Ragini TS 'PUNISHMENT' (Completed! All three parts on Page 1)

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Pheunli don't conclude so soon😊

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Acumen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor
Pheunli don't conclude so soon😊

Aww! But this is a three shots so it will have only 3 parts...i'll try to make my ongoing SS interesting. But won't be able to update soon as I was busy making Tejaswi's second AT. So update will get a little late.

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Acumen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Updated...hope u guys like it.

Thank u!

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ck1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

God phenuli this made me cry. Especially last paragraph.

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

👏👏👏

luveddd it

ending was so sady

ragini ban gi jogan

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Acumen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: neelzzz
👏👏👏
luveddd it

ending was so sady

ragini ban gi jogan

Thanks for the appreciation.😊

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Arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

The last part was so shocking nd heart breaking !but the title "Punishment" suits this 👍🏼

Absolutely Loved this !U r such a good writer..that last part says it all 😊
Btw Yeee got someone for Ragini !!Abhigini 😳Enjoyed their part,that was very emotional !

Do write more...Lots of best wishes for writhing more on Abhigini ❤️ nd Love for u !

P.S :: Poor Lakshya 🤣

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Gosh Pheunli this was so heart breaking! But I loved it and this really should be the punishment of Rags! You are a fab writer with such a beautiful imagination!
And Idk wether it's our sister feeling or what but even I wanted Rags' second love to be named Abhimanyu and when in your TS I read about this guy called Abhimanyu, I was like "you got me girl!" Love you Pheunli! ❤️
You should write more such beautiful stories. And you have a beautiful emotional side of you! Thanks for this one!

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Acumen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: iPriyalicious
Gosh Pheunli this was so heart breaking! But I loved it and this really should be the punishment of Rags! You are a fab writer with such a beautiful imagination!
And Idk wether it's our sister feeling or what but even I wanted Rags' second love to be named Abhimanyu and when in your TS I read about this guy called Abhimanyu, I was like "you got me girl!" Love you Pheunli! ❤️
You should write more such beautiful stories. And you have a beautiful emotional side of you! Thanks for this one!

🤗Aww! Thank u soo much Priya...I m soo happy u liked it.😊

Oh even you wanted Ragini's second love to be named Abhimanyu😃...It is definitely our sister feeling dear, moreover most of our choices match😉

Love you too dear!

And thanks once again for appreciating!😛

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Soni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

in words i can't tell ya how much i loved this TS ❤️
It's apt 👏 & something which i truely wish to see in show 😊
Everything fell out to be perfect 👏 be it blending of emotions,state of minds,saga of redemption & punishment ...
Punishment of her deeds is apt ...
Such a complex character Ragini is !
& you portrayed her very well [;Y:]
Loved to the core ❤️
PLS write more on Ragini

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