SwaSan OS Dheere Dheere

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a beautiful evening. He was on his way to attend a meeting. His car stopped at a signal. He noticed a group of friends playing music and dancing. His eyes fell on her. She was playing guitar and was dancing. She made few funny steps which made him laugh. The signal turned green and the car started.


More than two weeks passed by but he didn't forget her. He went that side often to see her but she was not found.


"Har pal meri aaye yadaan

Yadaan vich ae tun
Dil di gal main dassa

Te dassa fir kinnu"


He was walking into his office when his fell on her. He enquired the receptionist as why she is here and came to know she is here to meet him. He asked his receptionist to send her first.


After few minutes, she entered his room. She looked lavishing in her black and red anarkali. He kept staring at her when she was talking about her concert. He noticed how her hairs were disturbing her and how she kept moving it back. He was enjoying her bangle sounds when she was waving her hands in air while talking.


"Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what do to
Jhoomun main nachun main gaaun
Ke likhun tere liye main kya karun"


"You should come and visit us someday" she said handing over the visiting card of her band .

She turned one last time before leaving and smiled at him. The next day he went there to see the band practising. She was enjoying the music playing her guitar . He kept watching her not knowing how long when someone patted on his shoulder. He was surprised to find her near him. She was all smiling again and he could not help but admire her.


"Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana"


She introduced all her friends to him. He spend a beautiful evening with them especially her. He left all happy. Sleep was at distance that night. He recalled the incidents that night and never know when he slept. A week passed by. They became good friends. He asked her to teach him how to play guitar. She asked him why he wanted to learn it.

"For a special person" he said. They meet regularly after that.


"Sham wahi, kaam wahi
Tere bina o sanam
Neend nahi, chain nahi
Tere bina o sanam"


One day he got ready to see her. He wanted to say her what she meant to him. He went to meet her but found her band had gone for a performance and that They will be back after a week.


"Teri meri story jaise
Big Bang Theory
Main sunaun chori-chori ye sab ko
Tu mujhse door main yahan pe majboor
Shikva karun main ye Rabb ko (Rabb ko..)..."


A day passed by and he missed her badly. He packed his bags. He left to the place where her band is performing. She saw him in the audience and smiled at him. When she was about to talk to him , a guy came inbetween hugging her. She introduced him as her boyfriend not looking into his eyes . He congratulated them and left without saying anything.


"Ek din tum bin beete lage saal
Mera hua bura haal
Mera hua bura haal
Haal kabhi apna mujhe to bataao na
Aur laut kar kabhi wapas mere paas aao na"


He went home recalling the incident. He didn't wish to see anyone after that. She called him but he didn't respond her. After a week, he meet a friend of her with her boyfriend. He was confused and went to them and got to know they broke up.

"Why?" he asked her friend.

"Because he is not her boyfriend" she said calmly.

"Then?" he asked shocked.

"He is my boyfriend" and he looked at her shocked.

"Then she?" he asked now confused.

"She loves someone else " she said .

"But why she did so?"

"Just to tease and make someone jealous. But that someone became Mahanata ki Moorti . Congratulated and left so soon. She planned something special for you but you" she said sarcastic.

He smiled through his tears. He smiled at his foolishness. He smiled that she is hers.

"Anything more" she asked him.

"Yes. Please do me a help"


"Sota hoon kabhi rota hoon
Tere bina o sanam
Paa kar sab kuch khota hoon
Tere bina o sanam"


She received a call and was informed that he met with an accident. she ran to his house. His house was completely dark. She shouted his name. Noone responded. She heard guitar music playing. She switched on the lights and turned to see him walking down the stairs playing guitar. He was completely fine. She looked at him shocked.


Her friends came with cake. She looked at everyone. He came near her and showed her a box. She looked at him confused. He asked her to open. She opened to find a ring inside. "Will you marry me?" he asked her smiling.


"Teri meri meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what do to
Jhoomu main nachun gaaun
Ke likhun main tere liye main kya karun"


She smiled with tears in his eyes.

"Is this yes or no?" he asked winking.

"Yes" she said finally and he pulled her into a hug. She hugged him happily.

He made her wear the ring and made her his finally.

"So the special person is me?" she asked him.

"No" he shouted and she moved from him. She looked at him questioningly.

"Then?" she asked

"I just used this to flatter you" he said in serious tone.

"Who is that special person then?" she asked with puppy face.

"There" he said pointing somewhere. She turned to find her reflection in mirror and she hit his chest playfully and hugged him again.

They cut the cake together with everyone clapping around them.


"Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar humein hai kitna jaan-e-jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana"


Hi guys..🤗 Do read and share your views... 😳


P.S : Will write Swara POV based on the response and suggestions... 😃😳

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iam-in-love thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
OS is jst awsm... U described a beautiful swasan os through a beautyful song. The song is really suited for the OS.
Swara too loved Sanskar . But she wanted to make him jealous & He misunderstood . But finally everything went fine & SwaSan together forever . Write more & PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os yaar. When he came to know that just to tease him he lied to her even my eyes filled with tears. Really really loved this. 👏 S pls do write more
Edited by gayu6 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
This was sooo cute... Do write Swara's pov too!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Awsm os..
Loved it !!
Great job !!
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Sweetest OS i have ever red👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
awesome really liked and it matched the situation and song perfectly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
awww this is d damn beautiful os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
What a cute lil OS!
Keep writing more :)
Thanks for the PM! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
This is amazing yar. Song selection is superb. What a story. Very beautiful. 👏⭐️

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