SWASAN FF:HER FEARS,HIS PROMISE(ch3 updated pg 4 23/11/15)

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nikhathfatima

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awesome update
I hope ever things goes will with swara n baby waiting for next part

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RIA ROY

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Posted: 9 years ago

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nice... and waiting for swasan part...

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Keep writing dear.

Whats there in swaras past

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Superb update..well penned 👍🏼
Pm me too..

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archana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

its interesting please continue soon

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Aayat23

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Originally posted by: iam-in-love
hiii Muktai... Wlcm to dis forum... I'm Silpa

This SwaSan story is just awsm... Nyc starting... Want to knw about Swaras past... Sanskar is so understanding...

PM me whn u update nxt part 😊

Hi silpa...thanks for liking this story and warm welcome...

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Excellent update!

The way you portrayed SwaSan's love for each other was great! Will SwaSan be in Kolkata in the next part?

Can't wait for the next update!

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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 3

HOW CAN SHE?

"I'm sorry...I know it is unfair, wrong to leave you like this...without telling any reason at this time when you need me most...But I don't have any option...If for once our friendship has meant something to you then you won't ask me anything neither you will try to find me...nor contact me...I need only one promise from you that you will take care of yourself...Don't make it harder on me by hurting yourself...
I don't know why this? How long it will? But I promise you one-thing that I will get back...get back to you, to everything...Till then take care of yourself ...

Aur ho sake to hamari dosti ko mat bhulna..."

He sat there numbly staring at his mobile screen...where her last message was...

"How? How could she do it...This was only thought coming to his mind...Was their friendship so weak that she left just like that.. Didn't she trusted him...trusted him enough to share her problems...

12 years, 12 dam years they were together...They were friends, best friends for God's sake...Then Why????

If she wanted nothing more than friendship...then wasn't he giving that only...He was being her buddy only ...when he had fallen hard for her...

He know she knew it...How couldn't she...The one who could see through his soul.. how could fail to read love for her in his eyes...Still she ignored...I accepted that...But this...How can she even think that I will accept this...How?"

Leaning his head on wall he closed his eyes to calm himself...He won't accept it...A tear tickled down his closed eyes...He made no move to wipe it...His heart cried..."Please come back... I miss you"

But she was nowhere to listen...It's been two years when she left abruptly...He still was waiting keeping her promise and his too...

He opened his eyes with determination ...He won't cry...He will wait...No matter how long it will...He will...

She won't break her promise ...He knows that...He will trust Her...

With this hope he looked at horizon it was time for sun to rise...He prayed to God to keep her happy and safe and to send her back...back in his life...

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