Swasan 2S FREE YOU NEVER updated pg.2 Completed

Hey guys this is my First attempt at anything swasan pls tell me how you find it.

Shattered. That's how I feel right now. Love broke my heart mercilessly for the second time now.

Laksh, my first love, loved me a lot probably still does too. But he could never trust me. Not only that he married my sister just out of spite and is happily sashaying it in front of me. No matter how much I tried I couldn't seem to numb the pain.

Then came the guy who is actually responsible for Laksh and mine failed relationship along with my own sister. He apologised for his mistakes and I did truly forgive him. Although he did spoil my life in his thirst for revenge he did stop it when he realised his anger was baseless and that it could never bring back the people he has already lost a long time ago. Also the fact that his revenge was ruining the life of a complete stranger like me sent him on a guilt trip. He did his best to help me uncover my sister's truth and have me reach the wedding venue in time for my marriage. But like they say everything happens just the way it is written in our destiny and we can't fight it. Laksh married my sister Ragini that day. It was end of one more chapter in my life and start of another one.

Had it ended with Laksh marrying Ragini maybe I wouldn't be in this situation now. But Ragini led to my parents getting separated. I still vividly remember how much we strived to bring them together only then to see them parting ways was difficult. I had to get them back together and in order to do so I have to get Ragini confess her lies.

I thought I could do it on my own. I tried God knows how hard I tried. But she had turned into a stone. If there is anybody who knows Ragini better than me or maybe as good as me it is him. He did turn her into this beast that she is now after all. Somehow he never thought that I could actually forgive him truly and mean it. He wanted a means for redeeming himself in his eyes and mine too. He wanted to help me gain my good reputation back in my family.

He convinced me to come to his house and be as close to Ragini as possible and keep a close eye on her. But the major question still remained how to get into their house and stay while still holding my honour and dignity intact. Somehow he came up with the solution this time too saying we get into a marriage of convenience. And I did surprising even myself.

It was our secret. The marriage was a fake one no vows, no promises. It was our first secret of many more to come. Living in their house was difficult. Their rules were very different from what I had to follow at my house. They insulted me for my backgrounds. While Ragini and Laksh laughed at it even joining them at times he was my support that stood by me.

While I was facing difficulties adjusting I still had a mission on my mind. Ragini saw to it that she made my life difficult at every opportunity she got. She even created various situations framing me and by default him. But the teacher in him was able to outwit her in her games.

Somehow she always had the inkling that our marriage was not normal. Then one fine day when she saw him sleeping on the couch it confirmed it for her. I was shocked and thought it was game over for me. But he gave me the strength to not give up. He did the damage control telling everyone he was sleeping on the couch since I was angry with him for wanting such low AC temperature.

I started looking at him with in a different light. He gave up so much for me his comfort, his life. He even took the blame for me maybe I was wrong about him maybe under that hard exterior I could find a sweet friend who would always have my back.

Also do tell me if I should actually continue on to the next part or not😊 hope you like it or love it but pls don't hate me its my first attempt😊

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Part 2

It seems drama never ends with Ragini in the house. She accused him of misbehaving with her. That's it. Not only did I not believe her also I was disgusted by her at that moment. How could she? I agreed that he was a bit intoxicated that evening but I trusted him more than myself. The entire time he was with me he never tried to make a move on me sometimes I wonder if he turned gay after Kavita passed away.

Then the family decided to get us married for real with all the rituals. We were reluctant, since only we knew the true extent of our relationship. But for Ragini it was just the opportunity she was waiting for. She kidnapped my mom and blackmailed us into the marriage. Sometimes I wondered if she was the same Ragini and how could she change so much.

Maybe it was fate that despite all our efforts to bring the truth in the open we failed. I remember how stupidly I had still made a last attempt at saying the truth. But alas in vain and the time Laksh realised it was too late.

Somewhere maybe I relied too much on my husband even when he asked me to lie I did without any second thought. I remember the awkwardness in the air in the farmhouse that night. His exact words "Don't worry Swara as soon as we reunite your parents we will file for divorce. Everything will be alright again. I'll make it right. You will be free again from all additional burdens I brought into your life. Maybe you can even get back with Laksh again? He will divorce her when he knows the truth. I'm sure of it."

" You really think so?" I asked unsure of the entire thing.

"Yeah, that's what you and Laksh deserve. You and he deserve happiness and trust and all things good. Not people like me" he had replied. I wanted to correct him then but enter we were interrupted by Laksh. Finally Lakshrealised the truth and decided to be a MAN and help us uncover the truth.

When Ragini finally revealed the truth I was happy in a way. My parents were reunited. I can be free of this marriage and go back home to my parents and lead my life peacefully. As I was packing my bags in our room I had asked him what he is going to do next and whether he'll miss me.

His eyes were misty when he replied that he'll always miss me no matter where or how he is. I was then confused by his words. He explained he'll always miss his friends. If only I had read his eyes like I know I can maybe we would've been together now already.

In those two months we spent together under one roof he never asked me for anything. Hence, when he asked for one hug for old times' sake I could not refuse. In that one hug I almost relived our entire journey till there.

Wierd. That's how I felt parting from him. When I was leaving the house it felt like I was leaving something behind. I turned back trying to think if I was forgetting something. I wished to see him one last time before leaving. But I couldn't he didn't come down to see me off. I was mad at him why wouldn't he see his friend off.

As soon as I got home I told him I was mad at him for the same reason. Unlike other times when he would try to pacify me console me he just sent me an message that read I won't be angry tomorrow and a smiley. I was confused.

Laksh came home the next day. He begged me to forgive him and I did forgive him. But then he said he wanted to get back with me as soon as he divorces Ragini. It did not feel right. I told him so he made me understand that may be I think so because I'm still married and that once we divorce it'll be normal.

Though I did not agree I did not protest. I saw someone enter Baadi. He looked sad I wondered why I wanted to take his pain away. But he didn't even look at me! How dare he. He walked straight towards me I tried to catch his eyes. I wanted to know how he was and did he sleep well last night. When he finally did look at me his eyes looked hollow and I wanted to know why. But before I could utter a word he cut me off.

"Take this I set you free" I was confused what he meant and before I could process what it meant he was out of the door. I ran behind him only to see his car pull out.

I unfolded the papers in my hand to see what was so important. As I read the papers I felt frozen in time. I was angry how dare he decide to divorce me. He didn't even ask me if that was what I wanted.

Looking at the papers I wondered why I felt so disappointed and let down. Maybe I expected him to understand my unsaid words too. But why did him not reading my unsaid words hurt? I went inside home only to be confronted by Laksh. I ignored him and for the first time I wanted him gone like he was suffocating me.

The questions kept badgering me a lot. But most importantly I wondered what these words that I expected him to understand were.

I knew he loved me his actions gave him away. At times I indirectly berated him for the same by reminding him of Kavita. I realise now that maybe somewhere in these months I had started to like him more than just a friend. Correction I think I started loving him as more than just a friend. Maybe it started out by loving his care, his trust and eventually his love. Yes I love his love for me so unconditional and even stupid for his this move of sending me divorce papers. I think I love him same way unconditionally but not stupidly. But I guess I was too late.

That leads me to where I am standing right now. Shattered, broken and alone. Should I sign the papers does he want to free him?

I know I don't want to either free him or be freed by him.

Afterall I'm in love with Sanskaar.

Get ready Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari you wouldn't know what hit you when I have my way with you.

The End

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Super...but I want to know what hit him ! What she has planned as a response to his divorce papers... Can you please please pleae create a 3rd shot ? This CANT end here !