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Ahem Ahem.. Well, many of my friends have started writing SwaSan FFs so I thought to give it a try as well! 😃 Ab jitna bhi bakwas ho.. please ek baar padh lena.😉 The starting episodes would be short since I am not fond of typing.. but will try to make it longer than the last one.. 😆 And yaa.. I am not a proffesional writer.. And to be honest, I used to think that writing is not my cup of tea.. But ab jab start kar diya hai.. Toh u guys please read it1
Part 1
The house is burn. It is on fire! Flames are rising from each side. The house is breaking because of the rising flames. The fire was all around her. She was in that house. "Hold on Naina!" He shouted, trying to get inside. "No! You will not come inside. It's risky!" "No I am not going to leave you to die.I can't see my love die in front of my eyes. I don't have that much courage!" Saying so, he tried to come inside. But alas.. a burning pillar fell on him and he was burnt to ashes in seconds. "Aryan!"
Shouting so.. Swara Gadodia woke up in the night at her room in her grand house - The Gadodia Mansion. Again Swara saw this dream. This bad dream of Naina.. her lookalike or maybe she herself! and Aryan! She didn't know who this Aryan was and why was he calling her Naina. Swara got up from her bed feeling restless and went to her sister Ragini's room.
"Ragini.. Ragini.. You know I saw that dream again!" "Ohh god Swara! I really don't understand who this Aryan is and why do you keep getting his dreams. And that also you have different name in your own dream! I think it's high time now. We should tell about this to Ma, Baba or Nani Ma. No arguments now Swara! I can't see you so restless. We should surely talk to her." "OK fine. But now I will sleep here only!" Saying so.. she sat on the bed and pulled Ragini towards her into an embrace. The sisters lay down and slept.
The sun rose soon and the Maheshwari mansion was woken by a woman in her 50s' melodious voice singing bhajan. She was Annapurna Maheshwari. AP after finishing with a morning aarti went to her room where DurgaPrasad, her husband and decision maker was getting ready. She smiled at him and asked him to come soon for breakfast. Then she was going to her son's room to see if he has woken but met halfway with a woman a few years younger than her who was continuously ranting something. "What happened Sujata?" "Nothing jiji.. I was just going to see if Sanskar's ready." "Ohh!!" AP smiled. "Is devarji ready?" "Yes jiji" "Okay.. you go and check on Sanskar. I'll wake up Laksh!" Saying so, she headed towards her son Laksh's room.
"Sanskar! Are you ready? It's going to be breakfast time soon." Shouted Sujata knocking Sanskar's door. "Good Morning Mom!" Sanskar said opening the door and giving her a peck on her cheek. Sanskar was wearing a dark blue colored blazer along with jeans and shoes. He was ready for his office. He came out of the room and descended the stairs to the dining table. "Good Morning Adarsh bhai, Pari Bhabhi and Chotti!". "Bhai.. my name is Uttara" she fumed! Sanskar chuckled. "Good Morning Bhai!" A voice spoke up from behind. "Good Morning Lucky!" Sanskar replied to Laksh. Then soon everyone joined the table. The whole family sat and had breakfast together. Alk the men of the house including Sanskar and Laksh left for the office. DP-RP in one car, Laksh-Adarsh in one and Sanskar in his own car. All of them were ready for the upcoming challenges.
Precap:On the busy streets of Kolkata, Sanskar noticed that some people had crowded around a spot. There was blood at the site and he could hear a girl shouting for help!
Some points to be noted:
->Swara and Ragini both are daughters of Sharmishta and both are half Bengali.. it's just that Ragini is more influenced by Shekhar's culture and Swara by Sharmishta.
->In my story, both Maheshwari and Gadodia family are equally rich.
->You would find the first paragraph a bit similar to the story of Maithili and Abhayendra of PKYEK but I assure you that it's completely different and there's no vampire in my story! grin emoticon
->Umm.. I don't remember any more important points. If you have doubts, ask me! And please give comments, compliments and criticisms both are accepted whole heartedly! tongue emoticon
And ya.. this is my first ever FF. I don't write as good as you guys do but hope you'll like it!
-> And one very important point! You can throw joota-chappals and rotten tomatoes.. but no eggs please😲.. I am pure vegetarian! 😛
Lots Of Love,
Saumya
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