The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice update.. 😊

Thanks Sneha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

Wow Bubble, such a beautiful chapter..🤗

The way you explained the moments between Shomi and Ragini was outstanding..Loved the way Sharmishta helped Ragini out of her guilty feelings.

And loved the way you briefly explained what all happened at Maheshwari house in the meantime too..But I have a question, does Lakshya miss Ragini, you didn't mention it.😳

Ragini is is trying her level best to set things right, and I appreciate her for that..👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Wow Bubble, such a beautiful chapter..🤗

The way you explained the moments between Shomi and Ragini was outstanding..Loved the way Sharmishta helped Ragini out of her guilty feelings.

And loved the way you briefly explained what all happened at Maheshwari house in the meantime too..But I have a question, does Lakshya miss Ragini, you didn't mention it.😳

Ragini is is trying her level best to set things right, and I appreciate her for that..👏

The way I see it, Naina, Shomi was just waiting for a chance to parent and guide Ragini properly... but never got a chance because of the circumstances.

Does Lakshya miss Ragini? Hmm 🤔 - let's just put it this way... he was pretty happy the first day, and little less happy the next day... 😆 he doesn't think yet in terms of missing her 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

This redemption of Ragini is soo much more better than what we are witnessing in the show!
The SwaSan and RagLak tracks are going so well.
Totally positive and a good romance with redemption track!
Like it loads<3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

loved ur update..
m really liking ragini's character n once again the emotions n the way u portraying them is commendable !!
looking forward for ur next update :))
tc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
This redemption of Ragini is soo much more better than what we are witnessing in the show!
The SwaSan and RagLak tracks are going so well.
Totally positive and a good romance with redemption track!
Like it loads<3

Thanks so much!

I did want to write a positive story, so I'm happy you are liking it 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: Shikha022
loved ur update..
m really liking ragini's character n once again the emotions n the way u portraying them is commendable !!
looking forward for ur next update :))
tc

Thanks a lot, Shikha! I'm happy you're liking this 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: alisha17
Awesome update

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#869

Hello Soap Bubble ! (hope that's ok)

I have read this entire story in 1 day (catching it between flights, in 3 different airport stops today) and I am blown away by the sheer mastery with which you have penned this completely different take on Swaragini.⭐️ I had been curious about this story, since the title was nice but frankly had avoided it because of the +16 tag (..something I usually do!). But once I started it, there was no looking back, because it wont let you !

I know its extremely late in the day, but I have to say that the entire approach to the story, the positivity, the faith, the courage and the sheer emotional maturity of the characters is outstanding!⭐️ That you could look outside the box and pen out such a different, deeply satisfying story is wonderful and you deserve all the kudos for doing it and staying the course and keeping us hooked in even after 43 chapters!

The star ot the cast is of course Lakshya, someone who I wish our serial had emulated..what a lovely evolution it would have been. A fantastic "Taming of the Shrew" but so brilliantly original on its own merit. 👏Lakshya's Petruchio is outstandingly patient, selfless and intelligent. And am loving it that the last part showed us a Lakshya who is beginning to feel the absence of his Ragini..because this Lakshya does deserve to be loved but also to live the sublime experience of loving back...

Swasan of course, continue to hold attention..their history, chemistry and emotional connect are outstanding as only Swasan's can be.😳 Loving the slow unfurling of Swara's emotions and the continued but ardent patience of Sanskaar.

I am glad you have pinned the blame of Ragini's evil on the true nourishes of the posion - Dadi. She so deserves to be punished big time 😡

Wish I had started reading this, after it had ended, so I'd have got it all in 1 go - know am being greedy big time! Do keep it coming, as often as you can, cant wait to read it !😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: piccola1
Hello Soap Bubble ! (hope that's ok)

I have read this entire story in 1 day (catching it between flights, in 3 different airport stops today) and I am blown away by the sheer mastery with which you have penned this completely different take on Swaragini.⭐️ I had been curious about this story, since the title was nice but frankly had avoided it because of the +16 tag (..something I usually do!). But once I started it, there was no looking back, because it wont let you !

I know its extremely late in the day, but I have to say that the entire approach to the story, the positivity, the faith, the courage and the sheer emotional maturity of the characters is outstanding!⭐️ That you could look outside the box and pen out such a different, deeply satisfying story is wonderful and you deserve all the kudos for doing it and staying the course and keeping us hooked in even after 43 chapters!

The star ot the cast is of course Lakshya, someone who I wish our serial had emulated..what a lovely evolution it would have been. A fantastic "Taming of the Shrew" but so brilliantly original on its own merit. 👏Lakshya's Petruchio is outstandingly patient, selfless and intelligent. And am loving it that the last part showed us a Lakshya who is beginning to feel the absence of his Ragini..because this Lakshya does deserve to be loved but also to live the sublime experience of loving back...

Swasan of course, continue to hold attention..their history, chemistry and emotional connect are outstanding as only Swasan's can be.😳 Loving the slow unfurling of Swara's emotions and the continued but ardent patience of Sanskaar.

I am glad you have pinned the blame of Ragini's evil on the true nourishes of the posion - Dadi. She so deserves to be punished big time 😡

Wish I had started reading this, after it had ended, so I'd have got it all in 1 go - know am being greedy big time! Do keep it coming, as often as you can, cant wait to read it !😃

Hi Piccola!

Thank you so so much for your wonderful response - I'm so happy and flattered you found it engaging in one go... it is a bit long though and I have a little more to go in my planned story arc *sheepish*

I love Swasan but I also found Ragya intriguing with lots of possibilities - which was what prompted me to start this. There is a skeletal Taming of the Shrew in here, isn't there?!! 😲 I hadn't thought of that 😆😆

About Lakshya, you say

because this Lakshya does deserve to be loved but also to live the sublime experience of loving back...

This is so acute of you - I feel that way too and I wanted to see if that could be brought about.

Thanks again for your kind words... 🤗

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