SwaSan SS - Forever Yours! Part10 Pg47 04.01.16

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

So Sanskar will make swara jealous now..

Great you started back story of luck and ragini..

That's awesome...
But i think since sanskar was too Drunk he will not remember anything...

And swara would have fall in trap of Kavita and mystery man/women who wanted to separate SwaSan...

Poor SwaSan..
Were separate from each other becoz silly misunderstanding...

Thank you d for the PM...

Thank you😳
dont worry he will remember everything 😉

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: princess_tara
superb update

Thank you 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Hi Manasi...amazing update 😊 So Kavita spun an evil story to create insecurity in poor Swara's mind. 😕 feeling bad for both Swara and Sanskaar, being apart for so long, all over a misunderstanding caused by such a malicious person. Wondering who assisted her in this endeavor...😡

SwaSan moments were hawt 😳☺️

I liked RagYa here...all credit to you, I normally never like Lakshya 😊

Oh dear I hope Sansku does not trouble Swara too much with Myra in the next update. Poor girl already felt so insecure about his love for 5 years...now further jealousy might give her palpitations 😊. Even if she gets a little jealous I want Sunny boy to quickly tell her what she means to him. 😉

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chi1tra

@chi1tra

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Nice update Manasie, I see you are now connecting all the dots 😛

I see Mr.Sansku is going to exploit his PA, flirt with her and get to Swara's nerves in the annual day function 👏

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Nice update...make Swara & Sanskar meet soon...expose Kavita

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Very well written... Update soon

Edited by JADEKKD - 9 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Read all the chapter back to back..

Its a gripping story and the past present style is actually refreshing. Thanks Manasi for the PMs.😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Hi Manasi,

When I started reading this SS I had a theory of what might have happened. Then you started throwing unexpected details at me and made me swing on and off on that theory. Most of suspense stories don't do that to me, they're too predictable and here I have to admit I'm still floating in the sea👏👏

So I told you after the last update I don't know where this is heading, now I am back on my theory, I can guess where it might be heading, but I don't trust myself on that sense anymore. You have bewildered me successfully👏

Now coming to the update, ☺️ That was hawwttt!

I like the pinch of Ragya you throw in the middle, it kind of made the spicy SwaSan balance with sweetness😳

Then the present track is going to well that I have started to quote Sanskar 'the game is on' like whoo! You don't dare mess with this man, he'll reclaim his love at any cost.

Enjoyed a lot, please continue soon.

Thanks for the PM😊