SwaSan FF-Tera Mujhse Pehle Ka Nata Koi (Note on Pg3)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue
Sw-Agar bhagwan ne chaha toh hum phirse milenge aur hamari yeh prem kahani poora karenge
She breathed heavily as she was stabbed by the enemy's soldier.
San-Hum dono kabhi alag nahi ho sakte, hum phirse milenge aur phirse pyaar karenge
He also breath heavily because of the wounds he had got during the fight.
SwaSan- YEH VAADA RAHA, MERA TUMSE, HAMESHA KE LIYE!!!
With this they breath their last while their hands fell on each others' as if promising to each other. And as Sanskaar said...

After 200 years
St. Xavier's college
Sw-Sanskaar tumhari himmat kaise Hui yeh karne ki
The whole corridor echoed with her voice. The besties of the college Swara and Sanskaar were fighting today!!!!!! Everyone was looking at them with a shocked expression
San-Arre Maine kya kiya, bass tumhari thodi si ice cream khaali usme itna gussa Shona
Sw-Tumhe pata haina ki mujhe ice cream se kitna pyaar hai!!!!!!!!!
San- Thik hai baba chalo main tumhe doosri dila doonga khush????
Sw-Chalo yeh Hui na meri bestie waali baat. Mujhe woh choco chips chahiye
San- Tumhe Jo chahiye so le Lena, ab chalo meri maa.
And they both walked away, unknown of their past.

So guyz this was the prologue. Should I Continue?????


Part 1-Pg2
Part 2-Pg2
Part 3- Pg3
Part 4- Pg3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this is very interesting!!!
Liked it
Plzz do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept
you should definitely continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting nice...pichiley janam wali story...nice nice...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb superb.. loved it a lot.. Please pm me whenever you update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the prologue. Pls continue and do pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow reincarnation concept is my fav...plzz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow amazing concept
Plz do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
Ragini and Laksh were sitting in the canteen waiting for Swara and Sanskaar.
Rag-Main toh kal shock hi ho gayi thi. Jaise Shona aur Sanky lad rahe the, wo dost kam dushman lag rahe the.
Lak-Sahi mein Ragu. Par ladai bhi toh dosto ke beech mein hi hota hai. Yeh lo aa Gaye woh dono.
Swara and Sanskaar came, Swara licking her favourite chocolate flavoured ice cream.
Rag- Aa Gaye tum dono?!!!!
Lak-Haan madam, aaj toh tum dono ke beech Mahabharat shuru ho gayi thi.
SwaSan sat on the chairs.
San- Arre hum dono lad thodi rahe the.
Swara looked at Sanskaar and smiled.
San- Shona mere upar chilla rahi thi aur main chup-chaap sun raha tha. Accha hua udhar Ayesha nahi thi warna toh yeh mujhe maar hi daalti.
Swa(angrily)- Kya!!!! Main tumhare upar chilla rahi thi Haan???!!! Thik hai tum toh uss Ayesha se hi chipko. Bohot fikar ho rahi hai na tumhe uski.
She turned her head angrily.
San(side-hugging her)- Arre Shona maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai wo bass meri project partner hai aur tum toh meri best friend ho na Shona.
Swa- Thik hai. Par ab usska naam tum mere saamne nahi loge!!
San- Thik hai. Jaisa tum kaho Shehzaa...
Sanskaar stopped there. Was he going to call her shehzaadi? What had happened to him? Swara had not heard it as she was busy chatting with Ragini & Laksh. He looked at Shona. She looked so familiar to him. That smile, that way of talking, that habit of playing with her hair, that cute dimple of hers, that I-know-it-all wala look. He was unable to understand all these things. Why did he feel that he had known Swara from a very long time. He held his head in irritation. Just then Swara noticed him holding his head. She became concerned.
Swa- Arre Sanky kya hua, u alright?
San- Mujhe thoda ajeeb lag raha hai, main room mein ja raha hu. Bye guyz.
All- Bye Sanky.

Precap- Acharya Somendra coming to college...all about SwaSan's past
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Plz feel free to criticize

Love,
Anu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon. How their story is gng to start at present.

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