SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love' - Page 11

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Viji thank you for this beautiful Diwali gift 🤗
How do you manage to write this stories? Hats off to your incredible imagination 👏
It was a treat to read this OS.
The initial nok-jhok between SwaSan was super duper cute, typical hubby-wife 😳
Aww DP, he is awesome. He truly loves Swara and consider her as his daughter 😳 Oh i loved Sanskar's dialogue here, about DP loving her more than him 😆
The description in the room was beautiful ❤️ And this line 'Jaan----you said you love fireworks, didn't you? It would be so much fun, wouldn't it, to have some in our room later?" ☺️ Got to see a completely different Sanskar here 😉
Thank you once again for this beautiful Diwali gift Viji. Happy Diwali to you and your family 🤗

Originally posted by: Cintila

res...(haven't read it yet 😳)

Will read your other OS too Viji...do do saath me..yaay !! My day is made 🤗

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

beautiful one shot.

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

hey thats not fair Swara said "Kitna sharmate ho sanskaar " activating my gutter mind...turns out they were talking about fireworks...Sanskaar was scared not sharmaoing!!

Phirse pink...I think Swara likes Sanskar in pink a little too much😆

Dayummm Swarako kitna tease karoge Sanskar☺️

I really like your way of describing things🤗

Do PM me when you write more

Happy Diwali

Originally posted by: rerose

Viji,this was just splendidly awesome dear,loved ur OS a lot👏👏👏

Originally posted by: vaishnavi77

Unres

Viji,🤗

Read the introduction, of course in the fashion called "Reading in between the lines" just replace lines with meanings, here.🤪

What a tease you are, Viji?!!😆

I was all flushed and in Swasan dreamland reading those lines.😃 I am sure, those lines did convey all that you intended to convey.

This was a much needed OS amidst all the drama happening in the show.

Oh! how i thoroughly missed Lakshya and Ragini , here😉😛

Coming to the piece- indeed what the title says it- Light in all sense of mood, atmosphere and brightness😊 except in emotions..'Ahem ahem' they speculated intensity in their own way😆

Yes, the intro was just bang on! Had all the elements that would ensure your face turning deeper shades.

*Oh! how i loved the subtle explanation of the expressions that slightly tended to float across DP's face. I could visualise that, honestly 😛 I seem to love the character of DP always helping in uniting our Swasan.

*Blood maybe thicker than water, all right, but there are certain ties of the soul, which go deeper than both -👏

*Ram Prasad's poker face. Sometimes, just the correct character reference can put u through a splits of laughter and this had me gripping with laughter surely.

*Of course AP and sujju's reaction. The ever ready saas with counter-dialogues was also dumbstruck! Maybe, thinking how her shameless bangalan bahu has turned her seedha saadha chora into a love stricken man! 😆

This entire scenario of the family member's reaction was just worth imagining. The beauty of the intro if not ,wasn't sufficient, this just raised the bars!

*I truly commend you for how beautifully and delicately the AP's dis- concern and disapproval was portrayed and even beautifully handled with DP's thoughts and the faith in her and in their relationship.

I feel these small things make your writings not just a figment of imagination but a figment of reality. I could as well as believe it happening in any household!

I must confess, If ever i have begun to see AP and DP in a new light of awe, it is all because of you and your elemental series -Fire and Space! ⭐️

*The irreplaceable vacuum that sometimes people leave behind. Memorable or not!

and Ragini's line on " Perhaps,after all, not breathing the same air Lakshya was, could cure her brain of the obsessive fumes which had clouded it for so long."- In total awe of this sensible Ragini.

*The easy camaraderie that DP and Swara share, has always left warm sensation within me. Also, the small yet a pivotal message of celebrating this Diwali in an eco-friendly manner was loud and clear!👏

*Coming to Swasan's bedroom scene, all my thoughts and words vapourise! I can never stop getting amused of these two. Are words really necessary to express this scene?

Thank you for making us imagine Swasan so close which, in the show for now, seems almost an impossibility!

*The lines on how Sanskaar wouldn't mind lighting a million diyas and that sweet revenge of getting the other person's favourite on your side.

*"just as she had filled the gaping holes in his soul, and he had healed the bruises on hers" - 👍🏼

*The realisation of fireworks dawning on our innocent and ever so naive , Swara!😆

Indeed, the lights of Diwali has cast its best weapon - Love! not just in the lives of our Swasan, but in MM by large, as Laughter, Harmony and Joy!

A great Diwali gift to us all, Viji. Thank you🤗

I am in debt for the dedication of this piece to me. Truly generous of you!! Trust me, if you write like this, how do we resist complimenting?

I feel like Swara tempted to burst Crackers!

Your writings are indeed firecrackers sending bright, multiple coloured fiery streamers shooting in our hearts and forming an image in our minds! ⭐️

As always, beautiful writing😃.Loved how you manage to bring out different shades of emotions with every writing!

Keep writing more and more and many more😊.

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

yes dear they completely deserve it❤️

and u have did full justice🥳...very well written

totally my pleasure😊

waiting for flirty and romantic pati

thanku for the wishes dear

wishing you and ur family too...a delightful and safe diwali

enjoy...