SwaSan os - traffic jam

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HEYA PEOPLE .. I M NIYATI😊
. it's my first attempt to write an OS .. Hope ull like it..
I

.it's a funny os.. Bit romantic .

TRAFFIC JAM

"Swara please don't be angry" swara turned her face hearing this from sanskar they hv been waiting In traffic jam since half an hour, she was angry as it was their first official date but that was being ruined.
"Sanskar MAHESHWARI u don't talk to me, ek to pure 2 mahine bd tumhe date pe le Jane ki yaad aai n this" she pointed to traffic jam n turned her face away from him.
"Swara isme kya fault h bebs mene thodi... " swara glared him , he kept finger on his lips. "OK I'll be shut now" there was silence in car for few seconds. Then car moved a bit n stopped beside a bike , on bike there was an old couple they were talking to each other n sharing cute romantic moments. Sanskar saw them n smiled n pinched swara "ouchhh!!! Kya h sanskar" he pointed to tht couple "date is not important for loving someone each others presence is what matters" he holded her hands. Swara saw him n smiled "sorry... " she was about to complete then saw a cycle clearing the traffic jam. She again got frustrated "dailouge Mar re ho, but me nai manaungi" n jerked his hand n turned away . sanskar smacked his head "yrrr kya krun. " then car moved a bit.
He saw another car beside them husband n wife were fighting over traffic jam. "Swara dekho shaafi ke bd b tum aise Hi karoge" he pointed to them. The word "shaadi" made her happy . she loved sanskar a lot n now his mentioned. Of word shaadi made her smile. "Sans..." She was about to talk wen saw that man's wife coming of car n walking n husband "jao jao " he moved car bt forward.
"Han tum b fr mujhe bich me chor dena" swara shouted. Sanskar really wanted to hit that husband , he ruined. His plan to make her happy.
"Swara yarr plzzz I m sorry I dint knew abt this jam even I m struck here na" he holded her shoulder. "Sanskar tum chup rho u spoiled my day" she angrily said. "Shona sorry na" sanskar made puppy face.
"Hmari date ka kya" she said being sad.
"Bus itni si BAAT wait" sanskar moved to back seat frm front seat n stumped down badly "aaa... " he cried. Swara 😆 "carefully don't break ur parts" she turned back to see Him rolling on back seat to get up. "Stop laughing , hath do yrrr" swara passed her hand to him. "Thoda age aao" swara moved forward , sanskar pulled her to her back seat. She was on him , his eyes stopped at her angelic lips."this is not fair mujhe b gira diya" she saw him with fake anger. He was lost in her. He touched her soft lips ,brushed his hands through her hairs. Swara melted with his touch. "Swara u r my life, I love you" swara hugged him tight , world paused fr them at the very moment. Sanskar looked at her "I want a kiss. " he said n approached to her lips. She closed her eyes but sound of horn from back made him realize they were car. "Choro sanskar tm b na car h ye. " n she was abt to go on front seat wen sanskar holded her waist n made her fall on him. "Kya Kr rhe ho sanskar , choro" horns were on from back. "Wait hn." He said to swara n opened the door n went out. "Kya problem h bhaiyo apki sb disturb kyu. Kr rhe ho itni mushkil se Mani h ho Jane do" swara widened her eyes. "Bhai road to chor do humne b apni vali k pass Hi Jana h " then sanskar realised Thy were in middle of the road blocking the traffic flow. 'Ohh' he signed n drove to corner of the road. "Now OK" he shouted. "All the best" all shouted n he winked to swara. "Sanskar no" she said. Sanskar approached her "no na" he came upto her "no sanskar" he placed his lips on hers was in passionate kiss. After a long minutes of protest she flew with him. Their first kiss.
Swara made her both of them were heavily breathing. "I love u swara " sanskar hugged her "love u to sanskar " she hugged him back.

Their love completed in traffic jam.

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A/N - OK I M SOOEY I KNOW IT WAS ALL SHIT BUT WANTED TO WRITE IT SO DID.
PLEASE REVIEW IT WITH CRITICISM.

LOVE.
NIYATI🤗
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Sparkler8 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Goodness Niyati!! You have done an amazing attempt to get over the upsetting track on the show.

This is awesome.. Backseat romance in the middle of the road.. Sanskaar in full on flirty mode.

Pity the others stuck in the jam..

Sorry for the late comment.i had to give you that last night FF update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute and amazing OS !!! 😳
Plzz do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res

unres aww cute first kiss in car ...romantic do write more ...

btw did u change ur username
Edited by Messi2 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its Cute OS..just like them.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aw cute os
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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what a cute OS niyati
loved their romantic date in traffic jam😆
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Cute and amazing OS !!! 😳

Plzz do write more

Thanks
A lot bebs ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arohijsp

Beautiful OS,
Love Swasan!

Thanksss for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Messi2

res

unres aww cute first kiss in car ...romantic do write more ...

btw did u change ur username

Thanksss I m glad u liked it
Yup I changed my username

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