SwaSan FF : Dhokha Ya Daam Tha (Part 4 updated on Page 25) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-

adorable kids?

greattt...continue soon

thanks falaq😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

Sonal this is awesome bebs loved the prolouge to core.

Swara 33 😲 really hehee bt loved the way u portrayed her ... That's lovely
She hd 2 kids also .. But I m happy tht sanskar is her husband😆
Bt ragini 😕 wat was past ...

Anyway total hit wrk I assure I m gna stick to it do pm me plzzz

Love niyati

arey she is a well known doctor n has 2 kids toh she must be 30+ na😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

part 1

Omg this was soo sweet
Sanskar n swara's lovry dovey moments 😳
Loved it alot n swara n sanskar's kids hehehe like sanskar shaitann 😆 or u should say shy...
Dadi maa is awesome.. So his parents r in. Delhi😃

Omg ragini's daughter hd heart prblm to b treated by swara thats gng great .. Ved her husband I thought I was supposed to b laksh n


Laksh her brother 🤣
U changed whole concept
But its gng very nicely ...

Keep it up awesone job ...

Love
Niyati

thanks niyati😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini


RAGINI: SONAL, CHANGED OUR RELATION.. LAKSH
😆😉
Swara: so wat she is awesome writer 😆

Hehehe I love spaming bt tell me if any prblm regarding tht

aww thanks niyati🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ...sandy...

Sonu it was amazing update.. 👏😳

I loved the aarav and saloni... 😳

Ragya bro-sis... 😆 If ragini sees this, she will die of heart break... 😆

Nice yaar... 😳 Loved it!.. update soon.😳

thanks sandhya😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Hey frds...hi

How r u all

Sorry for the delay...was busy because of festivals but now m back

So , here is the next part

Dhokha Ya Daam Tha

Part 2

Singhania Mansion

(On the dining table)

Diya-mumma can i have that masala rice

Ragini-baby u can't eat that...doctor uncle said na ki healthy food is good for ur health so have this soup that rice is too spicy na

Diya-mumma plzz na...i don't want to have this tasteless soup

Ragini(in an angry tone)-khana hai toh khao warna jao yahaan se

Diya(she starts sobbing)-kuch time ki hi toh baat hai phir toh main hamesha ke liye chali jaungi(n she went from there)

Ved-diya stop plzz princess...ragini have u lost it...she is a kid a 5 year old kid she is ill n the worst part is she already know ki her life is in danger(he too went from there)

Ragini-m sorry baby m so sorry(n she starts crying)

AP-ragini chup ho jao tum(laksh came to her n comforted her)

Laksh-ragu stop crying

Ragini-my daughter said woh chali jayegi...its all my fault na main swara ke saath itna bura karti na meri bacchii ko uski saza milti

DP(he took a long breath m said)-humne kaha tha tum logo se ki aisi galti mat karna jiskey nishaan kabhi na mita sako

(AP laksh n ragini saw him with a apologising face)

DP-hamara dinner ho gya(he went from there)

(In diya's room...she was crying...ved came there)

Ved-hmm so my princess is angry

Diya(in a kiddish tone)-m not(ved sat on the bed n diya hugged him)papa next month is my b'day...my last b'day

Ved(she felt terrified n hugged her daughter tightly)-no princess that's not true...who told u

Diya-I know everything now I am a big girl na...i know m suffering from a heart disease n won't survive(she said with a pout)but why mumma on me

Ved-kuch nhi hoga...u don't worry papa hai na woh aapko kuch nhi honey dengey

Diya-pakka

Ved-pakka

(ved starts caressing her head)

(laksh came there with a glass of chocolate milkshake)

Laksh-hmm so dad n princess r busy...see nani ne aapke liye kya bejha hai

Diya-mamu...wow chocolate milkshake(laksh handed the class to diya n she gulped the milkshake quickly)yummy atleast better than that yucku soup...i hate it

Ved-okk now go to sleep(he kissed her forehead)

(Ved n Laksh sat in the garden)

Ved-m feeling so devastated aiasa lag rha hai jaisey sab haath se phisal raha hai

Laksh-ved don't worry everything will be all right n as Dr Sharma said nothing will happen to our diya...he said na he will talk to Dr Maheshwari...now she is our last hope

Ved-bhagwan kare woh maan jaaye

Laksh-m sure woh maan jayegi

Ved-hpoe so n she is our only hope

(Next Morning...In SwaSan's room)

(Swara opened her eyes n saw sanskaar's face...she smiled n kssed his forehead lightly)

Sanskaar-don't do this shona otherwise you'll complain kit um hospital jaane ke liye late ho gyi(n he held her from her waist)

Swara-sanskaar subah subah nhi...chodo na plzz

Sanskaar-achha(sanskaar rolled them over n now he was on top of her) who started it

Swara-sanskaar plzz let me go na

Sanskaar-ahaan no way(he smiled at her n his fingers were touching swara's lips swara closed her eyes...he was about to kiss her suddenly they heard a knock on the door...mumma papa...swara opened her eyes)

Swara(with a grinning look)-mr maheswari aur romance karna hai

Sanskaar(with a saracastic look)-nahi aaj ka ho gya

(they both smiled n swara opened the door n they got busy with their adorable kids)

(On breakfast table...swara was on phone)

Swara-ok Dr Khan...no no m not busy...sure will meet u in 2 hours...okk bye

(she joined the other family members)

Sanskaar-what happened

Swara-i don't know Dr khan said he want to discuss something

Sanskaar-anything important

Swara-seems s

Sanskaar-he said anything

Swara-yeah he said he has a frd in India

Sanskaar-frd

Swara-arey some doctor n he need my help

Sanskaar-swara in India

Swara-hmm

Aarav-mumma hum bhi India chaley

Saloni-good idea

Sanskaar-no we r not going to India

Swara-sanskaar aap thoda shaant ho jaiye...aarav m not going to India okk sweetie

Aarav-okk

Saloni-papa chaley

Swara-sanskaar can u plzz drop me too

Sanskaar-of course dear

Dadi-chaliye aap log jaiye sab

(they all went from there)

Dadi-bas kuch bura na ho...hey thakur jee sab aisey hi sahi rakhna pta nhi kyun ajeeb lag rha hai kuch bura mat honey dena

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Wow wow wow ..
Loved it alot Sonal
Truely incredible... Lovely😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Hey Sonal,
I am actually a very big fan of the Pak shows. Humsafar and Zindagi Gulzaar Hain are my 2 favorite TV shows of all time. So when I saw that you are making an FF on a Pak show, it immediately got me curious. The first part and the second part so far seem very promising. So Swara and Sanskaar are happily married with two adorable kids and Ragini and Laksh are brother and sisters?🤣
Dhamakedaar twist.😆 BTW I love shows with doctors. Big fan of DMG😃 So was very happy to hear that Swara is a cardiologist

Now I am really curious as to know what happened with SwaRagini and what is Laksh's connection with all of this. Waise this Ved guy seems decent so far. So Ragini's husband wasn't involved in any of it. Nice concept and very promising beginning Sonal. Looking forward to how it develops further. Keep those PMs coming.😊
Edited by misaki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Sonu thank you soon much for updating...
Now I am intigrued ki Ragini be Swara me saath kya bura KIA that...
And I know Swara diya me operation ke life maan jayegi...
Update soon... Hum sab KO air mat tadpana
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Sonal,i just loved this chapter a lot dear👏👏
It's seems really interesting,waiting for ur next update,very good job😊😊

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