SwaSan FF-Tera Mujhse Pehle Ka Nata Koi (Note on Pg3) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
so they are best friends. . lovely update. . continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: harshsriti

so they are best friends. . lovely update. . continue soon



Yah...will definitely continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Part 2

Razia was breathing heavily.
Razia- Dekhiye Mirza. Bohot der ho chuki hai Hume ab chalna chahiye.
As she was about to go, he caught her wrist and came in front of her. Razia was blushing. He made her look up.
Mirza- Itne Dino baad yeh moka mila hai mohtarma. Isko haath se kaise jaane de.
Mirza started leaning towards her, his eyes closed. Razia blushed as she knew what was coming next. She also closed her eyes. As they were about to kiss, Sanskaar got up with a start. He was sweating very badly. He couldn't see the faces as they were a little blur.
San- Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe. Yeh Razia aur Mirza kaun hai?
Just then he saw Razia come towards him and ask
Swa- Kya hua Mirza?
San(unknowingly)- Razia!
Swa- Razia? Arre main Swara. Tumhe kya ho gaya hai Sanskaar?
He couldn't control himself and hugged her very tightly. Swara was shocked. She consoled him.
Swa- Kuch nahi hua Sanskaar. Main yahin hu. Tumhare paas, tumhare saath. Chalo college chalte hai, warna late ho jaayega. Aur phir uske baad hum room mein wapas aa jayenge
San- OK. Main ek minute clothes basal ke aata hun.
Swa- Thik hai
Swara helped Sanskaar to get up and they both went to college.

College
Professor- Jaisa ki you all know, Aaj hamare college mein Acharya Somendra aane waale hai. Won bohot hi gyaani hai aur aap sab unki baatein acche we suniyega aur agar koi question ho toh bejhijhak puchna.
Acharya comes to college. He gives lecture. Everyone is inspired by his talks.
Pro- Chalo ab sab inka aashirvaad lo.
Everyone takes his blessings. At last SwaSan come. They both bend together to take blessings. As they both touch his feet, together, Acharya becomes shocked.
Acharya(mono)- Yeh sambhav nahi hai. Razia aur Mirza? Nahi nahi.
Swa- Professor, Sanskaar ki tabiyat think nahi hai toh main ise room mein leke jaa rahi hun.
Pro- Thik hai Swara.
Swara smiles at Sanskaar and Sanskaar also smiles looking at her. She helps him to go to his room. Acharya keeps looking at them until they are out of sight. The way they care for each other, the known smiles, the way they talk, all these things revolved in Acharya Somendra's mind. Then at last, he understood everything. Razia and Mirza were reincarnated as Swara and Sanskaar, respectively. He smiled and thought that at last his search has come to an end. Now he had to make SwaSan realize that they were AlZia.

Precap- Acharya telling all this to the students and seeking their help to make SwaSan remember their past.

