The Ice King SwaSan SS Complete

manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

As much as reading about Lakshya's pov irks me... Sanskaar in this part was ❤️
I am waiting for him to realise his mistake and start repenting... hope it happens soon

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Everybody is burning in name of love.
Here also lux is not that bright. No wonder he is easily manipulated.
So sanskar finally understands what swara is for him. Looking forward to see what the next development will be

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abika

@abika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Intresting
Hope sanskar realize before its too late

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Heartbreaking but very effective- the writer in me rejoices but the reader cries! Nicely done Saku. I loved the imagery of Sanskaar's dream. Lakshya is so dumb and Ragini as we expect her. Sanskaar- you are seriously going to suffer in all this the worst as you are torn in two halves here 😭.

Again, it's coming along so nicely Saku x

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: rerose
Sakura,it was just brilliant ,I just loved all the parts,interesting twists,awesome yaar👏👏👏
Pls do continue soon😃

Thank you😊 I'll continue soon😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: dimaag
Hey sakura ! 😛 you have clearly expressed that inner thirst for love of laksh from swara and how he fears of losing her again. That feeling of being a secondary element and not the first one for swara and off course how can I forget the blaming part of ragini was particularly good in this os than that of the show we watch.
Loved the way sanskar is hurt by hurting swara and is himself sorry too for that.
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So awesome chapter once again sakura dear 😉
Thanks for the pm. 😆

Thanks😃 I'm glad you liked Laksh's inner feelings, had to give this guy a reason for being a nutter

I'll update soon.

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Nice..
Ragini stoping games...

sanksar dream sequence was scary..
As usual lucky misunderstood his lady love...

Nice update..
Continue soonn

Thanks you😊 I'll update soon😛

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: manasie23
As much as reading about Lakshya's pov irks me... Sanskaar in this part was ❤️
I am waiting for him to realise his mistake and start repenting... hope it happens soon

I'm glad you didn't let Lucky spoil your mood😛 Sanskar, will realize soon. Thanks😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: swa291
Everybody is burning in name of love.
Here also lux is not that bright. No wonder he is easily manipulated.
So sanskar finally understands what swara is for him. Looking forward to see what the next development will be

THanks😊

The whole point of Lakshya is that he is not as smart as sanskar is, anyway the next development is a scary one...I'll be updating soon😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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