Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Shikha022

lol i completely forgt !!
sorry m gonna unres it soon !!😊

Originally posted by: Shikha022

lol i completely forgt !!
sorry m gonna unres it soon !!😊

Originally posted by: sanabmw

nice part..but abhi bhi story clear nahi hui hai...what sanskar do with swara...😕

part 4 :

loved ur update as always !!
every emotion n scene was very well described !!

laksh n ragini :
ragini i guess again playing her game !!
n laksh the idiot is getting trap !!
honestly m least bothered abt them !
hope they wont create ny problem for swasan !!
or r they the reason for their separation !!??

shomi n swara :
loved their convo..
the way swara letting out her insecurities n shomi confronted her..
n helped her was commendable !!
can feel their bond !!
n their convo was well described !!

swara n sanskar :
well we all can see that they both r not happy with their separation !
then y r they doing this..??
plus m really very very curious whats the reason behind their separation ??
why sanskar behaving like this !!??

overall i enjoyed my reading !!
wating this mystery to unfold !!
tc

part 5 :

wow !!
complete part is on swasan !!
loved ittt !!

out of words right now !!
m totally confuse n now this mystery is really making me more n more curious !!
what exactly happened between them ??]
n if laksh d idiot left her earlier then y he wants her now ??
u seriously know who to glue ur readers 😳

i love this convo

"Sanskaar, sab neeche dinner ke liye wait kar rahe hai tumhara. Chalo"

"mujhe bhukh nahi hai"

"Main tumhara intezaar kar rahi hun neeche."

so they r going to a party together..
thats gonna be fun !!
but one request plz try to unfold this mystery soon now !!

loved it how u described every single details !!
as always perfectly written !!
waiting for ur next update as always !!
tc

Originally posted by: Shikha022

part 4 :

loved ur update as always !!
every emotion n scene was very well described !!

laksh n ragini :
ragini i guess again playing her game !!
n laksh the idiot is getting trap !!
honestly m least bothered abt them !
hope they wont create ny problem for swasan !!
or r they the reason for their separation !!??

shomi n swara :
loved their convo..
the way swara letting out her insecurities n shomi confronted her..
n helped her was commendable !!
can feel their bond !!
n their convo was well described !!

swara n sanskar :
well we all can see that they both r not happy with their separation !
then y r they doing this..??
plus m really very very curious whats the reason behind their separation ??
why sanskar behaving like this !!??

overall i enjoyed my reading !!
wating this mystery to unfold !!
tc

Originally posted by: princess_tara

superb update
loved it

hey thnks😊

Originally posted by: Shikha022

part 5 :

wow !!
complete part is on swasan !!
loved ittt !!

out of words right now !!
m totally confuse n now this mystery is really making me more n more curious !!
what exactly happened between them ??]
n if laksh d idiot left her earlier then y he wants her now ??
u seriously know who to glue ur readers 😳

i love this convo

"Sanskaar, sab neeche dinner ke liye wait kar rahe hai tumhara. Chalo"

"mujhe bhukh nahi hai"

"Main tumhara intezaar kar rahi hun neeche."

so they r going to a party together..
thats gonna be fun !!
but one request plz try to unfold this mystery soon now !!

loved it how u described every single details !!
as always perfectly written !!
waiting for ur next update as always !!
tc

yaa...sure...as i said jst 2 or 3 updates more nd d story will reveal all past incidents..
till dn keep commenting..
tq

Nice and interesting update

Originally posted by: abika

loved it

thnks 😊