mera, i mean hamara kamra hai.

Ragini- smiles a little.

Laksh comes near her and says- Ragini, kuy na hum humare rishtey ki nayi shuruwat kare, he forwards his hands & says Kya hum dost ban sakte hai.

Ragini was surprised to see Laksh's new side and she shakes hand with a smile on her face.

Just then Pari enters and says- Laksh bhaiya, Ragini, Maa-Baba aap dono ko nicche bula rahe hai. She leaves but before leaving she gives a teasing smile to Laksh who was still holding Ragini's hand.

Laksh & Ragini come downstairs. All were sitting on sofa. Swara shifts a little making space for Ragini. But Ragini ignores her and sits besides Sujata. Swara feels bad.

Annapurna- Beta, humne tumhe yeh batane ke liye yahan bulaya hai ki hum sabko kal apne kuldevta ke mandir jaana hai.

Sujata- Kuldevta ke mandir lekin kuy jiji.

Annapurna- Maine mananat mangi thhi ki agaar Ragini sahi salamat ghar laut aayengi toh main apne pure parivaar ke saath unke darshan karne aaungi.

Sujata- yeh toh acchi baat hai jiji toh kab nikalna hai humme.

Annapurna- Kal subah 6 baje. Aur Laksh kal tum jaa kar apne sasural walo ko bhi le aana woh log bhi hamare saath chalenge.

After some time they have there dinner and dispersed to there rooms. In this time Ragini totally ignored Swara.

Swara thinks- Ek waqt thha Ragini jab dur ho kar bhi hum donno kitne karib thhe lekin aaj itne pass ho kar bhi kitne dur hai hum.

Ragini thinks- Kaash Swara, ek baar tumne yeh pata lagane ki koshish ki hoti ki hum tumahare saath woh sab kuy kiya, Kaash tumne hum par vishwaas kiya hota.

Swara- Jo galtiyaan hui woh ho gayi lekin kya ab Swara aur Ragini phir ek baar SwaRagini nahi ban sakti.

Thinking all this they both clashed with each other & jug from Swara's hand falls down. Sanskaar sees this and goes to help her when Laksh stops him & signals him to wait & watch.

As jug falled they both bend down to pick the glass. There eyes meet. They had tears in there eyes. Ragini gets up to go but just then see turns & hugs Swara tightly. Both cries.

Ragini- Humme maaf kar do Swara hum gusse mein kucch jada hi bol gaye, humne tum par haath bhi uttha diya. Hum jante hai tum hamare saath galat nahi kar sakti balki humne hi tumhare saath galat kiya hai.

Swara- Nahi Ragini, main jaanti hu woh sab tumne apni marzi se nahi kiya thha balki tumse karaya gaya thha.

Ragini gets shocked & breaks the hug. She asks her how she knew. She tells her abt the CD. She hugs Swara again and says- Hum nahi jaante Swara woh kaun thha,lekin hum hamesha iss darr mein rahte thhe ki kahin hum apne Maa- Baba aur bahen ko kho na de. Aur isliye humne yeh sab kiya thha.

Swara says sab thik ho jayenga Ragini, ab hum phir se SwaRagini jo bann gaye hai.

Just then Laksh & Sanskaar comes and says- Wow, zara inn dono ka pyaar toh dekho. And they laugh.

They all go to there rooms & sleep.

Precap- All goes to mandir. Ragini sees a lady and gets shocked.

Okay guyz i promise new entries will be in Ch-5...

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