Plz feel free to criticize.
Love,
Anu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
wow nice update...eager to know how swasan will remember their past life ...cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Part 3
The next day, Swara and Sanskaar both had not come to college because Sanskaar was a little ill and Swara was with Sanskaar, to take care of him. They had taken permission from the professor. That day also, Acharya Somendra came to their college.
Ach- Aap sab aashcharyachakit(surprised) honge ki main aaj bhi yaha upasthit (present) hu.
Everyone nodded in agreement.
Ach- Aap sab Swara aur Sanskaar KO toh jaante hi honge??
As soon as he asked this question, everyone started whispering among themselves. Then, one boy stood up from the students.
Boy- Arre un dono KO kaun nahi jaanta! Sabse acche dost hai wo dono.
Everyone said YES.
Ach- Accha. Aaj main aap sabko ek baat bata ne jaa raha hu. Mujhe aap sab ki madad bhi chahiye.
Everyone nodded. Then he told them, that how AlZia had died and had promised themselves that they would meet each other and fall in love again, how AlZia were reincarnated as SwaSan. Everyone was shocked. Laksh stood up.
Lak- Par Swara aur Sanskaar toh hamesha hamare saath hi rehte hai aur aaj take aisa kuch...but he was interrupted by Ragini.
Rag- Mujhe yaad hai. Kuch Dino pehle jab main aur Swara museum Gaye the, project ke liye info lene ke liye toh...
*Flashback*
Rag- Yeh museum kitna accha hai na Swara???
Swa- Haan yaar. Bohot sundar hai.
Suddenly, they came across a picture of Razia Sultan and Malik Altunia.
Rag(pointing out to the pic)- Inke baare mein toh humne pada tha. Yeh Razia Sultan hai, Delhi Sultanate ki Sultana aur yeh hai Malik...
But Swara interrupted her and started speaking, looking at the picture, without blinking.
Swa- Mirza. Yeah hai Mirza Altunia. Yeh Razia ke pati aur premi the. Dono ek doosre se bohot pyaar karte the. Mirza me Razia KO bohot saari mushkilo se bhachaya tha. Razia raajgharane (royal family) ki thi aur Mirza ek aam aadmi par jab yeh dono mile, toh inki dosti pyaar mein jald hi badal gayi aur baad mein unhone shaadi bhi kar li.
She was still lost in looking at the painting as if it had cast a spell on her.
Rag- Arre Swara mujhe toh yeh sab pata hi nahi tha aur yeh to hamare textbook mein bhi nahi likha. Tum toh kaafi extra knowledge rakhti ho !
But Swara was lost in the picture, as if she was there in the painting. Ragini shook Swara out of her dreamland.
Rag- Swara! Swara! Kya hua? Chale????!!!
Swa- Huh... Haan...Kya...Arre haan Chalo Ragini.
Ragini thought something is wrong but let it go.
Rag- Chalo.
While going, Swara glanced at the picture last time.
*Flashback ends*
Everyone is surprised with all these things.
Rag- Aur tumhe yaad hai Laksh, USS din Sanskaar Swara ko shehzaadi kar ke bulane waala tha?
Lak- Oh Haan. Aur tabse uski tabiyat bhi thodi thik nahi thi.
Ach- Ab toh yakin KO gaya na aap sabko?
Everyone- Par ham sabko Karna kya hai?
Ach- Pichle janam mein woh apni prem kahani puri nahi kar paye the toh woh iss janam mein zarur puri hogi. Aap sabko yeh prayas (try) Karna hai ki unhe apna pichla janam yaad aa jaaye aur woh dono phirse ek ho jaaye.
Everyone- Ham aisa hi karenge Acharya.
Acharya Somendra smiled. All last, these two souls could be one, after 200 years.
Precap- Mission SwaSan KO yaad dillao starts.

Plz feel free to criticize
Love,
Anu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
i read the the thread today. its awesome pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Part 4
The next day, everyone had planned to make SwaSan remember their past. Swara entered the college with Sanskaar, Laksh and Ragini.. When they entered, RagYa nodded to the students who nodded back in agreement.
Rag- Sanskaar ab tum kaise ho?
San- Main thik hu Ragini.
Lak- Waise tujhe hua kya tha??
Sanskaar went deep in thoughts about that dream of some Razia and Mirza. Swara shaked him, out of his dreamland.
Swa- Sanskaar, Laksh kuch puch raha hai. Tumhe hua kya tha?
San- Arre kuch nahi Shona bass headache.
Swa- OK
Rag- Ab chale warna free mein daat sunni padegi.
Lak- Students why r u late? R u all Sleeping Beautys?? Get in now, Laksh said mimicking the teacher.
All laughed and went to attend the class. After the class, RagYa dragged SwaSan to the canteen.
Swa- Arre Ragini kya hua?
San- Earthquake aa gaya kya?
Lak- Arre ham sabko canteen mein milna hai. Ab chalo chul chaap.
All the senior students were at the canteen, discussing about something.
Swa- Arre guys kya hua, him idhar kyun hai?
San- Exactly, baat kya hai?
Raj- Arre guys chill yaar, kitne sawal yaar. Humne decide kiya hai ki is baar annual day mein hum ek role play karenge.
Swati- Haan aur woh bhi kisi historical characters ke upar.
San- Par kiske upar?
Lak- Ab yeh toh Hume decide Karna padega!
Rahul- So everyone plz give your suggestions!
Rag- Jodha Akbar?
Lak- Woh toh bohot baar ho chuka hai yaar.
Tina- Laila Majnu?
Everyone- TINA!!!!!!
Tina- Kya!! Maine kya kaha.
Rag- Uff yeh ladki!
SwaSan were in deep thoughts. There was no expression on their face, but a serious look. Then suddenly, after a long time SwaSan spoke, together.
SwaSan- Razia aur Mirza
They both stared at each other, surprised. They themselves didnt know why did they take this name. They felt a connection with these names, an unknown bond that made them speak the same name. Everyone smiled seeing this. Everyone thought that their plan was working and the first step was completed.
Varun- Yeh toh accha hai. Isse pehle kabhi bhi in dono par koi play nahi hua.
This broke their moment of confusion and they both nodded in agreement.
Rag- Ab sawal yeh hai ki Razia aur Mirza kaun banega??
Precap- Not decided yet

Plz feel free to criticize
Love,
Anu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
NOTE:
Guys, m so sorry for not updating the story from such a long time. Actually m busy with mah studies. But I will try my best to update asap. Keep loving my story 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Superb idea..nice updates👍🏼

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