PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN - Page 103

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Posted: 9 years ago
arey yaar how much time r u gonna take in uploading the next part?? 😭😕😔
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊 will un res soonest I can, Nainu. 🤗



So sorry for the delay in un res, Nainu. what with some lingering health issues and then dealing with the resultant pile up of work and travel commitments, I've not been active on the forum lately. I will Un res this as soon as I can dear. In the meantime, when is Chapter 17 planned?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Nainu 🤗🤗

Part 16 was such an intense update, you had highlighted both Sanskaar and Swara's feelings in a very realistic manner. Swara has realized she loves him so deeply and intensely, but he is wary and hurt by her past mistrust of him and the way she had hurt him so deeply.

I loved that realization on Swara's part---that Sanskaar was being very brusque and abrupt with her, since he was trying to hide his pain and anguish behind a mask of anger. His resolve of steeling his heart against her was obviously not working, her concern and warmth for him, her tender love for him was thawing the frozen barriers he had erected around his heart. I loved the way Swara felt, that previously, whenever Sanskaar showed his intense and deep love for her, she only gave him pain. So now, when Sanskaar was getting angry with her, she needed to not lose hope, and shower him with her genuine love and care, so that he could come to understand and trust her again.

The sequence with Swara feeling conscious about the revealing nightgowns which Ragini had gifted her was superbly funny! 😆 Sanskaar was completely dumb struck by the enchanting vision of his newly wed bride looking all delectable and seductive, huh? 😳 And such a caring hubby---he got her some casual night wear in which she would get more comfortable. Though of course I guess, after they move forward in their marriage, he would want her to wear those nightgowns after all. ☺️

That whole sequence of their irresistible pull towards each other, that spine tingling connect and attraction they are facing, was lovely to read about. 😳
They are soulmates after all, always destined to be together. Their passionate twin souls are pulling them together, no matter how many temporary misunderstandings might be clouding their happiness at present. 😉

The lovemaking scene in the end was romantic and passionate. 😳 ☺️ But I somehow get the feeling it was all Swara's dream? I guess Sanskaar, though he obviously adores Swara and is tremendously attracted to her, wasn't yet ready to fully forget the recent past. He had been hurt so badly by her harsh words, I guess he still isn't sure whether she truly loves him or not, to the same extent as he loves her.

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly. 😊

Loads of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part. ... at last mu got cleared between swasan 😃 update next part soon. ... 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
update... update... update... Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsm waiting for update pls post soon.. thanks for pm.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Do you have any idea 😡
😡 when will you update my favourite story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Naina update!! Update update update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please post your next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nainaaa
I am hell angry with u
when will u post?
or will never post ?
at least tell this thing only...

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