SwaSan OS- Tumhari Marzi!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Guys I am back with an OneShot... This scenario was just going on and on in the mind Toh I just decided to pen it down... And here's the result... It is short because its just one particular scene and sequence taking place in between Swara & Sanskaar. Please if you like it then 'Like' & comment ... Feedbacks are valuable.


This Is OS starts after Swara refuses to divorce Sanskaar and is back at MM

"Isn't this going overboard now, Swara?" Sanskaar was too tired for this new gameplay now. "I have to do this Sanskaar please you have to help me!" She pleaded . "Kis haq se Swara, Kis haq se tum yeh help maang rahi ho mujhse, because till I remember you severed the friendship between us that day in front of Laskhya".

Swara stiffened this was not the old Sanskaar who was ready to help her at any cost. "Sanskaar I did that because tumne meri marzi..." She was cut off mid sentence when Sanskaar grabbed her by her shoulder and pushed her back towards the cupboard the suddenness of the movement made her eyes become wide with Sanskaar looking into her eyes with an intense look and some emotion she didn't quite understand at the time.

"Marzi... Marzi ke baare me toh tum kuch na hi bolo toh aacha hai Swara... Kabhi tumne meri marzi jaan ne ki kosish ki... Firstly you became my friend- Tumhari marzi, then the whole fake marriage thing- Tumhari marzi, Then my loving you was a betrayal to our friendship- Tumhari marzi, Our real wedding- Tumhari marzi, Our Divorce- Tumhari marzi then breaking our friendship- again tumhari marzi and now not going ahead with the divorce for the sake of your sister's so called shaadi- TUMHARI MARZI..." he shouted angrily.

"Kya kabhi tumne yeh Jan ne ki koshish ki, ki mujhe kya chahiye... What do I want!" He finished his ranting and was having a hard time breathing because of saying all this in one breath. He could not believe he just said all those feeling out loud but those bottled up feelings were eating him out and he just had to get it off his chest... He whoshed out a breath of air and removed his hands off her shoulders realizing that this is going to be awkward.

He was just about to leave the room when Swara replied, " I am sorry Sanskaar mujhe nai pata that main tumpe booj hu but I am still sorry I cannot go ahead with our divorce... Please you have to understand I am doing all this to save my sisters marital life" she said while her tears off that had starting flowing during Sanskaar rant.

"You know what Swara, thik hai yeh tumhari marzi hai not to go ahead with the divorce but ek baat Gath bandh lo if and when you succeed in saving Ragini and Lakshya's wedding I will not go ahead with the divorce then... Yeh meri marzi hai. From where I see you have two options

1. Save Ragini's marital life and then you are stuck with me for life
2. Forget about Ragini and get your freedom back.
And he rushed out of the room before she could say anything.

Swara was numb she could not believe that Sanskaar could so cruel that life could cruel that one day she might have to choose between her freedom and her sister's happiness. She fell on her knees and starting crying loudly.

Outside Sanksaar was watching all this and tears started to flow from his eyes too. 'I am sorry Swara, I am sorry that I had to do this but I know if had to stay with you for another six months I would have fallen more in love with you and I am doing all this protect myself from further heartbreak, I am sorry' he wiped his tears and left from there.



-Manasi


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Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'll just say two words, 'Bang On!'
I could really see this happening in the show, obviously once in a while Sanskar will snap. You have caught the gist of his emotions perfectly. He's totally natural behaving in such a way. This is a marvelous creation. I love it!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

I'll just say two words, 'Bang On!'

I could really see this happening in the show, obviously once in a while Sanskar will snap. You have caught the gist of his emotions perfectly. He's totally natural behaving in such a way. This is a marvelous creation. I love it!!!



Tysm Sakura... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome manasie.. Do write more.. I really wanted this to happen on show.. you are so right.. All are swara's marzi just like you said.. well written... 👏
I felt bad for sanky... If possible write part 2 where swara talks and confesses to him... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...sandy...

<font size="2">Awesome manasie.. Do write more.. I really wanted this to happen on show.. you are so right.. All are swara's marzi just like you said.. well written... 👏</font>

<font size="2">I felt bad for sanky...If possible write part 2 where swara talks and confesses to him...😃</font>



Thank you! 😳I dint write a Swara confession thing because this is just a path where one day Swara might fall in love with sanky Abhi filhal toh she is in mahanta mode and not ready for any kind of feelings
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautifully written os mansie
loved the way ne vented out his feelings
loved it so much dear
n if possible plzz continue it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

beautifully written os mansie

loved the way ne vented out his feelings
loved it so much dear
n if possible plzz continue it



Thank you so much Sonal 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow what an OS👏👏
awesome yaar,hats of to u ,loved ur work ,so much👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wow I just want the same replica of sanskar in show but I know it won't happen...
Mind blowing update...
Plz plz do write after their six months. ..
Will love to read...
If ur updating any of the swasan stories plz do pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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