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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Mansi thts awsm.
I love ths swara nt tht serial wala dumb swara.
Imagine if in d serial we get ths seductres swara,varun to shy hai waisehi,poor sanskar!
Lovely os.mind sehi hua.

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

just loved it dear. '

the way described was so perfect. im blushing really hard.☺️

and what an embarrassing situation for both of the couples😆

and wow sanskaar's words at the last..

just love these two.

this can never happen on the show and so thanks for writing it here.😉

do write more dear.

Edited by rithika2015 - 9 years ago

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

OMG, that ending was hilarious, while everything else was really hot!

I have no doubt that Swara will be the one to make the first move in this type of situation, Sanskaar being quite reserved until he is fully convinced that Swara's convinctions are true, and she won't flatter in their love. DP was amazing yaar. I could totally see this happening, which is truly embarrassing! AP coming to save the day as usual!

Thanks for the lovely fic!!

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: manasie23
The end was supposed to be ahm ahm but then I decided to make it a little funny and embarassing

Its ok... U can write one more OS 😉

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hotness!! Thanks for the marvellous OS.

Just wondering, shouldn't there be a rating filter for this?

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Omg.. tht was hot. Cannot come out frm the visualisation. Hw wld DP nd AP control themselves 😉

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

awesome update
yeh maheshwaris bhi na dont hve manners
loved it

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

OMG Manuuu!!!!!

I am speechless- first toh I was madly 😳😳 - whoa! Scorching! And then the end- 🤣🤣 DP and AP out of all the people, OMG- can't stop- how dare you leave there and do this? 😡

Seriously though, made me 😳 and nicely written! x