Swaragini SS: Journey Towards the Final Destination (Chap. 5 Updated)

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Note- When I started watching Swaragini, Laksh and Ragini's marriage has already taken place. So, I have always seen Swara and Sanskar as a pair. So, this is solely to SwaSan. I am also a big fan of Tejwasi. That's why I am not butchering her character completely.. There are loads and loads of amazing writers who are writing on SwaSan but I wanted something different. I wanted Laksh and Ragini to realize their mistake and suffer the consequences. Thus, I am starting this. I have already wasted a lot of time of yours'. Now enjoy..







Prologue:

Swara kept gazing at the stars. But she was not seeing anything. She had a far look on her eyes. Northern wind was blowing, sending a chilly sensation through her. But she was not feeling any cold. In fact she feeling anything. She had a faraway look on her face.

Swara: Laksh aaj tumne jo kiya usske liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nehi karungi. Tumne mujhse meri sabse badi sacchai chin liya. Haam dono behno ke sath itna bada khel khela tumne. Mujhe pane ke chakkar mein tumne Ragini ussi raste mein aur dhakel diya jaha se main usse nikalna chahti thi. Yaha tak ki tumne Sanskar kobhi nehi choda. Mr. Laksh Maheshwari.. tum yehi chahte the na ki main tumhari zindegi mein wapas aa jaw? To phir thik hai. Waise hi hoga jaisa tum chahti ho likin iss baar yeh kahani main likhungi apni tarike se. Jo khel tumne suru kiya usse khatam main karungi. Aur Ragini khel khelne mein mahir hona tum! Aab tumhe main samjhaungi ki jab apno se dhokha milta hai to kaisa lagta hai. Just wait and watch.

She wiped her remaining tears and went down in the hall. Everyone was waiting for her there.

Sujata: Swara.. jo tum hamare bete ke lye kar rahi ho usske liye haam zindegi bhar tumhari abhari rahenge.

Swara: Nehi nehi. Please aisa mat kahiye. Sanskar mera bhi dost hai. Usske liye yeh to bohot choti bat hai. Uss bomb blast ke baad Sanskar aapna yadash bhi kho chukka hai. Aab usse yehi lagta hai meri aur Laksh ki shadi ho chuki hai.

Durga Prasad: Tumne aur Sanskar ne to apne rishte ko ek mouka bhi diya. Phir bhi Sanskar ke khatir tumhe Laksh ki patni banne ka acting karna pad raha hai. Aab haam tumhe toufe ke toud pad ek hi cheez de sakte hai.

When Swara looked at him enquiringly, Durga Prasad handed her a paper. When she looked at it she became speechless.

Durga Prasad: Tum apni musical career suru kar sakti hoom. Haam saab tumhare sath hai.

When Swara went to touch Durga Prasad's feet but he stopped her in midway.

Durga Prasad: Betiya paid nehi chute. Sirf ashirvad lete hai.

Swara smiled. Suddenly seeing Sanskar coming towards them Laksh came forward. He had an unnatural glee at his face.

Laksh: Swara bohot raat ho chuki hai. Chalo aab sone chalte hai.

Swara (in mind): Jitna khushiya manana hai aaj mana lo. Kiyu ki kalse mera waqt suru aur tumhara khatam. Iss kuch din ka ek ek paal agar maine tumhare jndegi mein jeher na ghola to mera naam bhi Swara Sanskar Maheshwari nehi.

Keep commenting. Or I will DC it or, I will send it to the particular group of people who commented..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index-

Prologue- Page 1

Chapter 1- Page 4

Chapter 2- Page 6

Chapter 3- Page 15

Chapter 4- Page 20

Chapter 5- Page 23
Edited by EshaalYousufzai - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing
this is wht I want ragini n luck to realise there mistake continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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If I want to put all I'm feeling in a short reply, I'd say...
I like your writing style. This plot has captured my attention. I would love if you continue this.😃
But...
Lakshya and Swara acting a couple is kind of hard to digest, I'm sure you have a way to bring up SwaSan, still it kind of irks me. 😕
But nevertheless I like this story, so do continue😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I would love to see something like this on the show too but tht wont happen.. Bt m sure m gonna enjoy reading it here 😃 update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What an awesome concept!
How refreshing to see Swara in a determined, revenge mode. 😈
Hope Laksh is put back in his place.
Can't wait to see how Swasan scenes are going to turn out.

Loooved DP-Swara bond. It's so cute. 😳
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

If I want to put all I'm feeling in a short reply, I'd say...

I like your writing style. This plot has captured my attention. I would love if you continue this.😃
But...
Lakshya and Swara acting a couple is kind of hard to digest, I'm sure you have a way to bring up SwaSan, still it kind of irks me. 😕
But nevertheless I like this story, so do continue😊


Dog will chew my hand before I show Swara and Lakshya as couple EVEN IN ACT..😕
Edited by EashaYousufzai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Idk hw to explain my happines in words
Am always a silent reader but nw i cant stop myself
to comment
Always want swara to be like this
Nw the story is getting really very interesting
Pls pls update soon
I want to c lux nd ragini to suffer nd realise mistakes
Pls cont as soon as possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai


Dog will chew my hand before I show Swara and Lakshya as couple EVEN IN ACT..😕

Okay, then I'm in👍🏼
I picked it up from what Durga Prasad was telling Swara. But if you're so sure then I'm glad.
Too irritated with Lakshya nowadays can't tolerate him, glad to see you sharing my opinion about that😳 Continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting story line
Love to see swara in revenge mode
I want to see both laksh and ragini suffer after realizing the mistakes they have done

Please continue soon

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